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Reviewer: tamahav Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/12 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Bad. You need to fix the grammar. Also Her and He are really mixed up.

Reviewer: myth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I knew I should had read the warnings. But the plot was intesting enough for me to keep on reading. I thank you for writing this and I hope for a happy sequal.

Author's Response: thank you to you too for reading! ^__^

Reviewer: frances17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. It was something different. I like it :) There were a few grammatical errors but I forgot where xD I love the plot and how you wrote it. I really like it :D

Author's Response: aww..thank you =) yeah, sorry for the grammatical errors, though. hee ^_^

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