Date: 07/13/13 05:53 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
I like this story, there doesn't always need to be a plot. David playing daddy to the twins is enough plot for me. I would like to see more on this when you are ready. good write...props for you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 07/11/13 03:53 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
I think it's a beautiful way to end the story! And I, for one, am obviously not that terribly plot-motivated myself. I think this "last chapter" was sweet (emotional -and physical- fulfillment for both twins) and very sweetly dirty. I love love love how there was no ick factor in this, just very nice perversions with everyone satisfied with the outcome (in-come?). It's so lovely how you do that.
Author's Response: :D Every single one of your reviews is always a little stroke to my ego. I love it. I'm glad you enjoyed this :D
Date: 07/10/13 09:13 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
Oh, please do write more! You know how much I'm currently sucker for this kind of roleplay. It was so... damn... cute. Okay, I said it: cure. :D The dynamics here is great and this fic is always relevant on satisfying the needs of smt fun and naughty.
Author's Response: I'll keep it alive just for you, I promise! I like having this fic where it is right now: somewhat finished, but extremely open and pliable for anything i want to turn it into. It's my little pet at the moment.
Date: 07/10/13 06:52 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
My name is TuesdayReyn. And I am an addict. I am addicted to reading the strange things posted online by someone called shitpisscatfuck.
Author's Response: Hi, TuesdayReyn. You know, Step 1 is always admitting your problem. But, in my eyes, this addiction of yours clearly isn't a problem. It's flattering.
Date: 07/10/13 12:29 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
good chapter :) Yes indeed. Very well written and hot. I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, I have no idea when a next chapter might be posted...
Date: 07/10/13 12:13 pm Title: The Time Bill Got Filled Up
Awh xD it's so cute! Thnx for the update (:
Author's Response: Cute is definitely one word for this kind of story ;)
Date: 05/27/13 04:29 pm Title: The Time Bill Felt Secure
I think the questions asked were all right and real. I think only way is to keep exploring. Bill would never abandon Tom, but he also needs his daddy. Hot and also cute to see them acting like this. :)
Author's Response: Your approval/enjoyment means the world to me :D So glad I can write something that you enjoy.
Date: 05/26/13 12:46 pm Title: Prologue
Honestly, when I began reading this, I was a bit freaked out. The fact that I continued to read it made me question my mental stability. But I just couldn't stop. And as long as you continue writing it, I am going to keep reading it. I also didn't want to find it cute, but in a weird way it is very cute. As far as how to continue, Tom had always had to be stronger than Bill. So even if he has some of the same Daddy issues as Bill he's never been able to express those. Maybe he's found an outlet to express those? And maybe the twins will be a little jealous of each other and fight a bit for David's attention? I don't know... Just my own screwed up ideas. Please see the fic through to the end.
Author's Response: I've gotten quite a few reviews like this one these past few days, people saying they didn't WANT to enjoy it but they did anyways. I'm glad that it works out that way :D And thanks for your suggestions! I think you're right, about Tom always being the strong one and the twins becoming jealous. I promise that I'll finish this fic... it just might take a while.
Date: 05/23/13 01:39 pm Title: The Time Bill Felt Secure
After your response to my last review, I tried to send an email msg via THF but I think you've changed your email. I was rejected. After crying while eating 3 bowls of coco puffs, the pain of rejection had turned to numbness. Now, I'm completely over it for the most part. Anyway, you were right on all your points. As for being plotless, I think you should let this story meander. It reminds me a touch of Gaja's No Means Yes (I do hope you've read it!) in the sense that these are almost like linked one-shots. Without a plot weighing it down, you can take it anywhere with each individual chapter, and even deviate completely if you wanted, or add a plot later and this can turn absolutely epic. It's very playful as it is for something that could/should/might be a damned serious and complex topic, but that's what makes it so beautiful. Love the dedication! We should set up small shrines to one another. I'll get started write now!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for unintentionally rejecting you and thus causing such deep wounds that could only be healed by the tender loving of coco puffs. (Fun fact: I've never had coco puffs before.) But at the same time, I'm glad (though possibly slightly offended?) that you were able to get over it so quickly. rnrnThe fact that you would even compare one of my stories to No Means Yes in even the slightest way makes me so happy. I LOVE that story. As for the plot, I think I like how it is now... just the tiniest touch of a plot peaking through, but if I completely abandon that line of thinking then I don't think it'd be the end of the world. Though, if you have more thoughts, I did tweet you with my email address where you can reach me.rnrnI will definitely set up a small shrine to you. In fact, next semester the apartment I'm living in has a built-in shrine type area on the wall as soon as you walk in through the front door and my roommates and I have all debated what to do with it (one of them being my friend with whom I discuss Karmic Lessons on a weekly basis via Skype ;)) and I think a portion of this shrine should definitely belong to you.
Date: 05/22/13 09:30 am Title: The Time Bill Felt Secure
Loved it! And Uhm I don't really know how to continue with the story, but maybe that Tom, too, treats Bill like David does? Maybe not right away, but after a little while.. And that Bill gets even more in the role of acting different. X
Date: 05/22/13 04:21 am Title: Prologue
don't worry; it's not your fault, I'm easily confused...perhaps I will understand when you continue in the next chapter
Date: 05/21/13 09:47 am Title: The Time Bill Felt Secure
Im a bit confused by this scene; the last chapter made it seem clear- but this new setup really threw me off...
Author's Response: Gaaahhh I'm sorry if it was confusing >_< Maybe it's because the characters themselves are still confused? Or more likely, I didn't explain clearly enough... Hopefully things will get clearly/more definitive in the next chapters. I'm sorry.
Date: 04/14/13 05:29 pm Title: The Time Bill had to Share
*squeal* Next chapter, please? ;D
Date: 03/03/13 02:20 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Pacified
Life is wierd
Date: 03/03/13 02:20 pm Title: The Time Bill had to Share
I think I am hiiiiigggghh
Date: 02/26/13 02:53 am Title: The Time Bill had to Share
Read this last week and I apologize for being tardy in my review. Why are there only 71? You know, I've been on this site for a couple years now, and it seems to me things have slowed down considerably. Which is a shame, because more people need to read this story. Speaking of shame, I saw your response to a review by Amdee (love her stories too!) - I agree, we should not be ashamed of our fairly harmless darker sides - dark, sick, twisted fantasies? Goooood. Making them reality? Not always so much. This chapter was delicious, mouthwatering, beautiful. Again and again, you take those filthy things and make them so pretty. You twist a story of depravity and sexual ...WRONGNESS into something warm and loving and perfectly twinged with perversion for that yummy happy tummy feel. I love infantile Bill! And Dave, yes, he is one lucky man, having those two young faces staring up at him, one covered in his jizz. How sweet is that! Oh, and I saw your newest story and I'm sooo curious about it, but haven't had quiet time to read it yet, dammit. Maybe I should start going to church, I could probably read there.
Author's Response: No need to apologize! I'm glad you had it in mind to come back and review after having read it. Honestly, the fact that this story even has 71 (now 72, I think) reviews in a miracle in my mind. When I first started writing this, I thought, "No one's going to want to read the sick shit that goes on in my head," and up until that point, I had only ever really written crack/humor and nothing like this, really. I've only been on this site a little over a year as a read and even less time as a writer, but I can see what you're saying. I joined this site because of a friend of mine, and she used to be really popular on here, but now she never writes anything anymore and it makes me sad, both for her and for the site. I love Amdee and well. And I agree. I mean, obviously, I have this mind swirling full of sick, twisted fantasies of boys (cause what else would a 20-year-old guy have in his head?) but being a good little Catholic boy, I can't act on them, so this is my loophole ;P I kid, I kid. I think I've told you before about how writing this kind of stuff is like my own personal form of therapy. Unlike parents who tried to get Harry Potter banned from shelves, or people who say that 50 Shades of Grey will influence young women to have no respect for themselves, I believe there's no harm in fiction. But I agree, making it a reality... not always so harmless.rnrnAnywho, I'm glad you liked this chapter :D I'm glad you found it to be "mouthwatering" because Tom definitely did ;) I feel like I'm walking a wobbly line with this one, that could easily slip into a "non-con/rape" category quickly if there's a lack of clarity. My intention is for this to be completely consensual for both (or, well, now I guess all three) parties, even though "legally" it may be illegal (I never nailed down an actual age for the twins in this story, but in my mind they aren't 18 yet. Maybe more like 16/17. My plan is for David and Bill and Tom's relationship to span even further than just inside the bedroom (as was displayed by Bill on stage and such) and this whole "game" that they're playing to weave itself into their daily lives, not just a part of them, but then there's a sticky issue of [some people thinking that] TECHNICALLY there should be explicit permission given. But let's face it: [at least for me] stopping everything you're doing to have a serious moment and say, "yes, I want this" isn't always the sexiest thing (especially in a fic) I don't even know what I'm saying anymore.. or why I even brought this up... Oh well. Sorry about that.rnrnSpeaking of going to church to read, I can't say that I'm not upset with you :P Rather than having a beautiful mental image of Andrej seizing after Tom just fucked him for the first time (btw, you'll be getting a review from me soon) while I was sitting in church, I had nothing to distract me and was forced to actually pay attention and hear all about Jesus and his Transfiguration. Oh well, it's Lent, I guess I should be making some extra sacrifices ;) I'm sure that's what you had in mind, right? Just thought to yourself, "I'll just hold back a few hours on this one. Wouldn't want shitpisscatfuck to be spoiled during Lent." If so, then thank you for your consideration.
Date: 02/23/13 09:17 pm Title: The Time Bill had to Share
This is so dirty, OMG, and I love it!" Though I am pretty ashamed to admit it.
I absolutely love needy Tom and their twincesty affection even when sucking David was absolutely adorable. :)
Author's Response: Don't be ashamed to admit that you enjoy the dirt. I need to have readers like you who aren't ashamed to admit that they like it to give me the courage to keep on writing it. There's people on this site that know me in real life who could start judging me at any second :P I love needy Tom too lol Something about the two of them sucking him at once... damn. I'd love to be in David's position.
Date: 02/23/13 03:41 am Title: The Time Bill had to Share
I loved it! Please continue soon? X
Author's Response: There should be more soon :D
Date: 02/20/13 02:41 pm Title: The Time Bill had to Share
Wow. Woooooow.
Author's Response: Good wow? Bad wow?
Date: 02/20/13 03:58 am Title: The Time Bill Got His Twin Back
Please continue! Thus is amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've been working on the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be up soon, as long as school doesn't kill me first.