Date: 09/02/12 09:44 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
DAMN IT! I AM SO UNSATISFIED!
Date: 08/04/12 10:52 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I want him to see :-O
Date: 02/24/12 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
this was a really good story!!
i would of liked to see if bill could see again!
u should make a sequel to this!!
Date: 01/22/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Argh xD Now I don't know if Bill will ever 'see' Tom again:(
But it's a really good final piece of this story! Not what I expecting of it, but it's.. Yeah, I think that's the best part of it. I didn't expect it
Date: 10/14/11 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I kind of like that you ended it this way. I couldn't decide if I wanted Bill to be able to see or not. I mean, of course I want him to be able to see, but it didn't seem realistic necessarily. So I liked this. Nice job.
Date: 10/12/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
The image of Bill on the bathroom floor is just heartbreaking.
Date: 10/01/11 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
KARIIN you can't leave it like that! Fuck youuuu. XD But I'm sure Bill's seeing again.
Anyway, this was nice story - you can be proud of yourself! This wasn't the best one from you, at some points the storyline went kinda too fast but I know you got busy in the end with the writing so it's understandable. :D
I hope there will be more COMPLETED multi-chaptered fics from you!
lots of hugs!
Date: 09/25/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 5: Love
I think I've never read anything so cliché from you than that beginning! But it's okay, lol. XD This was niiiice chap, especially the sex part!
Date: 09/25/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Realizations
YAY TWINCEST.
What else can I say? I'm glad Bill's already happier.
Date: 09/25/11 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: Disappointment
LOL I can't help but that toilet part was just so hilarious. XD Well, actually, TOM was hilarious. Especially that well-i-just-happened-to-grab-your-penis-without-asking-thing. XD
Tom is such an optimist, aww.
Date: 09/21/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
thank you for this
I wish that someone would also do a fanfic where Bill is deaf
Date: 09/19/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
thank you for doing this fanfic
I put a fic prompt in the fic prompt section of this site quit a while ago that I wanted a fanfic where Bill or Tom was blind and the other twin to care of him.
Date: 09/19/11 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
Ooh, this chap was so cute - full of twinlove. :3 So much cuddling!
Date: 09/11/11 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Pain
CLIFHANGER >< I hate it! I m totally for team Light though, so perhaps you can write a sequel including both endings? haha xD Love it! rush a bit, but I enjoyed it:D
Author's Response: LOL. I don't think I will be writing a sequel though, so you must let your thoughts wonder as to how you wish for it to end. Thank you anyway! :)
Date: 09/09/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
i promised to review after reading so here it goes...
i loved it. even though it was a little cliché and i knew the final when i was reading the first chapter, i loved it. well, i AM a person who just loves clichés, so... :) it didn't have too much twincest, either. this fic was like... well, too much twc, it wouldn't fit. i totally like your writing style and i'm gonna read more of your texts! ... ok i've read them before but now more.
i was kind of team blind!bill because i just knew the end. but it doesn't matter - i still think this fic is very good! i'm gonna put it on my favorite list :)
i hope you can read this, i'm super tired and my english isn't working... forgive me :(
- juuli
Author's Response: Hello there, Juuli! I'm glad you liked it! Although I have no idea what was cliche about it... I had this idea on my own and haven't seen stories like this around, but maybe I haven't seen what you are then. Thank you anyway; for both reading and leaving this thoughtful review. <3
Date: 09/08/11 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I think Im team seeing Bill, he deserves a full happy end I Love it
Author's Response: Then Bill will see for you! Thank you for reading! :)
Date: 09/08/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pain
Heeeyy!
okay, first: I'm so lazy with reading TH-fiction nowadays so don't be angry at me if it takes me forever to read this whole thing. It's not that I wouldn't like that, 'cause I do - I find this interesting, I'm just ... lazy. XD You know me.
Anywayyyyyz. This seems nice fic and I'm glad this TOO includes twincest. Otherwise I wouldn't be enthusiastic.... LOL but luckily you're as twincest freak as me!
I like your writiiiiing.
Author's Response: Awwie, Hanne, I love you! x3 thank you for all those kind words, you're amazing! And surely there will be twincest! ;) You know me: :P
Date: 09/08/11 11:19 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Omg, you are such a bad person. I thought we would be able to find out about Bill's vision abilities, but noooo, bad Karin just couldn't give us that joy!
Haha, I'm just messing with you! I loved this story, and I loved the scene where Bill makes Tom get blindfolded. :'D I am glad you finished it~
Author's Response: Aww, sorry. :[ But I felt like this was the best ending for this story; I didn't want to drag it too long. LOL. Thank you anyway! I'm glad you read and found it good! Love you, Angie! <3
Date: 09/08/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
AAH! No! Not a cliff hanger ending! *Falls to the floor dramatically* WHY!!!
Author's Response: Aww, lol. I think this was the best place to leave it off. So you can make up your very own ending! Thanks for giving my story your time! <3
Date: 09/07/11 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
aww i love the story but i would have liked it to continue and say if he gets his sight back and if he did have them have sex with his sight but overall awesome story and makes me realize how much i am glad i can see
Author's Response: Thank you! The fact if he gets his sight back or not is for you to decide. Thanks for reading & reviewing! :)