Date: 04/16/11 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
huh... WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you.
Date: 04/16/11 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill is so weird in the coolest of ways! Post more soon :D
Author's Response: I will try to. Thank you for the encouragement!
Date: 04/16/11 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, that was an interesting visit lol. That left me scratching my head right along with Tom haha. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Tom is definitely doing some head scratching. And not just because of the dreadlocks. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/11/11 11:43 am Title: Chapter 3
I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so! The next chapter's not really where I want it to be yet, but it will be soon I hope.
Date: 04/08/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 3
yeah, im curious.
I cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 04/06/11 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just started reading this story and I must say, I really want to keep reading to find out all the secrets I can tell have formed. You leave me waiting in suspence and I think that's perfect for a story called Murder & Mystery! You did a nice job with Tom's characterization by the way he acts in certain situations like when he and Bill were in the office. I'm also enjoying all the secrets about Bill's character. Man... if I saw an empty table with BILL sitting at it though..... Oh my goodness he could be my lunch ;) Yum! Hahaha <3 Oh how I love my Bill.... But being pushed up against Tom at a lunch table would be equally satisfying.
I'm dabating whether or not I think Bill actually did kill the kid.... I'm gonna take a guess and say maybe it was Andreas?? Just a guess, don't hold me at gun point if I'm wrong xD I'm thinkin maybe Bill was framed.... but I'm still not sure. Either way, I'm glad you're not rushing Bill and Tom's relationship and letting it progress naturally... well as naturally as Bill can manage as it seems Tom and Bill's personalities will clash often xD Hahaha! Anyway, I can't wait for more! Update soon:)
Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for the awesome review. It's great to hear your thoughts on the story! The boys definitely have clashing personalities. Their arguing is amusing to write, though. They rub each other in all the wrong ways--so far. ;) But I won't bring up the right kind of rubbing to Tom yet. I don't think he'd appreciate it. A rushed relationship it is not. I'm glad you're enjoying the mystery aspect of it, too. More will be revealed to Tom as the story progresses--whether he likes it or not! I will aim to update soon! Thanks again!
Date: 04/06/11 07:19 am Title: Chapter 3
This is so interesting! In so many different ways. And you have a natural talent, your words are pleasent to read. And trust me, I've had my fair share of cringe-worthy stories, but this one is absolutely flawless. :)
Author's Response: Aw. Thank you so much. It makes me happy you like it.
Date: 04/06/11 07:06 am Title: Chapter 2
This is written really great. Easy to read, like those books you kinda get lost in. :)
I love the whole concept and Tom is a hoot. (Do ppl still say hoot, nowadays?) :P
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! When I read I like to get lost in the world of the book so it's cool if someone can do that with my own story. (I haven't heard hoot in awhile, but I'm all for bringing it back.)
Date: 04/06/11 02:06 am Title: Chapter 3
interesting beginning. I look forward to more. I'd love georg's reaction to tom saying it was cuz Bill was gay. i can picture him looking so scandalized. =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm happy to hear you liked that part. :)
Date: 04/05/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is great !!! Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm excited to continue it.
Date: 04/05/11 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill's a pizzatarian...xD
Author's Response: Is that a thing? I would like to sign up. ;)
Date: 04/05/11 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
*Gasp* People think Bill is a murderer! He couldn't possibly be the one who did it!
Author's Response: Tom would agree! Based solely on the tofu, mind you. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04/05/11 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol you think a vegetarian kills ppl? LOL balancing tofu on crackers, sad existence, i tell ya...tho i doubt the real bill would go anywhere near plain tofu xD lolll i wanna know the purpose too
Author's Response: I challenge you to find someone who is both a serial killer and a vegetarian! (Er, on second thought, no I don't. Google can find anything.) I have heard Bill's a vegetarian, but you're right, I can't really picture him eating tofu. Just lots of rice!rnrnThank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/05/11 11:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooh Bill is all mysterious and I can't wait to know more about him. Georg seems harmless enough apart from being annoying. LOL I wonder what Tom is going to do? Stay away or sate his curiosity? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Unfortunately for Georg, telling Tom to stay away from Bill probably had the opposite effect. He's a contrary kind of fellow. Well, Bill wouldn't have let Tom get away anyway! Thank you--I hope you'll enjoy the story as thing progress too!
Date: 04/05/11 11:10 am Title: Chapter 2
*giggles* Oh lord, that's not a great start to Tom's new life. Tom's denial that he touched Bill first was funny, he seems to fit in with this weird bunch quite well.
Author's Response: A sign of things to come? Er, yes, yes it is. Poor Tom. I have some guilt. But not that much. ;)
Date: 04/05/11 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh this is interesting, very much wanting to know more. I love the peeping kind of Tom, very clever.
Author's Response: Tom was outright staring more than peeping--but it still fits! I'm glad the story has you interested. Thank you!
Date: 04/05/11 10:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm... Interesting. Intriguing. So many questions yet unanswered.
Author's Response: I'm happy you're intrigued by the story. Thanks so much!
Date: 04/05/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 3
I need answers now =)
Author's Response: That would be too easy! I'm happy you're curious.
Date: 04/05/11 02:49 am Title: Chapter 3
Tom's friends with a suspected murderer?!! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Enjoying this! Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Tom would probably object to being called friends--but yes, yes he is indeed!
Date: 04/04/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
awesome!!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!