Date: 05/30/12 12:51 am Title: Chapter 2
Your grammar's good, except for one thing. Every time a different person starts to speak, it's a new paragraph. So, instead of '"I can't," he whispered, his voice defeated. "I can't hurt him." Gustav struck Tom again, this time harder than he had before. It still wasn't as hard as Georg liked it, but Tom wasn't accustomed to have his brains beaten out. He yelped. Bill's voice reached Tom's ears, soft and reassuring. "Just do it, Tomi. Please. I want you to." Tom...' it would be "I can't," he whispered, his voice defeated. "I can't hurt him." Gustav struck Tom again, this time harder than he had before. It still wasn't as hard as Georg liked it, but Tom wasn't accustomed to have his brains beaten out. He yelped. Bill's voice reached Tom's ears, soft and reassuring.
"Just do it, Tomi. Please. I want you to." Tom...' =) Other than that, VERY well done ^-^
Date: 02/07/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god this story is making me want to try out bondage! (which is weird cause the thought of being spanked or whipped would normally freak me out). Gustav seems like a very good 'master'.
Date: 09/04/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow.
This is so difficult to word, it was a mind blowing read. And so damn hot!
Date: 05/13/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was possibly the most twisted thing i have EVER read!
But i love twisted... ;)
Great read! Love the Saw pleasure/pain theme xD
Date: 04/11/09 01:06 am Title: Chapter 4
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW DAMMIT!!!!
now you have that damned song stuck in my head!! UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Date: 03/30/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is awesome! XD
And I love your little comments in the middle of some of the scenes.
Date: 09/03/08 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg Bill bone xDD it made me giggle!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 09/03/08 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Seriously, you killed me. DomGus and SubGeo are just tooooooo delicious. Amazing.
Author's Response: If you like that, you should read Mirror Image by Salty Wench. She's the one that put that lovely image in my head to start with! <3 Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/06/08 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Whew! *fans self* That was hot!
Author's Response: Thanks muchly! <3
Date: 04/03/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved the whole story!! And you got that song stuck in my head too. I'm gonna be singing that all day!! xD
Author's Response: hahaha! Yes! I've corrupted someone with random music! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/21/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't think i can read through it though i want to so badly!
I mean it's REALLY good, but it's my little inocent Gusti doing those things... i'm not sure if i should be frightened or thrilled
Author's Response: A little of both makes the whole thing sweeter! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/08/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 4
About your little song... that isn't pathethic. I'm the pathethic one here! I mean, I can only think of stories with TH, I covered my whole room with posters (and I had to manoeuvre myself in some really strange positions to get the posters where I wanted them to be), I played in a musical while wearing a TH-skirt and I'm thinking of them 24/7. Even if I see a certain plate or picture or smell or read something, I think of them. Thanks to Elle-chan here, I can't think of fairytales anymore without imagining the TH boys playing in it, you know. Now who's pathethic?
Author's Response: *snickers* haha that's too funny.
Date: 03/01/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 4
hehe =P
well, i'm glad u pushed urself through it and stayed in the right mindset for long enough to write so many chapters =D
this fic was amazing and i can't wait to read what else u might come up with ;P
maybe some more foursomes worked into the next fic? (with a plot ;P) (A)
because after this, to me u'll forever be known as the queen of foursomes *bows at ur feet*
Author's Response: Awww Thank you Tokio4life! Thanks for reading and reviewing and staying with me through this fic series. I do plan to do more foursomes. For some reason I like them lol. I have a fic working with plot that I plan to have foursomes in. Awww thanks for the title! Bowing is not needed but appreciated lmao! *hugs you*
Date: 03/01/08 01:04 am Title: Chapter 4
awwwwww! A corny ending to a crazy mad-style hot monkey sex series. I love it! You write crazy monkey sex very well. Great stories and I can't to read more of your writing. :)
Author's Response: i know! I just lost all steam! I'll fix it eventually, when I get in the monkey sex mood. I've just... lost the feel for it. It's hard to stay in that mood for days on end. Thanks for the R/R/R!
Date: 02/29/08 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
yayyyyy :D i love. too bad its over though i will very much miss teh bondage XD
Author's Response: There will be more bondage in my other fics. Thanks for the read, rate, and review!
Date: 02/28/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
That's some damned good kink. I absolutely love this concept and it's executed very well.
Author's Response: Thanks, Froggy. I have to give someone else credit for some of the ideas though because I asked her what she wanted to see. The punishments of Bill, Tom, and Georg for when Gustav was affected by Georg's wish were her suggestion. I only wrote it out. Thanks for the read/rate/review!
Date: 02/28/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, can you give me the link to that story you mentioned in your first reply? I can't find it!
Author's Response: http://www.babydragons.biz/TheSaltyWench.html there you go! It's very long but very much worth the read.
Date: 02/28/08 07:48 am Title: Chapter 3
GO on!!! I wanna know what happens next!
Jeez, would Gustav be that kinky too in real life?
Author's Response: At this point, I'm not even sure whats going to happen next yet lol. As far as Gustav? Meh, I don't know. He's awfully quiet...
Date: 02/28/08 06:45 am Title: Chapter 3
I am enjoying this series ^^
Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear that! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/28/08 05:38 am Title: Chapter 3
enjoyed it?
well that's the understatement of the year! =0
i fuckin LOVED it! XD
can't wait for the next chapter! =0
and kinda hope there'll be another story after this one where Gustav dicides to make a wish after all (A)
i don't want this series to end! =0
Author's Response: This series may end but I can always write other stories. SaltyWench ruined my fantasy life where Gustav is concerned so I'll never see him any other way than a bad ass dominatrix. I just can't help it. Thank you for the rating and review!