Date: 10/19/12 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hello :-) you MUST update this, it's extremely interesting and really good, please!?
Date: 07/27/12 12:11 am Title: Chapter 5
O.o Wow, what kind of explosive is that to be so powerful! So, Bu and crew are on a suicide mission. :(
Bill's attitude was great! I liked seeing his spark... and it was so cute that he raised his hand, and later made comments about bags of dicks.
Group dynamics and group culture are so interesting. People in groups are different than when alone. It's interesting to read about your little rag-tag group of people fighting for survival. :)
Date: 07/23/12 08:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow thank you! Bill is really scared of losing Anis, right? I also think Bill would be "almost" happy only with Tom and Bu by his side and not a bunch of annoying people around haha.
Date: 07/22/12 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really good. I love Anis the leader, he's like Bill's hero now. I like the fact that you don't rush the need and growing attraction between those two. I think they are containing their feelings lol. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Lol, Bill needs a hero, some one other than Tom, yea? So that works. As for rushing it, they're not sluts, come on, lets take our time, who has time to think about a hot guy when there's giant bugs with acid for blood out to get you? Haha, thank you SO much for reading!
Date: 07/22/12 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can understand if they all feel a little sick and afraid and don't know how the HELL they will survive after Bushidos telling... even if honest, it might have put a damper on their mood. It is good to be honest though, and one can hope it helps them survive. I hope most of them do, even if I get a feeling a few wont. I hope the twins will, both of them. Tom is awesome, I love how Bushido sees right through him. And Bill... Fallen, have we dear boy? ;-) This is very well written, and seriously a joy to read! :-D I'll be waiting for the next part then! ;-)
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you so much. b29; I'm not letting out ANY spoilers, missy. ;)
Date: 07/22/12 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great creature-feature. When I saw the summary and banner I wondered if you were going to go classic and you did. Love the acidic green blood and the inclusion of military expertise, which is very retro, but the way you write it is modern and doesn't feel predictable.
This story is already so edgy and fun, I'm sure the rest will be exciting!
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much, I tried to twist up the story a little to make it so you just didn't know what was going to happen next. I was a little edgy on the fact I was writing it in a way I've never written a story before, the point of view so solely from one person, or, at least, based on. It's just completely new for me. So it's good to hear that it's working well. Thank you very much for reading!
Date: 07/22/12 01:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Haha Pokemon! XD Bill is cute in mentioning them! :3 Protective big brother Tom, I like!
Author's Response: Haha yes, I have a thing for protective Tom too ;) And I'm very glad you enjoyed the bit about the Pokemon, thanks for reading! <3
Date: 07/22/12 12:29 am Title: Chapter 4
Pokemon! That was cute.
I liked learning more about the creatures. It was also nice how you broke up the information with little funny quips from people, and little details like how Sido does things with his hands. Bushido's belief that inaction is pointless, and that life should be taken by the reins... that's really inspiring. He's strong-willed to have that belief despite all the chances against them. If anyone could keep them alive, it'd be Bu. :)
Author's Response: I'm /really/ glad that you liked it. I'm ALL for little details, my dear. And as for Bushido being the only one to get them out alive, you know you can always count on Bu to be the tough guy! Haha. Thank you so much for reading. <3
Date: 07/11/12 03:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm loving this story, I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you, I posted a chapter today, so I hope you enjoy it. :)
Date: 06/14/12 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
I need this updated, please!? I'm all into Billshido, I love them!
Author's Response: Haha, I will do my best, I'm almost done the next chapter, but I was on holiday for a week so i had no time. Thanks for reading honey.
Date: 05/27/12 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
A very good chapter... yet again. :-) And poor guys, they can't even go out hunting before one of them aliens burst through the trees... *grin* I love the interactions between Bushido and the twins. I wonder how much Bushido's men have figured out what is going... they should know him very well. :-) I just feel that Tom needs someone to. And there is some really nice guys in Bushido's gang there, so... ;-) Tom, my dear... Take a pick! It would help with your bitchiness, I believe! *lol*
Author's Response: LOL! I love you. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. <3
Date: 05/27/12 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
They can't even go hunt food without fighting for their lives, jeez. I really like the detail and all the stuff happening on in the action scenes. Everybody's dialogue is really engaging and gritty too! They all talk so rough~
Author's Response: Haha they do a bit, that's probably my fault lol. I'm as tough as stone. I'm really glad you're enjoying this. We're currently working on the next chapter which has more interaction with Bushido and Bill and a lot of the other characters. :)
Date: 05/27/12 04:00 am Title: Chapter 3
Awsome story! Will be tracking :)
Author's Response: Thank you honey! b29;
Date: 05/25/12 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey babydoll, this is a message from yourself. You're doing well, keep up the good work and PLEASE put down the twincest and keep writing! We're all looking forward to see what you do next and can't wait for the real action to start.
P.s-I kind of think Bushido should have Tom too, Bushido can really help him take that stick out of his ass-and replace it with something a lot more satisfying. If you know what I mean? ;)
Date: 05/21/12 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, reading this is like watching a movie. I read books like this, like I buy and read stories like this. Very stellar writing! It sucks you in and makes you feel the danger, hardship, and desperation to survive.
I like the depiction of Bill too. They're in a jungle, right? Maybe Bill can be a wild delicate orchid or something! XD And Bushido can be a big tough tree. Bill and Bushido interacting is cute to read, especially from war-hardened Bushido's perspective.
Author's Response: -blush!- Omg! Thank you sooo much, you won't believe how I worry about my writing skills, everyone says they're good and even Beccy whom I plot and character build with says I'm brilliant and I never believe her (And she's my best friend!). Haha. Thank you very much for reading! Bushido's a big angry tree all right. His BARK'S worse than his bite, though. HAHAA.
Date: 05/21/12 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant chapter. :-) I like Bushidos no nonsense attitude, but then agin... He probably had to develop that to survive. Bill will to, I suspect. :-) There is a lot of chemistry going on all over the place and it is quite amusing to read. And then some action in the midst, that I really loved reading! Awesome work!
Author's Response: I loooove you! Thank you so much sugar, you know it means a lot that you're reading. b29;
Date: 05/21/12 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ok I love this! It's nice and... I'm excited!!! I just hope Bill and Tom don't get hurt by a creature...:-*
Author's Response: Thank you /so/ much, it means a lot to us. And if I told you that I'd be giving you spoilers, and that's just not fair or exciting. ;) <3
Date: 05/20/12 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
What a capturing introduction to a story! I'm hooked already. I love sci-fi stories like this! :D
Author's Response: BEST review so far! Thank you SO much, I look forward to reading your reviews. I'm hoping to have another chapter up today. A little sick right now, though so my writing is slow. Haha.
Date: 05/18/12 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ummm, interesting and I want to know more about the creatures, Bushido and Bill... oh I also want to know how Bill looks, I don't want him all muscular and silver short hair please!
Author's Response: More information will be in the next chapter, this was just a basic introduction and bill isn't an older/muscular Bill, so don't worry. ;)
Date: 05/17/12 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
VERY interesting beginning... Smart making Bill a model. It fits him. ;-) Might get troublesome in the jungle though.... *grins* Bushido was really awesome in this. Will definitely look forward to reading more of this story. :-)
Author's Response: b29; Bushido is gunna be one badass sonofbitch. LOL! I love you!