Date: 11/18/13 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh yes, very interesting, I really love one submissive Bill and dominant Tom, there is nothing hotter than this! Very well done dear!
Date: 11/27/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter 3
I can't tell if this was good or bad, oddly enough. Some parts were really damn sexy, and other times I was a bit turned off by the dirty talk. Mostly though, I kept trying to figure out WHY they were so Dom/Sub with eachother so suddenly. I was hoping to see some kind of explanation- "just bcuz you're a body n I'm horny" sex, "I've been curious about being w m bro for a while now" sex, "I'm madly in love" sex.... like, which one is it?
Anyways, it wasn't bad, so don't take this review the wrong way. I just always read too much into things. This is obviously just PWP. Lol. All the "baby brother" name calling during sexytimes is kind of a turn on btw. Well done. :)
Author's Response: I guess it depends on what you're into :) thanks for reading!
Date: 10/30/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Then do it, big brother. Get me ready for your cock.” HOW IN THE FUCK AM I SUPPOSED TO CONCENTRATE ON READING AFTER THIS? I just...I can't omg why is this so amazingly hot? I'm speechless. I just...is this real? Did I really just read this right now? omg...
OK. Now that I can breathe and speak properly XD is everything in RL OK?
Thank you for writing this amazing three-shot. :).
Author's Response: WOW!! LOL!!! I guess it's okay if I write another one then? Cuz I kinda am :)rnEverything is peachy keen other then I need a new car! :PrnThanks for reading!!
Date: 10/23/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bondage!! I did NOT expect BONDAGE in this! Nice. You combined such caring from Tom at the same time! I saw LOVE mixed into it and it was great! Never stop writing twincest. LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Aw I'm glad you loved it so much! thanks!
Date: 10/21/11 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
this was a good story!
an so hot!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! thanks!!
Date: 10/20/11 10:51 am Title: Part 1/3
Loved this chapter. You have a real talent for writing twincest. It was so hot but you managed to show the love as well.
Author's Response: awww thank you! :)
Date: 10/19/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
loved it :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 10/18/11 05:22 pm Title: Part 2/3
O_O wow. I never thought I would like twincest but this is f'ing HOT! I want more! please post part 3 soon!
Author's Response: I am working on it sweetie. RL gets in the way at times. grrrr to it! LOL thank you for reading!
Date: 09/16/11 09:32 am Title: Part 1/3
totally hot. And sweet! But yeah, using German here and there does not make sense ;-) I loooove it, pls update soon!
Author's Response: So either use all English or all German? Okie doke! Thanks! more to come...
Date: 09/15/11 01:59 pm Title: Part 1/3
Just as hot as I hoped it would be. Really looking forward to part 3.
Author's Response: Thank you! THAT was encouraging. Was worried about this part!!
Date: 09/12/11 10:25 pm Title: Part 1/3
Loved it!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 09/11/11 10:40 pm Title: Part 1/3
Tom dominating a reluctant Bill? I think you should absolutely continue...
Author's Response: Working on it ;-)
Date: 09/11/11 08:12 pm Title: Part 1/3
OMG that was so hot!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 09/11/11 08:54 am Title: Part 1/3
excuse my english, seems I didn't manage to write what I mean. I mean if they are talking in german all the time why to add random german words from time to time? isn't it obvious they are using such german words all the time? if one of them would be American and other Geman, it would be natural if this German one was adding some german words from time to time, but in situation when they both are German? hope you understand what I mean^^;;
great, can't wait for sequel then!
Author's Response: Yeah I think I understand what you mean now. That makes more sense and I'll be more careful next time :-)
Date: 09/10/11 04:52 pm Title: Part 1/3
very nice, I like such twins, hope you will write a sequel!
but why those "nein", "Oh Gott" and "ficken" out of nowhere? which language were they talking all the time if not german?
Author's Response: *blush* That WAS German according to google translate. Sorry if it sounded a bit out of place. Still new at this and learning. I tend to blurt out Italian at random times. Anywho...thanks for reading. Sequel in progress.
Date: 09/10/11 04:22 pm Title: Part 1/3
Very erotic. Please write another chapter so we can see Tom get off too.
Author's Response: Thanks! working on it...
Date: 09/10/11 09:53 am Title: Part 1/3
wowwwww this was super hot! can there be a part two with tom dominating bill? if not this was still awesome xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! and I was thinking about a sequel, yes!
Date: 09/10/11 09:43 am Title: Part 1/3
please please continue!!! :DDD
Author's Response: I will. Thank you!
Date: 09/10/11 04:51 am Title: Part 1/3
holy shit.. I love this story, so good! Please give us more!!
Author's Response: Wish my command. Thank you for reading!