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Reviewer: DarkMistress Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

it's a nice little oneshot, but you might consider changing all the names to 'Bill' instead of Andreas.
good luck, you've got promise!

Author's Response: i actually forgot to do that its unbeta'd! but ty for pointing it out! :)

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