Date: 03/12/23 07:24 pm Title: Chapter One: Black
I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/23/16 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
I loved it! At first I was really worried about Bill and whether Tom's actions were hurting him enough that he'd be driven to do something desperate, but the way you handled it shows some rare brilliance. The tenderness between them when they finally came together was worth the wait, and I love the way Bill ends up taking advantage of Tom's blackouts instead of fearing them.
Date: 04/05/15 11:05 pm Title: Chapter One: Black
This was lovely, full of angst but so much love too.
Date: 03/07/14 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
Wonderful story!
Date: 11/04/13 03:52 am Title: Chapter Three: White
Great story, beautiful love scene... =)
Date: 09/19/12 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
aw, was a very interesting reading ^^
Author's Response: Thanks. ^__^
Date: 04/01/12 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
Just reread this whole thing. *So* amazing :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. ♥
Date: 03/16/12 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
Hahaha, nice twist at the end... I didn't think Tom's blackouts would have continued. This story is really great though. I love your writing- its very intense, you really know how to built up that tension and make it so thick and palpable around them. Brilliant. I love your characters too, and the journey you take them on. You know how to make it all feel real, even if it is extreme. Great emotion. Loved reading this!!! Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. <3
Date: 02/01/12 02:45 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
This story was absolutely beautiful. I loved every word of it. Their struggle to repair what has been demaged was written in a very realistic way and somehow though full of turmoil, angst, heartbreak and pain it was also really, really peacefull and calm somehow. Really great work. Goes to my favorites:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you found it realistic, and that you could find the peacefulness in the midst of all the angst. <333
Date: 12/31/11 12:14 am Title: Chapter Three: White
Okay, seriously? Dominant/controlling/commanding Tom is THE hottest thing, especially when you know there's love behind it. In the first chapter, it was frightening, but oh yeah, by the end of this chapter, DAMN HOT.
Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I'm in legitimate awe of your talent.
Author's Response: Thank yoooooou. You are very sweet to me. lol
I do have to agree, though. Controlling!Tom is so...ngh. xD
Date: 12/30/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Two: Gray
Ohhh. Just. That moment at Bill's door was electric. I was mesmerized. Beautifully done.
Author's Response: *flutterclap!* I love that you thought it was ~electric. I'm seeing no higher compliment. =D
Date: 12/30/11 11:43 pm Title: Chapter One: Black
Finally reading this, since it's been open in a tab since you finished it.
Damn, girl, this is intense! You write dark and angsty so very well, it takes my breath away.
Author's Response: Thank you. You're very sweet. =)
Angst is where my happy place is. haha I'm glad you can enjoy it.
Date: 12/23/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
Haha, things turned out surprisinglyu well in the end. Win-win I'd say :).
Yoi wrote the actual love making really beautifully. It was very emotional and especially the constant presence of angertm, regret and fear together with love, hope and forgiving made it special.
I knew this was going to be beautiful. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you liked it. <333
Date: 12/21/11 01:02 am Title: Chapter Three: White
this is a good story!
i am sad that it is over!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: There probably won't be a sequel to this one, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it enough to want more! <333
Date: 12/21/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter Three: White
this is a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, but this was the last one. I hope you read them all. <333
Date: 12/20/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Three: White
Brave Tom, finally making a move! Ah, then you make things worse before they get better. It’s so hard to read about them getting intimate when Tom is learning about what really happened and feeling ashamed. It’s uncomfortably hot because Bill wants it to be everything it wasn’t, but Tom is finding out the truth. I think you knocked this out of the park by making it awkward and real. And then you made it all better and really hot. I loved how Bill knew just how to touch Tom because it’s how he would want to be touched. That was a great detail. The ending was just perfect. Great job.
Author's Response: I always have to make things worse before they get better. I think that's called a plot arc or something crazy like that, I don't know. ;)
I'm really glad you liked it, though, even if it was...uncomfortably hot and awkward? Real is the biggest compliment, though, so thank you. <333
Date: 12/20/11 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Two: Gray
So, Tom did have feelings for Bill. Talk about repression. You really know how to hit hard, especially in that scene about watching the movie, and neither of the boy knows how to fix their relationship or get back to normal. Or if they even want to get back to “normal.”
The last scene made me cry because they are both so afraid and yet they want to make it work. Ugh, I'm sorry I can't even find the words I want to say, but this story is really, very powerful. I can't wait to see how you end this.
Author's Response: I love the movie scene. It's one of the ones that stands out to me the most, so I love that you were able to pick up on the feelings there and point it out to me. I'm sorry any part of it made you cry, though. I'd never intentionally do that. *hugs*
Date: 12/20/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter One: Black
Oh, girl, this is so rough. And so amazing. Poor Bill, wanting Tom so badly yet hating what's happening. Poor Tom, apparently acting out some kind of desire when he's unconscious of it. Is it really horrible of me to just want to scoop him up and take him to a doctor? This would be so terrifying.
It hurt so good when Tom saw the marks on Bill and finally found out what he's been doing, even if he can't believe it. I'm going to read the rest right now.
Author's Response: It would definitely be terrifying, that's for sure. Poor both of them, really.
Date: 12/20/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter Three: White
I couldn't stop reading. I wanted to hate Tom in the worst way but I just couldn't. I'm so happy things worked out for them both in the end and that Bill got the love he deserved. Loved this story. :)
Author's Response: Awww, no, don't hate Tom. He really can't help it. I'm glad things worked out for them, too, and that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 12/20/11 01:28 am Title: Chapter Three: White
aww :P
Author's Response: =)