Date: 05/14/14 06:02 am Title: Bushido or Meghan
It was fantastic btw dose Annalise have a crush on Bill? Lol.... and poor bill being treated to being sent to adam he really seems to fear him btw I cant remember if you mentioned him before and if so I'm to lazy to read back and find out and did I just see that the notice peeps on gonna finally show up I got way to excited when I read that :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Rosa! I'm sorry I'm late in seeing this. xD Also, Annalise doesn't have a crush on him, although that's a really adorable thought. xD Their relationship is more of a brother-sister sort of thing, with Kaulitz being kind of like an older brother figure to her (even though she's older than him). It's interesting. Also, I haven't mentioned Adam yet so far, so don't worry about that. And yes, Notice will be coming to play soon enough!
Date: 09/25/13 05:24 am Title: Foe or Friend
Oh Bill has a friend! Kind of. Ish...And I know he finds October annoying because she's one of those irritatingly positive people, but at least she has a good heart. And I think that, despite Bill's attitude towards her, she is still a good influence on him in a naive, albeit annoying, way. She stops him from being alone, and as much as he thinks he should be alone, he secretly yearns for some form of company. Will Tom ever show up, by the way? I'm just curious.
Author's Response: Hi there! Wow, you had a lot to say XD That's awesome. Yeah, this will hopefully lead to a nice friendship between both him and October and him and Annalise. Like you said, he really does need them, and I completely agree with you about October. I didn't even think of how much of a good influence she would be for him when I created her character, so you've effectively shown me a different side of things! Oh, and for your concern about Tom, I'm assuming you mean from Notice? If not, then ignore everything from here on out. If you are referring to that story, then yes, he will make an appearance. In fact, Duplicity catches up to Notice eventually (give it about 10 or so more chapters at most), so you will be able to see everything from his point of view and so on. Thanks so much for your review! :)
Date: 09/21/13 04:18 am Title: Boyfriend or Girlfriend
The read was wonderful im starting to like this story more and more after each chapter I read. At first ill be honest with you I wasn't quite feeling the story but now that I read more and getting more into it Im really really starting to love this story. The whole thing with josh is pretty amusing jealous boyfriend silly High School boys lol. The thing with Bill and he thinking hes better than people even in his situation is very interesting to read is it reflex to protect himself or is that just his mindset/how he is?
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for your feedback. :) I'm very very happy to hear that you're enjoying it more now. I completely understand and appreciate your honesty about how you felt about it at first, so don't worry about that. Also, you'll get to see more of jealous Josh soon enough! His superiority complex is something that's just him, although the fact that he uses it to push everyone away from him is because he wants to protect others; not himself. This is because of his situation; he doesn't want to get anyone dragged into it just because he wants friends (of course, he won't ever admit to this XD). I hope this explains it a little bit more for you, and if you have anymore questions, please feel free to ask! :)
Date: 09/20/13 10:46 am Title: Boyfriend or Girlfriend
DO you write more?
Author's Response: Yes. The next chapter is already completed, however Sarah, who helps me with ideas and does the proofreading for me, has been busy the past week. Once she's free, I'm sure she'll get to it and have it finished as soon as possible, so please be patient. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/11/13 05:27 am Title: Boyfriend or Girlfriend
I really love this story, and I have absolutely no idea where it's going...which isn't a good or a bad thing, just a "I can't predict anything" kind of thing. I hope someone can come in and save him soon - the poor thing!
Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! Now to respond! lol. I'm going to take the fact that you're not sure where the story is going as a good thing since I personally prefer when it's a mystery. However, keeping it like that for too long would scare people away, so don't fret! Things will become clearer soon enough, and perhaps a "hero" of some sort will be there too. Either way, I will do my best to have the next chapter out soon, so please stick around! :)
Date: 09/07/13 05:34 am Title: Used or Needed
I like the Story so far. I hope you continue. I realy want to read the next!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. :) I'll get the next chapter out as soon as possible. It's been finished for a while now actually, but we haven't had a chance to go through and proofread it and so on. It'll be up soon, though, I promise!
Date: 08/26/13 10:01 pm Title: Used or Needed
It was great,glad you finally updated now on to your other story that im more than excited to read :D
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm sure Sarah will be more than excited to see your feedback on Notice!
Date: 08/25/13 11:05 am Title: Prologue
I just noticed. Your summary has words from black veil brides song coffin. #supercool
Author's Response: Does it? I actually don't remember that; Rainii93 got those lyrics together for me, and I can't remember which songs they're from. xD But that's awesome that you recognized them!
Date: 08/25/13 05:50 am Title: Used or Needed
I really love this story so far! I actually just read all of it in the past, oh, 30 minutes? I might go back and review the other chapters as well, but it's late so I'm settling for one review on the last one first. I have a sneaking suspicion that I did read the first few chapters a long time ago, but I liked it then as well. I'm so glad you updated!
Now onto the story, I hope that some aspect of Bill's life will start to look up when he attends the new school. Marina is a really interesting character, and I agree with Bill that she must be a bit nutty. But at least she's sweet, if not oblivious and naive. This is really interesting and so well written. Summary: I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so happy that you've enjoyed it thus far. I hope the older chapters aren't too different; it's been a year since I've last written anything for this story, so my writing might be a little inconsistent, but I'm sure it won't matter in the end. :) I'm looking forward to more of your feedback! As for his life, you'll have to see what happens when he goes to the new school. Marina's a very sweet character, although yes, she's quite a nutjob, but I promise you'll get to see more of her as the story progresses. Again, thank you so so much for reviewing! I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can.
Date: 01/16/13 11:34 am Title: Homosexual or Heterosexual
This was great just the way you write and word it fantastic I really love it I hope you post more. I see you havent updated in a while but I hope you reconsider finishing it
Author's Response: Oh wow, I recognize you from Notice! Yeah, I am going to continue this sometime. I actually need to fix some of the details in the chapters already out such as a few character names, so I hope you're okay with that! :) Thanks a lot for your review; I really appreciate the feedback!
Date: 06/08/12 02:29 pm Title: Prologue
PLZ write more
Author's Response: Will do soon enough! ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/23/12 10:25 pm Title: Homosexual or Heterosexual
I like this story a lot and can't wait to read more of it!! I hope some more people will leave you a review. This story really deserves more feedback! :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) The next update is going to be a day late, but it should be up sometime tomorrow. Thanks again for your kindness. ^^
Date: 05/03/12 01:44 pm Title: Prologue
Oh my god I have never read anything more interesting and capturing. And, God, it was so well-written, I could die...
Please post as soon as possible, I am very eager to read the next chapter. I can't wait to see what you have in store.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so very much for your review and compliments! I am so glad you enjoyed it, and I can assure you that the next chapter will be up soon. :)