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Reviewer: indrani_xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/15 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Six: Words have no power to impress the mind...

pls pls pls update soon? don't leave this story unfinished like this? :'(

Reviewer: QueenyZombie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Five: The Story That Was Never Meant To Be Told

I love your story, I find it definitely very interesting. Please take this as constructive criticism, the plot development could be tighter, what I mean is that what occurred in the length of 12 chapters could have fitted in less, when the story doesn't progress much from chapter to chapter it becomes disenchanting and dull to the reader even when is in fact very interesting. I would try yo develop the story more profoundly with each chapter so the reader can enjoy the excitement of constant progress throughout every chapter. Other than that I believe this is a wonderful story and I look forward to keep reading.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

rnrnI understand what you mean, and when looking over the last few chapters, i was beginning to think that to myself. Things will definitely start to progress at a much quicker pace now as I have a lot of ideas that I want to take place. This is partly why I have been updating several times a day. I have written any more yet and I will be doing that tomorrow. I will definitely take what you have said on board. Thank you again for the review and I look forward to what you think about the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Four: A conclusion is simply the place where you got tired of thinking.

Yay another chapter haha!
Poor Bill! He has got the withdrawal bad! But it's not cause he wants to stop but because he cant get his fix. I feel for Tom too I mean the he is now witnessing what he was denying! Feel more edit Tom though, bill brought it on himself but there is still sympathy there. Good chapter love! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D The next chapter will be up tomorrow! :D

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Three: Anger at truth can't last

I usually don't at all read drug use stories. But I cannot lie in saying that i don't like this when I DO! This is really well written:) sad the fact that the strength of the twins relationship is not tight but u can still see that Tom cares so much. I shall be waiting for more, seems that bill is layin for the consequences for his choices. Nice thus far! Keep going :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this a chance! I really appreciate it!

rnThank you again for your feedback. (: I am currently working on Chapter 11 so I have plenty written and waiting to be uploaded. I might upload again tonight, if not, then definitely tomorrow.

Reviewer: OrneDeppKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter One: Just because you got the monkey off your back...

I think I'm falling in love with this story, such an interesting one...love the way you describe all the symptoms and reactions...can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha thank you. Yeah I wanted to make it as realistic as possible so did a lot of research into the symptoms and everything associated with drug use before I started this story. (:

rnThank you so much. There will be another update tonight.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Three: Anger at truth can't last

Bill is going through a drug withdrawal isn't he? *sighs* poor Bill..I've seen people and even new borne go through drug withdrawal and it isn't a pretty scene...you feel bad for them...the first 72 hours are the hardest for drug withdrawal patients...from being extremely cold, anxiety attacks, fever, shaking, night sweating etc...

Anyway update soon! ^_^

Author's Response: Haha yep. (: I have done a lot of research into it withdrawal and the effects of drugs on the body so I can make it as realistic as possible, so you will see the symptoms of withdrawal start happening in the next chapter.

rnrnThank you for the review, and there will more than likely be an update tomorrow. (:

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Two: I will reveal the secrets behind these doors.

Hmm this is something different from anything I've ever read...update soon!

Author's Response: I have seven chapters written! I'll more than likely update tomorrow. Thank you!

Reviewer: x LilMissDolly x Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter One: Just because you got the monkey off your back...

Sounds really good! I'm interested to see how this turns out.
Good job, keep going please!!
^-^
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you! I already have several chapters written so I will always have something to post!

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