Date: 04/02/11 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
hahaha nice I like i like
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do.
Date: 04/02/11 04:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg lol! Great chapter. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 04/02/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Best excuse I've ever heard for skipping school and going back to bed.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Tom felt properly justified, yep. Thanks for saying your interested in more!
Date: 04/01/11 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
great. that was productive....way to go, tom, rude boy
Author's Response: Poor Tom just isn't a people person. Or an anything-person, really. Thank you for reading!
Date: 04/01/11 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
"giggles"
Poor Tomi
Author's Response: Things will only get more difficult for him, too. He is long suffering!
Date: 04/01/11 02:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom is having some issues apparently :D:D:D
Author's Response: Tom's life is one big issue. ;)
Date: 03/31/11 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
*intro*
Author's Response: For reading! ;)
Date: 03/31/11 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the into =) This is really really good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 03/30/11 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
well, i liked it :) and i definitely want to know what's gonna happen next, so i'd say that makes it a successful intro.
Author's Response: Yes, a successful intro then. I'm happy it made you want to read more! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 03/30/11 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like it
its funny
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so.
Date: 03/30/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
'Right. Now Tom looked like the peeping kind of Tom. The peeping kind of Tom who peeped on other guys.'
Those sentences are golden!
And very well done with the rest as well ;)
Author's Response: It's an ironic but unfortunate name for him to have under the circumstances. The Bill-spying circumstances. Thank you so much for pointing out you liked it. So nice!
Date: 03/30/11 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start.
I really like your writing.
I would love to read what's next.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so, so much.
Date: 03/30/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Quite the memorable introduction. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Tom won't soon forget his introduction to Bill. Well, Bill won't let him even if he could. ;)
Date: 03/30/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting introduction! I'm really looking forward to where this goes :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I really hope you enjoy the plot!
Date: 03/29/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amusing and quite a unique introduction! I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, you make me so happy!
Date: 03/29/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well it was extremely short, but I like it. And for a beginning chapter it works :) I hope to see longer chapters with the same humor in it. I love Tom's little one sided war with Bill. Too cute, but I can so see Tom doing something as silly as that. But ja, hope there will be an update soon! :)
Author's Response: The rest of the chapters will be longer, but I'm glad it worked okay for a beginning chapter though! I was hoping to set up the tone for the rest of the story. Tom is bad naturedly silly, and Bill is--shirtless? Well, he gets more scenes later. With clothes!
Date: 03/29/11 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Honestly, it's a little confusing and i'm not sure exactly what's going on. I'm interested to see where it goes though.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry you found it confusing, but everything can't be revealed in the first chapter, right? That would be boring. Thanks for giving it a try anyway!
Date: 03/29/11 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it. Its very funny and different.
Author's Response: Thanks for being the first reviewer on the story! I'm delighted you enjoyed it.