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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/23 02:26 am Title: Chapter 1

I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/17 04:17 pm Title: Alternate Ending

this was a good story!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/12 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

wow, really good characterization of Gaga, it seemed really...her. really inspired idea

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to get as close as I can. :)

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/11 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Itīs looong. I love it!!

Author's Response: Yes it is! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: kiss the stars Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1

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Author's Response: LOL! Thanks. ;D

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 07:32 pm Title: Alternate Ending

oh, equally as beautiful. I'm so glad Lady Gaga did teach them that they were born this way. I was kinda afraid the alternate ending would end down a different route .-. But it didn't, it was gorgeous and perfect :)

Author's Response: Thanks doll!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Finally finally FINALLY! This was the best of best treats, reading this ^_^ I've had my eye on it since you posted but had to play good girl and avoid THF as much as possible. I still should be but there are times when... well when you post things as sparkly as this *_*

I love it! I've never really considered reading/writing Gaga and twins. Okay, I lie. I have because they're two things I love so much, but never ~really~ thought I'd enjoy it. Turns out I did enjoy it. This was SO stunning! The feelings you conveyed were so intense and full of character and there was always that underlying will-they-won't-they tone.

I'm excited to read the alternate ending. God this is GORGEOUS *_*

Author's Response: Haha silly girl. ;P I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks sweetie pie. <3

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 05:58 pm Title: Alternate Ending

This was an amazing story and I loved it. I enjoyed both endings and especially how Gaga showed them that being together was so right. Danke. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Tassu Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 08:11 pm Title: Alternate Ending

More great stuff from you (I loved Illuminated! You write substance use very well by the way), there's something about your writing that's totally riveting. This fic had two of my favorite things: "an outside" observer getting suspicious of the nature of Bill and Tom's relationship, and jealous Tom. Enjoying, shivering, holding my breath, yep. I love your very psychological touch, taking the time to describe the small details of their behaviour, body language, thinking patterns etc. The style definitely holds the reader's attention! Loved the dancing, loved the first kiss, LOVED the moment Bill saw the jealousy and want written all over Tom's face for example, so delicious! I actually liked the original ending better as I was almost certain you wouldn't make them go all the way for the first time with another person in the room, or made Bill want to get some pussy instead of just sausage (especially after Tom's “No, Bill, please. I don’t think I could bear to watch you and her like that.”) so I was quite okay with it as I found it more interesting and not as cliche as the alternate ending which, imo, was a bit flat (even though most readers probably prefer it).

I hope you write more, it's so hard to find stories I want to concentrate on 100%!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! -- I'm sorry you found the alternate ending flat. I tried to make it seem whole and full but I was tired at the time of writing it... I will definitely be writing more. :):)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 12:38 pm Title: Alternate Ending

I think I like the 2nd ending better, because I feel like Gaga was intruding in the 1st one. I get that it was for the sake of writing a 3some, but I think that first taste of eachother, the twins being that intimate with eachother doesnt need any more eyes. I think that that's a moment that should have been only them. That's my only complaint.
Oh, and if I wanted to be picky- you also reuse certain adverbs and adjectives too often IMO, cuz it was noticeable. But that's me really being anal. lol. You have a unique and really good writing style. You create tension in the air very well.
This was a really cool fic idea to have Lady Gaga interpret their feelings and try and lead them in the right direction.
I liked reading this very much. Great job!! :)

Author's Response: That's why I wrote the alternate ending, 'cause I felt the same. ;) I know I can get a bit wordy when I describe things, it's part of my style, but could you possibly name the ones I re-used too much? I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 10:14 pm Title: Alternate Ending

This is beautiful, too. ♥ Very intimate and loving, and no matter what I'm glad they got there.

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie. :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 09:02 pm Title: Alternate Ending

even more amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was absolutely amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 08:42 pm Title: Alternate Ending

oh, alternate ending was definitely much better, just perfect! thank you for writing it!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 08:31 pm Title: Alternate Ending

Aww, this is a lovely ending too!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: fanatic2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1

That was honestly.. beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Belated review is woefully belated. This has so much of what I love! I've wanted to see Gaga and the twins together for just about forever. :3 Very sexy and engaging - I adored the instant rapport between Bill and Gaga, and Tom's jealous bristling was such an excellent spark to the powder keg that got them all started. I also really loved that Bill made the distinction of "making love." ♥ He wasn't in it for a cheap fuck, he wanted the intimacy, and it really came through.

Love this, honey, it's so sexy and beautiful and everything I could have wanted to see from this pairing.

Author's Response: Rather belated than not at all! :) I'm so glad you liked it and that it lived up to what you were hoping for. Thank you! <333

Reviewer: voodoochildbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

so coooool :D

Author's Response: Thanks. :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was absolutely brilliant! What a great plot idea! Loved it! The way they finaly came together, thanks to Gaga was amazing. So hot and sweet the way they acted, i really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! XD

Author's Response: Thank you!

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