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Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 09:15 pm Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

I'm afraid the second part will be never posted...

Reviewer: NekoKaigara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/11 09:27 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

Yes, he is

Reviewer: XxHalleyrockzXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/11 02:56 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

Bill's in trouble :0

Author's Response: Hehe I'd say so... :D

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 06:28 pm Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

Well now, this was interesting.

I must say that tbh, I'm not very fund of Andrej, but it's okay. I felt sorry for Bill, too. I know it is perfectly possible (likely) that this is exactly what he wants. It still breaks my heart a bit since I'm so much of a twin-fanatic.

But this is interesting. This site can alwayus use some nicely built BDSM stories and I will definitely keep my eyes on this one. :)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 08:04 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

Well lace me up and tie me down! Can't wait till you come back to town.

Reviewer: hunnybunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 12:37 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

I'm dying to read more!

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 11:00 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

This is delightfully steamy! Although I feel a little anxious for Bill - it can't be fun to be on Tom's bad side. 0_0 But I'm sure whatever you have planned will be equally as hot as Tom and Andrej together... MMM. :D I can't wait for more!

Jane

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 08:36 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

Uh, oh. I have a feeling that Bill is in for a bit of trouble and I don't mean of the sexual kind. Don't let Tom be too hard on him please. I am such a sucker for Bill/Tom/Andrej stories and this was definitely no exception. Great start sweetie and I can hardly wait to see where you lead us next. :) Have an awesome time in Germany and I shall be looking forward to what you have in store for us when you come home. :)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 01:22 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

My goodness yes he is pretty.

This is a wonderful fic so far. Very tension building, but I do feel the need to point out that you portrayed Andrej as a new 'toy' that didn't appear to have been played with yet, but when GUstav was fetching him you said He was adorned with some very tasteful trinkets that hinted he had already been well spoiled by the master. which implies he has been seen before.

I don't know if that was intentional,and is going to be explained in the next chapter, or if it was an honest error. I just thought I would point it out in case.

Other than that one small thing, I really loved this whole chapter. I am hoping Tom isn't too harsh on Bill, I am sure he didn't touch himself and just came from sheer Andrej/Tom hotness.

I can't wait to find out about this religious thing, and can't wait to see what happens to Bill, and everything. Keep up the lovely work! And have a fun trip!

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 12:35 am Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

*fans self* This is too hot. Three of the hottest man on Earth in the same fic.

I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: imaginarynumbers Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 11:51 pm Title: Fantasy Dangling Just Beyond His Reach

I'm not going to lie, I feel so bad for Bill! Just a question, I'm assuming because he's fairly well behaved and the pale face he came accidentally and wasn't pleasuring himself. (Happens to the best of us XD)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! To answer your question, Bill was behaving himself quite well, but things just got too hot for him to handle. *sighs* Poor Bill, I have a feeling Tom's not going to be too happy about that. (Haha, yes it does lol)

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