Date: 02/24/15 09:14 am Title: Caught Like A Fly
I get a big Harry Potter vibe of this, but that might be because I haven't seen the elemental bending movies/manga/anime. :-) It's pretyt good writing all in all, and I feel myself getting drawn in by the badboy Tom. I kinda like him. Only critism I have is why you've put Georg/Gustav as a main pairing? They're hardly mentioned. I don't know if you'll continue this, but I wanted you to know I've read and enjoyed what is there. :-) Thanx for the read!
Date: 11/16/13 02:45 pm Title: Caught Like A Fly
Please please please please ...........(does puppy eyes) finish this awesome story .... I loved from beginning to ...well now so please give us a new chappie
Date: 01/27/13 10:04 pm Title: Caught Like A Fly
-.- tf tom?anyways :D love the story! can`t wait for more. literally ;]
Author's Response: haha, thank you thank you!! ^.^ I'll try to put more up soon!!
Date: 01/22/13 03:19 pm Title: Caught Like A Fly
Woooh, just read the entire story, and gotta say, I really like it! ^^
It's very interesting, and the story's really original!
New chappie soon?
Author's Response: will do!! Promise c:
Date: 01/21/13 05:31 pm Title: Caught Like A Fly
omg that Tom XD Such a conniving bastard lol
Author's Response: Hahaha I love this maniacal (sorry for bad spelling lol) side of Tom :D so much fun! And lmfao, conniving bastard he is!!
Date: 01/21/13 01:34 pm Title: Caught Like A Fly
Wow ur back! Yaaay! I'm so happy to b reading this again :)
Author's Response: Haha I feel terrible for leaving for so long, but I'm back and hopefully to stay :D I'm glad you're still reading the story, too! Thanks so much ^_^
Date: 10/13/11 08:16 pm Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
UP .... DATE!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! xD
Please with TWC on top? *puppy eyes*
I'd love to read more♥
Date: 10/13/11 06:53 am Title: One Letter Changes Lives
Hehehe, I like the part where Bill whips waterballs at Josh and his gang xD
Give it to em Bill!
This is cool, I like it^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know I took forever to right tis response...and make a new chapter...but I'm back! And I will continue this story as much as I can ^.^ Hope you're still interested!
Date: 07/13/11 08:08 am Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
Happens to the best of us. Gay guys are almost always hot and they are so God damn adorable! Better than the alternative...
Author's Response: LOL!! thats so true!!! now Nelly knows!
Date: 07/10/11 06:09 pm Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
Poor Nelly. Though it may be poor Bill soon as Tom is such a player at the moment. I don't think sober Bill is going to like that.
Author's Response: exactly. I feel bad writing this story! hahaha
Date: 06/30/11 10:51 pm Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
Overall a great story in the making!! I like where you're going with it so far so keep up the great work lol I'm quickly getting wrapped into the story line and you're keeping the story at a good pace. It's not slow enough to annoy people, but fast enough to keep them wondering what's next like I said keep going! It's a great story, and you should feel really proud of it! ^^
Author's Response: Awwww thanks so much :') that just made my day!! I can't wait to keep writing now!! :)
Date: 06/30/11 04:55 am Title: One Letter Changes Lives
yes, i don't mind betaread it :) you can mail me on emmyjensen_94@hotmail.com :) and sorry for complaining all the time on the grammar, but you know, besides that it's really really good. and i really didn't thought you were 13, i thought you were older. when i was 13 i could barely speak english. i could understand the harry potter movies and food words and some more, lol. but yeah, just contact me if you want me to read the chapters once or twice before you post them!:)
Author's Response: Hahahaha okay I'll send it as soon as it's done :) and it's okay, I understand bad grammar is a story turn off :)
Date: 06/29/11 07:30 pm Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
I'm so glad for the update! I'm wondering exactly what Tom's intentions were getting Bill drunk. Maybe just to get him drunk? Poor Nelly :( I'm curious about how Tom will react to the kiss. Can't wait til u post again.
Author's Response: Don't worry, next chapter will explain Tom's reaction and ententions :) I'll write this chapter mich faster then the last!! Thanks for still reading! Haha
Date: 06/29/11 03:48 pm Title: One Letter Changes Lives
Okay cool!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 06/29/11 12:58 pm Title: One Letter Changes Lives
i do like this story, but there's quite many mistakes with the grammar, you know you go from past to present, and that's pretty irritating. you should definitely reread your chapters before you post them, or get a beta, because a story without many clothses, ok, just kidding, i mean without many errors in the grammar, is waaay better than one with. however, i think it was a great chapter. i love when they're drunk, lol. hoping for the next update to come sooner than this one ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, I understood there were probably even more grammer problems in this one then the others but it was because I wanted it to get it up quickly since it took too long to write it. I'm sorry about how bad the grammer is, I'm trying to watch my grammer but I guess I'm just not the best at it :) I'm only 13 so it's a little difficult since I still don't know all the grammer rules yet :) haha I'm glad you like the story otherwise :) if you maybe wanna take a look at the story like a beta I would be okay with that. Just let me know :) but I do have a beta already so I guess you would be a co-beta...? Haha I don't know we'll figure it out though :D
Date: 06/29/11 12:44 pm Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
I love the suspencful ending here! I have a saguestion for later in the story. Sorry I cant spell to save my life XD
I was thinking later there should be a propicy that will somehow save the world, it calls for an Earth, air,fire and water bender; Georg, Gustav, Tom and then no one knows is its eather Bill or Nelly. It turns out to be Bill and Nelly is heart broken and feels useless beczuse she still likes Bill. She is about to commit suiside and she has a visoin; after she kills hersef Bill will kill himself. she DOSN'T do it and tells Jost about it, also in the propocy there's a 'seeer', she gets visions and is important in saveing the world too!
Author's Response: Great idea!!!!! I love it! I think I'll use most of that!!! It might be a little changed but I would love to use it! Haha :) and yeah I can't spell either! Haha!
Date: 06/29/11 12:00 pm Title: One Letter Changes Lives
LOOOOOOVE IT! :D
Author's Response: Thanks sooooo much!! XD
Date: 06/29/11 11:12 am Title: One Letter Changes Lives
ugh i swear I wrote more, I also said that and he cheated!? and poor Nelly
Author's Response: Ohhhhhh hahaha yeah, like I said, Tom's a player!! Hahaha but that's what makes things interesting XD and yeah! I feel bad that I did that to Nelly! Haha
Date: 06/29/11 06:32 am Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
Tom has a girlfriend O:
Author's Response: Yeah! They've been at that academy for what? 2 days? And he already has a girlfriend. Hahaha what a player :D I love Tom <3
Date: 06/29/11 02:02 am Title: I'll Keep Your Dirty Little Secret
Aww poor Nelly she didn't deserve to find out like that.
Author's Response: Yeah I feel a little guilty about doing that to her...but it causes some drama so I decided to do it haha :) I feel so mean!