Date: 03/11/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I was so happy to see this updated. I adore your writing style on so many levels. Your vocabulary is extensive without being confusingly pretentious, your pacing is great. I really don't understand why there aren't more people reviewing (aside from the fact that the site's kinda dead today in that respect). I can't say this 100%, simply because I haven't seen enough from you, but from what I've read so far, I'd say you're one of the best writers on here.
And I've decided that I totally think Tom has an erect-o-meter in real life. Yes, I do. He so would.
Date: 03/11/08 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom was also aware that he needed to get his shit together because, realistically, Bill would never stop being easy on the eyes. He just had to stop caring.
Amazing line; so tragically true.
I appreciate your distinct writing style. It's wry, self depricating and roils with alacrity as it tumbles over emotions with surprise and very little grace. It's what people experience in real life; life is rarely smooth, but jagged edges we keep running into regardless of our knowledge that they're there.
And I definitely know a thing or two about a chapter that refuses to end, but it was well written and paced beautifully and moved the story along.
Date: 02/27/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Dude, this is awesome, why doesn't it have more reviews, seriously? You can feel the tension. I love when Tom pines instead of Bill, it's refreshing.
p.s. You're an excellent writer-generally don't comment unless someone is.
Date: 02/27/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
He was most at home on stage recently, pouring his soul into his guitar strings, feeding the audience his blood in music.
Awesome line. This fic is full of brilliant lines like that. How do you do it?
I'm supposed to be working on M3, but when I saw you updated, I couldn't help myself. Awesome job yet again and I can't wait for the next chapter!