Date: 03/22/17 02:38 am Title: See The World Behind My Wall...
I really liked this story. It was quick and to the point but very enjoyable. I admit the ending was a bit tricky to understand but after reading the other reviews it makes more sense now. Very well written too. :)
Date: 10/06/15 02:19 am Title: And There Will Be No Tenderness...
Great Story. Dont Unterstand the Ending though :)
Date: 07/21/14 05:59 pm Title: And There Will Be No Tenderness...
Bill and Tom found Dresden's secret out. She learned a lesson (I guess?) and Bill no longer has to have sex with a woman who is not attracted to him.
Author's Response: Pretty much: I explained it more clearly in my previous reviews
Date: 06/30/14 07:01 am Title: And There Will Be No Tenderness...
Wait wait I don't get it D: ok so this test was to see whom she had the hots for right? Tom noticed/felt it was for him. And now she knows that Tom was the one for her, and Tom classified her to Bill as another girl who just wanted him or just sex as to not hurt his bros feelings? Sooo confused :( and the last part "She shivered and looked out the window at the darkness, believing it to be an apt description of where she would now be." the darkness? in her life will be dark from now on because I am guessing she just lost Bill and Tom surely doesn't care about her or holds any feelings for her. Am I right? But it seems like she holds some feelings for him..you have to tell me or I will forever be confused :,(
Author's Response: The whole idea was that she truly loved Bill but had no real sexual feelings for him, where as with Tom- she had a real sexual attraction but didn't love him... It was a double edged sword. There would always be something she couldn't she couldn't have whether it was love or sexual fulfillment. She was telling Bill the truth when she said that she loved him and not his brother; and she figured that by doing this she would get what she wanted: a relationship with Bill and a one night stand with Tom, afterward they would go on with their olives and her itch would be scratched. But it didn't turn out that way: Tom saw what she really felt and saw the need to humiliate her. Bill realized that Tom would only do that if he had a good reason, and with Tom saying that she was just another one he was basically telling his twin that there are millions of other girls out there. As for "the darkness", you are right: Bill realizes there is something off and chooses not to deepen wounds so he leaves her there, Tom doesn't care about her so now she is on her own. She played with fire and thought she could manipulate the twins, but in the end she was the one who got played and she lost the both of them for it...
Date: 02/06/14 11:46 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
Ma'am... I would greatly love if you post the next chapter up lol. This my second time reading this and the suspense still doesn't do me any good lol
Author's Response: Im sorry! Ive kinda put ths one on the backburner for now. Im graduating later this year and am also currently working full time so writing isnt my biggest priority at the moment- and if i do have some spare time, i usually spend it working on my othr story. Hopefully i will finish this one when and/or if my inspiration decides to come back
Date: 11/07/13 01:14 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
awesome
Author's Response: thank you so much :-)
Date: 10/20/13 01:29 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
Nexttt pleasee its awsome
Author's Response: Patience ;-)
Date: 10/12/13 08:25 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
Oh gosh I need more!
Author's Response: ;-) good things come for those who wait...
Date: 10/01/13 05:47 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
This had me ont he edge of my seat. I cant wait for the finale :)
Author's Response: it's a comin ;-)
Date: 09/29/13 06:43 pm Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
NEXT CHAP, NEXT CHAP!!!! I wanna know her secret kink eerr whatever...
Author's Response: maybe you'll find out, maybe you won't ;-)
Date: 09/28/13 08:49 am Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
OOOOH COME OOON!!!!!!! You stop there!! THERE!! When will we get the last chapter!! D,: i need to know what happens next and I can't believe you are taking over a year to finish 4 chapters D: when will the next one be coming???? Poor bastards I wonder whats Dresdens secrets dont tell me she fantasizes about Tom when she plays with herself maybe thats what she didnt wanna say or did and maybe i didnt catch it hmm or maybe she aches for a 3some hmmm..my mind is sick indeed :P UPDATEEE
Author's Response: the reason i took so long to finish this chapter was because i actually didn't have a computer of my own for a very long time (and i'm not about to write something like this on my mothers!!!) and i recently graduated plus i'm working full time right now, so i'm trying to get this wrapped up as quickly as i can.. I'm Sorry :-(
Date: 09/28/13 08:42 am Title: How Did We Get Here? I Used To Know You So Well...
omg when he asked her whoa re we hurting? i thought she would turn around and tell him ever so emotionally..you..you.. you are hurting me... awww but omg i cant believe she agreed!
Author's Response: you know i can't resist a little dominance subplay ;-)
Date: 09/28/13 08:32 am Title: See The World Behind My Wall...
omg O_O this is so sick and wrong ( i know youre probably like YOU think this is sick wait till you read the slash thats around here) :P and im scared tbh with you :P
Author's Response: don't worry, honey- it doesn't get any darker: i just wanted to portray a momentary loss of control for Tom :-) believe me the next chapter will be MUCH better...well, as much better as it can get in my sick mind
Date: 09/28/13 12:28 am Title: Breathe, Slowly In And Out
Was very excited to see your update can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: thanks! im currently trying to wrap it up as cleanly as i can, but i've been working on this story for so long it's a bit difficult to really finish it :-)
Date: 09/25/12 03:21 pm Title: How Did We Get Here? I Used To Know You So Well...
Is she crazy??? Saying no to Kaulitz mass orgies? She is crazy? :D
I'm sorry it has been takng me some time to get back to you, but I've read this chapter already in my email and I'll ghet back to you within couple of days for more precise review, okay? but I must say that I like the way yopu build the background story here. It's not so typical and it shows lot of twinsä special relationship. :)
Author's Response: thank you, so much!!! i love twincest but i can't write it to save my life, so i figured i could make a sort of emotional 'threesome' if you will out of the twins relationship...not so sure how it's going to end up yet, though! XD
Date: 09/21/12 11:06 am Title: How Did We Get Here? I Used To Know You So Well...
In the heated moment and in the words of Britney Spears I say: Gimme more!!
My word I would love to see how this pans out! She is a smart cookei with her conditions too. Smart woman!
Author's Response: Oh believe me; there is QUITE a bit more to come... ;-)
Date: 09/20/12 11:15 pm Title: How Did We Get Here? I Used To Know You So Well...
I fucking love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gahhhhh. I feel like they would do shit like this to test
Author's Response: exactly why i chose to do this ;-D thank for your review, hun!!!!!!
Date: 09/19/12 06:56 pm Title: See The World Behind My Wall...
Oh, you've posted this now? Great! :)
And you're welcome.
I'm curious to se where you're taking this. :)
Author's Response: XD i just sent you the next chapter so you can see
Date: 09/17/12 08:50 pm Title: See The World Behind My Wall...
Ohhhhhh my god u cannot stop there
Author's Response: don't worry love, the next chapter is coming ;-D
Date: 09/16/12 03:10 am Title: See The World Behind My Wall...
Oh oh oh oh ;-)
Author's Response: Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes XD