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Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/14 12:44 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

cool!

Reviewer: empathee101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/14 09:05 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

This is fantastic. hehehe so cheeky!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/12 09:57 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

nice story!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/12 03:34 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

AMAZINGLY SEXY. Really well done. I've read this twice and I loved every part of it. I love that they're still brothers, they act like it and talk like it, but it's hot how they end up like that. Great visuals. And funny too. All around amazing. Keep writing twincest!!! :)

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 07:28 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

For your first porn...that was pretty hot.

And the best line for me? "Don't be a Kaulitz!" I totally Lol'ed at that.

Ungf...wait, was this a one shot? Damn...

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/11 05:36 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

that was really sexy...and leading. porny sequel, hmm?

Author's Response:

MAYHAP. MAYHAP. I'm glad you enjoyed it! That's not creepy, is it? D:

Reviewer: liveeverysecond Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 10:58 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Loved every bit of this!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so very glad you did! :D I know Tom did, too.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 03:11 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Aww, such enjoyable pleasures of having a Kaulitz as a brother. This was both hot and funny. Loved it. :)

Author's Response:

lol no I'm not flailing and slapping the dog at having you review one of my stories, like, whatever

rn

NO BUT I'M GLADDENED REGARDLESS THAT YOU ENJOYED IT

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 06:36 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Hmmm a blowjob to start my day was a good idea. I think I need a cigarette. *nods* Loved it though I would like to think Bill isn't as blind to Tom's love as he seems. *sigh*

Conga rats on your debut into the world of smut my dear, job well done and so forth. *stands and applauds*

Author's Response:

He's a sly little devil, that Billsus. Nothing is ever as it seems...

rn

CONGA RATS ZOMG YAY

Reviewer: hunnybunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 07:30 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

*fans self* That was so very hot! I loved it! Fantastic job!

Author's Response:

I feel inappropriate being gleeful over girls enjoying my pornography. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 05:56 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

This is so hot and very sexy! ~__^ Your writing is always so witty! I love how Bill and Tom express their love through their snark with each other. And of course, Tom is so *smooth* at talking Bill into it *rolls eyes* when Tom is already turned on just thinking about it. This was awesome!! (and did I mention reeeeeally hot?) Will Tom "teach" Bill anything else? :P

Author's Response:

Oh well why thank you! You sweet little garbanzo bean. <3

rn

That's Tom, suave personified, hurr hurr hurrrrrrr

rn

MAYBE ONE DAY. Maybe one day.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 04:46 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

WELL WHAT CAN YOU EXPECT FROM A SNOOPING LITTLE SITTER! STOP LEAVING YOUR PORN OUT AND MAYBE I WONT READ IT



Haha Tomi maybe got played. Go Bill :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 02:54 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

*_* This one shot was fucking fantastic! Wow, really really hot I must say! You did so well, can't believe it's your first one! Oh and Omg Bill going on about how he’s gonna become a legend for worst blowjob was absolutely hilarious!

Author's Response:

Hahahaha, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed! That's not like, creepy to say or anything, right...?

rn

Maybe I'll post more oneshots! I just have porn, lying around all over the place, where anyone could trip on it, honestly.

rn

THIS WAS A PERSONAL FEAR OF MINE FOR A LONG TIME.

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 12:59 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I found this kinda sweet which shouldn't have happened since it's obviously more hot than anything else. /shrug still enjoyed it a lot :)

Author's Response:

SHRUG IT OFF BB, DUST THEM SHOULDERS OFF

rn

No but srsly, yay! Because I think it should be a little sweet. All dicks aside and the sucking thereof, Tom loves his broski. <3 And Bill does too, in his own weird, gawky, glittery way.

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 12:01 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

so this was very ingenious and original plan of seduction, bravo Bill :D
I vote for a sequel too, I had so much fun reading it... it was soo sexy and all...

I donīt want to sound rude or like I am pushing you... but what your other stories? CC for example? :-)

Author's Response:

INDEED, ROUND OF APPLAUSE but none for me thanks, the idea was all MohanRocks'. And Bill's. /le cough

rn

I didn't plan on a sequel, but maybe... one day... /stares into the distance

rn

Not at all! I like to know my stories are enjoyed! Unfortunately, my windows of free time are few and far between these days, so something like this takes about an hour, and something like Cupid's Chokehold or Law of Entropy might take a few days. But be assured, I'm always working on them! I love these stories as much as you do! <3

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 09:08 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

That was awesome. Tom was very nice to let his brother practice on him. Poor Tom trying to be so nonchalant about what was happening to him. What's next? I loved this. :)

Author's Response:

Tom is a very good brother, indeed. /nods sagely, chomps on pipe

rn

What's next? For this story, probably not much, sorry to say, but for my other stories, more chapters! ALWAYS MORE CHAPTERS, FOREVER.

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 07:46 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

And during our lifelong I-hate-love-and-relationships-and soulmates marriage, I am SO making you write me porn like this. You know, to keep the spark alive and all that. xD

Author's Response:

Absolutely. /cough

rn

Glad it gave you that spark! :D

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 07:44 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Oh my shit, fuck, damnit. Why did I wait until just before work to read this? Stupid, stupid, stupid.

That was....pretty mind blowing and...stuff. Yeah. *coughs*

Author's Response:

Just wear really big pants and slouch. :D

rn

No wait

rn

BILL'S GAY LEGACY IS INTACT

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 01:30 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I have a comment about the rocket surgery. Are you so awesome that you combined rocket science and brain surgery?? Rocket surgery brain science! Rocketbob Surgerypants Spongebrain Squarescience.

I love how you made Bill slightly awkward during the cumshot. Every porn I've ever seen has had awkward cumshot scenes. Doubly appreciated the second time around, Dreggs! This time I read it with a clear head-- less glazed with a cloud of lust and all. Off we fly into the night~

Author's Response:

SPONGEBRAIN SQUARESCIENCE

rn

Dude. Catching cum in your mouth is awkward. Especially the first time round.

rn

/screeches, steals gloworm babies in my talons, flaps away

Reviewer: hexenhasel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 12:57 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Man, that was a hot little porny ficlet. Your first time, was it? Did it hurt? ;)

Seriously, I really enjoyed that. You have a wonderful sense of characterization and great dialogue - it flows very well

Author's Response:

Not as much as I thought it would! Chalk it up to a lot of practise. >:D

rn

Thank you, thank you! Oh, you...! /wrangles you in, gives you a noogie

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