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Reviewer: lalaband Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/12 07:55 am Title: "...Baby, I love you I never want to let you go. The more I think about, The more I want to let you know. That everything you do, Is super fucking cute And I can’t stand it..."

im so sad is over.you will do some more someday?please;best wishes

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/12 01:32 am Title: "...Baby, I love you I never want to let you go. The more I think about, The more I want to let you know. That everything you do, Is super fucking cute And I can’t stand it..."

Lovely, lovely ending, although I'm sad the story is finished. I just love all your characters so much.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/12 09:25 am Title: "...Petals getting picked With the love-yous And the love-you-nots Five years going by Everyone is staying on their side..."

I'll be so sorry when this story ends, its been unbelievably sweet. This chapter was just lovely. I loved Zephyr feeding Axel and, after a shaky start, Milo has turned out to be amazing. As usual Andrej is just adorable and Tom has changed so much for the better during the course of the story. Looking forward to the epilogue, but still wish it wasn't finished.

Reviewer: lalaband Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/12 09:02 am Title: "...Petals getting picked With the love-yous And the love-you-nots Five years going by Everyone is staying on their side..."

last chapter?i'm sad right noq

Reviewer: lalaband Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 10:01 am Title: "...It was the future reflected It felt familiar but new A street was missing a building The kids had something to do..."

love it;you're so talented,i really like your story.keep posting cause i'm kinda addicted :)

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 08:36 am Title: "...It was the future reflected It felt familiar but new A street was missing a building The kids had something to do..."

Oh, that was so sweet. I just loved the last bit...'I'll follow you anywhere' and 'You two are my family now'. Aw, lovely. And the hug between father and son was amazing, I'm so happy their relationship is doing well. Here's hoping little Axel continues to do well. Thank you for updating.

Reviewer: TomSkittlesFreak Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/12 03:31 pm Title: "And it's okay All the suffering obliterates at speed But don't you wait (don't you wait) For the faster you let go you will receive What you need And it's okay..."

Aww, the babies are cute ^^ Great Chapter! It's sad Milo couldn't be there, but good thing he's coming back nxt chapter!

Reviewer: lalaband Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/12 10:48 am Title: "...Why don't you sit right down and make me smile? You make me feel like I am just a child Why do you edit? just give me credit I'm just sitting on the shelf..."

I'm addicted and I just can't get enough!!its suach a beautiful story;i hope it never ends

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/12 10:03 am Title: "...Why don't you sit right down and make me smile? You make me feel like I am just a child Why do you edit? just give me credit I'm just sitting on the shelf..."

Poor Zephyr, coping with a sick baby girl without his husband there. It's good that he has his parents to help. And Tom and Andrej had identical twin boys...yay! They are going to be so good looking with both Tom's and Andrej's genes. Really looking forward to Milo's homecoming in the next chapter.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/12 09:38 am Title: "...Don’t worry I, will help you out on one condition Be more, do more, check your blood pressure..."

So sad the the baby will be born without Milo there. I've heard of phnatom pregnancy and sympathetic labour pains, but never hysterical child birth. Is that an actual condition? I guess with both of them pregnant and living in the same house its possible they could go into labour or have the same symptoms at the same time...like women who live togthere sychronising their periods. Hormones are weird and wonderful things, aren't they? I'm so scared for both Andrej and Zephyr. Hope everything goes okay for them. Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 07:43 pm Title: "...But you didn't have to cut me off, Make out like it never happened, and that we were nothing, And I don't even need your love, But you treat me like a stranger..."

Damn that Andrej is pretty. If I didn't know he was a guy in that pic with RJ i would say 'that girl is hot!'
And I would pic RJ >.>

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 02:46 pm Title: "...But you didn't have to cut me off, Make out like it never happened, and that we were nothing, And I don't even need your love, But you treat me like a stranger..."

That was a surprise, that Andrej had also had affairs as a result of Tom cheating on him. I think its amazing that Andrej wasn't even tempted to take the guys up on their offer, that he totally defends Tom even though Tom can be such a heartless dick. He must love his husband so very much. Tom really doesn't deserve him. It makes me angry that Tom keeps insisting Andrej get over Tom's affair as if Andrej is the one who did wrong rather than Tom, or as if its really no big deal. I'm glad that at the end they seemed to come to some sort of an agreement to try and get past it though. I hope Tom can learn to be kinder to Andrej and more understanding. A really terrific chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 06:36 pm Title: ",,,I can say I hope it will be worth what I give up..."

That pic is...... >.<

Reviewer: kikobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 06:30 pm Title: "..I think about the time we wasted I think about the years to come It's getting late and I can't call It's getting late to face it all I think about the time we wasted My loneliness has slowly grown"

Seeing as you used Samuel Larsen from "The Glee Project", I just can't picture him wearing makeup like that so it's a bit less realistic to me now.

Author's Response:

milo isn't wearing make up, zephyr is

rn

 

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 02:57 pm Title: ",,,I can say I hope it will be worth what I give up..."

Short but sad and sweet. Lovely chapter and so glad Tom is trying to make Zephyr feel better.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 04:42 am Title: "..I think about the time we wasted I think about the years to come It's getting late and I can't call It's getting late to face it all I think about the time we wasted My loneliness has slowly grown"

I'm really starting to love Milo, I'm glad he turned out to be a keeper and not a loser. Its obvious he truly loves Zephyr very deeply. And Andrej once again is amazing. Tom is the one I still can't really warm to, he's so stern and unbending, and yet a lot of the problems have been caused by his past behaviour that have left both his kids with behavioural problems...Zephyr so self-doubting and insecure and Dani acting up like a spoiled brat. I really love your story, you are so good at getting people's characters across. And I adore all the pictures and clips that you add to really bring things to life. Thank you.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 03:06 pm Title: "...Take my photo off the wall If it just won't sing for you. 'Cause all that's left has gone away And there's nothing there for you to prove..."

Milo's dad is such a homophobic dick. I feel really sorry for his mum caught up between her husband and her son. Lovely that she supports them though and she stopped Zephyr getting involved so the baby didn't get harmed. I can't believe Tom forbade them from having sex in his house. That's so funny considering they're married and have a baby on the way. Great chapter.

Reviewer: CharlotteRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 11:00 am Title: "..Red solo cup I fill you up Lets have a party lets have a party I love you red solo cup I lift you up Proceed to party proceed to party Now I really love how you're easy to stack But I really hate "

So good! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 04:48 am Title: "..Red solo cup I fill you up Lets have a party lets have a party I love you red solo cup I lift you up Proceed to party proceed to party Now I really love how you're easy to stack But I really hate "

I am so happy that Milo went public with their relationship. I wasn't sure about him in the beginning, but he seems to really love Zephyr and is really happy about being a daddy. So sweet. I'm glad Andrej and Tom had a talk and came to an agreement about their raising of Dani because they'll need those guidelines when raising their new babies. I hope Tom can learn to control his temper now and keep his hands off his husband and kids in anger. If not he should go to anger management therapy or something. Another great chapter. Update soon please. Oh, and love that animation of Andrej. How the hell can a guy be so damned beautiful? Not fair.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 02:02 pm Title: "...Little bird Brush your gray wings on my head Say what you said Say it again They tell me I'm crazy But you told me I'm golden..."

Andrej is so sweet and understanding with Zephyr. Tom's really not very good at the whole being a dad thing is he? But then Dani is being a little bitch, though I suppose she has good reason to play up with Tom having run out on the family and also having cheated on Andrej , so I do feel sorry for her. I'm happy that Milo and Zephyr are going to try and make a go of it with the baby and I hope Tom comes around to the idea and supports them. I also hope Tom stops being a dick for Andrej's sake. That young man could do with less drama in his life while he's preggers again. Another great chapter. Looking forward to more.

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