Date: 09/25/17 03:18 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
Love this
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 08/26/12 02:47 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
Awww :3 he will forgive Bill. Although Bill was an ass!
Author's Response: Well, it's an open ending. People can interpret it as they want. ;) Thanks for reading, and for leaving a review!
Date: 10/29/11 02:10 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
very different, interesting perspective. i agree that bill doesn't always have to be blameless, but i don't like the idea of tom-rape, lol. i'd like to see bill being feminine and an asshole or whatever, since I sorta like him that way, but we'll see...:)
Author's Response: We'll see what sort of stories I end up writing. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 10/29/11 12:33 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
I liked it. The format was cool and different; I totally got what was happening and who was talking without any confusion. I wouldn't have thought I'd get so emotionally into this type of story format, but having read it I totally did.
I thought Tom's dad saying 'Don't do drugs' in his messages was great and was a entertaining way to show his relationship with Tom.
As to Bill and him leaving all those messages...
When you hurt someone like that, and they don't want to talk to you, then that is answer enough in itself that the relationship is over.
I felt bad for Tom that he was in pain over what happened and I'm happy that he feels better after his trip to Asia.
I think it's good that Tom can face up to Bill and talk to him about what happened and get closure, but no matter the explanation, Tom did not deserve to be cheated on (multiple times!). It sucks when anyone has hurt feelings, but Bill did it to himself. I sort of don't want them to get back together (even though I'm a big Tom/Bill fan).
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the long reveiw. The format was a little tricky, I wasn't sure how I should type it up, so I'm glad you liked it. Tom and his dad have, in this story, an on-going joke-thing where he says "Don't do drugs," and I'm glad you liked that. Bill is persistent and stubborn, and that's why he leaves so many messages. As for whether he and Tom get back together, that's up to you to decide. It's an open ending.
Date: 10/28/11 05:09 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
LOL;
me like (:
Author's Response: Good. Thanks.
Date: 10/28/11 07:33 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
I liked it. This was an interesting way to tell a story and I think you pulled it of splendidly :)
And I approve of your new mission *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and thank you for giving me the thumbs up on my mission. :)
Date: 10/28/11 05:40 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
"Have you found your soul yet? Maybe it’s somewhere in Tokyo, I hear they’ve got a lot of new and fancy things."
lol I liked that one. As a matter of fact I liked the entire story, it's good to see Tom being the one who's hurt (does this make me sound like a bitch? I guess it does.) oh well, anyway, carry on with your mission 'cause I'm probably gonna want to read all stories included :D
Author's Response: Thanks! For reading and reviewing. And thank you for agreeing with me on my mission. And no, it doesn't make you sound like a bitch. Someone has to get hurt, and it's good that it's not always the same person.
Date: 10/28/11 05:30 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
I loved it good idea
But a bottom Tom doesn't fit the character
Author's Response: Thanks, but Tom's not bottom. I never said I'd make a bottom Tom. Just a Tom that gets hurt.
Date: 10/28/11 04:34 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
Aww he decided to talk to bill how cute!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 10/28/11 02:19 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
nice story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/28/11 12:40 am Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
A unique idea. I thought this was quite moving.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Date: 10/27/11 11:41 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
Please tell me you'll continue this? I want to know if those two talk! And I'm so glad to see a story that finally flips those two. I'm also tired of Tom being the ass and Bill being the dove.
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I'll continue it. It was a one-off idea. And thank you for also being tired of Tom being the ass and Bill being the dove. I'm glad people agree with me on that. Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 10/27/11 11:11 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
To sad. I'm guessing Bill died.
Author's Response: What? How did you get to that conclusion? No, no, no, Bill's alive.
Date: 10/27/11 11:05 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
This is the first time I've been on THF since my too long of a hiatus and I have to say I'm glad I found this. First of all, it kinda near darn broke my heart. Second of all it was still really good, first thing I've read in this kind of format. And three, darlin', it NEEDS a sequel. I want to know what happens between Bill and Tom *bounces in seat* Though if you see fit to leave it as is that's cool, just know some of your readers *cough*me*cough* would thoroughly enjoy a sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. I'm really glad you liked it. I've had a lot of requests for a sequel, but I really don't know if I'll ever make one. Maybe. We'll see.
Date: 10/27/11 09:18 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
do a sequel? please! It's really good!
Author's Response: Maybe. I only had inspiration for this one story, so I don't know. But thank you, glad you liked it. :)
Date: 10/27/11 09:11 pm Title: Leave A Message At The Beep
i liked this. the whole voicemail thing was different, and i loved tom's dad's "don't do drugs" comments and the little bit of hope at the end that maybe things could work out with bill.
Author's Response: Thank you, doll. The whole "don't do drugs"-thing is sort of Tom and his dad's little thing they have together. And yeah, it was supposed to give a little hope in the end.