Date: 06/08/18 07:49 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 07/10/13 02:04 am Title: Caught with his legs spread.
Loved it! Any chance for a follow up to see if a relationship develops or just leaving it for the readers imagination?
Date: 10/10/12 11:33 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
Pretty good - although I will say that I found the references to length unnecessary. I think it's better when you let the reader imagine just how big the are XD
Date: 05/29/12 09:28 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
Sexy party time with Bill and Tom
Author's Response: Hehe, yes. (:
Date: 03/30/12 09:20 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
omfg, that's hot, i can't even *-*
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. (:
Date: 03/28/12 04:07 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
That was one sexy shot... I'm kinda blown away by it; some people aren't good at this but you definitely are if I should go by this o.o
Author's Response: You guys are so amazing with your reviews. ;_;.rnrnI might make more in the future, if I get around to it, lmfao.rnrnThank you a lot. (:rn
Date: 03/28/12 02:35 am Title: Caught with his legs spread.
That was pretty damn sexy. A nd I like how you showed, and didn't tell us that it meant something to Tom. Woderful example of Show Don't Tell which we've been discussing in my wriing class, too bad I can't bring this in as an example. I think the teacher would be mad. Plus they don't need to know the filthy shit I read. NO offense. In fact, take that as a compliment. Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review. ^_^. I'm usually not that great at showing and not telling but, this is one of the works I am proud of that I wrote. I literally wrote this at 4:00 in the morning, so I wasn't too focused, aha...rnrn
Date: 03/27/12 10:12 pm Title: Caught with his legs spread.
-drools, then knowteses the drool- um ya that was ....ya
Author's Response: Hehe, so I'm going to assume that it was good? xDrnThanks. (: