Date: 08/15/14 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
WHY haven't you continued this? It could be a hit! Please keep going, I'm already loving this!
Date: 07/15/12 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Looks like my story... I wrote called "I wish..." with how I wrote the part with Jorg raping Bill. I'm going to report this story as this is like copying Chapter two of "I wish..."
Author's Response: I'm very sorry if this sounds like 'I wish' but I have never read nor seen that story. I wouldn't copy any part of any story and I apologize again if it is like the 2nd chapter of that story but I did not copy it, I have never read it.
Date: 07/14/12 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't imagine how the twins are going to escape when Jorg has them locked up all the time. I guess they don't attend school or anything so they could run away then. Jorg is such a fucking monster, raping both of his boys. I really hate him, which means you've written the character really well. Can't wait to see if the twins get away and what they'll do to survive once they're out.
Author's Response: Aha I have plans for that don't you worry, there is going to be a lot of scheming on the twins part for how they will get out. Wow, you really think I have written it well?? Thank you, your comments mean a lot :D More should be up really soon.
Date: 07/10/12 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is sooo interesting in most of the abuse tom/bill fics its only one of the twins i cant wait to see how this developes ^^ MORE PLEASE ^^
Author's Response: Haha thank you ^_^ I thought that too and I have written one where only one twin gets abused and I wanted to try it with both of them. The next chapter should be up really soon, just need to finish and edit it, won take too long :)
Date: 07/08/12 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm....interesting. Yet very well written. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Ahh thanks so mich :) the next chapter is up now! :D
Date: 07/07/12 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Its good u should continue:):-D
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm writing the next chapter and it will hopefully be up shortly
Date: 07/07/12 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, God, poor Tom. Taking all those beatings to protect Bill. This was hard to read because it was so realistic, but extremely well written. I'm hoping that the twins escape soon and that Jorg eventually gets a taste of his own medicine. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I hopefully they will get away but there are a few things that are going to happen first. Thank you again.