Date: 12/05/11 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I've just read some of the other reviews and, even if you are the one to decide, I allow myself a tiny suggestion. I would die to know more about what had really happened and how Bill got there, but despite that, the mystery is the best message of the story. It happens at Christmas and explaining how she got her wish would be like explaining the technique Santa uses to come down the chimney. Just a suggestion though, you're the boss...
Author's Response: It's too late for a second chapter anyways. To be honest, I didn't even like the first one. It was crap to me.
Date: 12/05/11 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha ha, this was so fun and sweet! Poor Bill, he probably had no idea someone would want him as a gift. I wonder if he spoiled her pleasure afterwards, but the story ends just right where it should. It leaves you wonder if he agreed to this small game or - even more likely - he was forced into it. Splendid idea!
Author's Response: lol yes, everyone loves a mystery ;)
Date: 12/05/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
great beginning for a first story . it was so cute . congrates hope to see more stories soon .
Author's Response: Thanks, though I don't think I'll be making anymore stories. Not anytime soon, at least.
Date: 12/04/11 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL. What is this I don't even-?
Haha, God, I loved this. Good job!
Author's Response: Haha, why thank you muggle :)(I usually don't like muggles so be happy about that ha)
Date: 12/04/11 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha xD
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12/04/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really nice for a first story, if a touch confusing. How long was Bill in the basement? How did he not die? Afterall, the dad died in early december, and its now after Christmas, how was his death such a surprise when he obviously knew he wasn't going to be around for the holiday?
Anyway. It was nice, but I don't think it really needs a second chapter/sequel, unless you really want to clarify those points.
Author's Response: I know, I'm not going to make a sequel. It's better to leave you guys wondering.
Date: 10/16/11 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes you should!!! this is going in my favorites i hope you keep going :D
Author's Response: Aaah :') thank you so much, I definitely will!
Date: 10/16/11 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
:))) this made my day llove it !
Author's Response: Thank you. Should I continue it? :)
Date: 10/16/11 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
BAHAHAHAHAHA!!! You know, I was having a really suckish day, then I read this... You just made everything better! I honestly think you should write a second chapter :)
-Mudge :)xx
Author's Response: Awww, glad it made you better :) I was thinking about making a second chapter, since this one was pretty short. If I do get enough reviews asking to make another one, I definitely will!