Date: 03/12/15 04:52 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
Huh, I just realised that when I submitted my last review I wasn't even a vegetarian. Now I am vegan...Time moved on. This is still one of my favourite one shots on here, so thank you so much for writing it!
xxx
J
Date: 10/18/14 11:07 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
Oh my gosh, this was actually quite sweet. I loved the sub-plot, and the killer thing. Though, I know and respect many vegetarians (my 9 y.o bro, for one) the annoying 'how could youse' get old fast
Date: 11/30/11 01:14 am Title: Gustav's Revenge
i thought the twins where gonna screw them over in the end. still good though, haha
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/12/11 07:03 am Title: Gustav's Revenge
Oh I can't believe how the story just ended abruptly with Gustav full of regrets and remorse. There isn't anything about Bill's reaction to Gustav's accidental love confession. Maybe you shouldn't have put it in the story. I feel kinda crappy for reading this now, I know writing is very hard thats why I am not and I commend you for putting pen to paper as the old saying goes, but the ending sucked ass. Its like a cliffhanger!! Are you going to post another chapter, maybe?
How come nothing happened to Tom? You didn't explain the how and why, you just brushed him aside once they got to the hospital and he vented for a couple of hours and disappeared, never to be seen again.
Author's Response: Well, it was supposed to be a silly little oneshot and it was never meant to turn this emo and angsty, or to be taken this seriously :) I think Bill didn't really get that it was a romantic "I love you", and Gustav's love was just meant to stay unrequited. I wanted to leave the ending open and up to the reader's imagination, because even though they're not together now, it doesn't mean that it can't happen at some point in the future :) I have, however, considered the idea of adding a little sequel, and I might still write it, if I have the time and a good idea. Thanks for reading, though, even if it wasn't exactly your cup of tea :)
Date: 03/10/11 02:03 am Title: Gustav's Revenge
Aww, poor Gus. I can totally see why he'd be mad (I couldn't believe they said that, either!), but no way would he want to hurt Bill. Sweet story, bb! ♥
Author's Response: Yep. I thought it was time for Gusti's revenge since the twins keep annoying everyone with their "We're vegetarians!!!" XD But no, he would never want to hurt his Billi. Thanks! :D
Date: 03/09/11 02:38 am Title: Gustav's Revenge
Awwww... so cute
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 03/08/11 08:23 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
Aw :) Gustav loves Bill. You should make a second one-shot about this. See how things are after. :D Just a thought ^^
Author's Response: He does! :) And I was thinking about a sequel... I'll just have to see if I'm inspired enough, or have the time to write it :)
Date: 03/08/11 06:35 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
awwww, this was cute and kinda sad. i vote for a sequel where Bill and Gusti get together *puppy dog eyes*... *sigh* okay yeah i'll hush now. This was still really cute :)
Author's Response: Haha :) Well, I think I will write a longer Bill/Gustav getting-together fic at some point... But yes, I've considered a sequel, so I'll just have to see if I find the time :) Thanks! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 03/08/11 04:23 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
Awww I really liked this. Poor Bill. I was vegetarian for a while, and when I ate meat later it was really uncomfortable for my stomach. I feel bad for Gustav too, even though he's an idiot for giving the twins meat xD
Author's Response: Thank you! :) And yeah, I can imagine that your stomach has to get used to the meat again, if you eat it after a long time of NOT eating it ^^
Date: 03/08/11 03:02 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
I've never read anything even remotely Bill/Gustav, but this was actually kind of sweet...except the whole Bill being ill thing. ;) But still, good job :D
Author's Response: Awww, Bill/Gustav can be very sweet :D Thanks!
Date: 03/08/11 02:44 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
"A real vegetarian firstly eats vegetables" so it seems I wasn't real vegetarian, whole 12 years when I didn't eat any kind of meat or fish !
it's true that eating meat can give a fever to a person who was a vegetarian, but it's not that dangerous. anyway, poor Bill & Tom, friends shouldn't lie to each other, especially not on such matter. Gustav deserves to feel guilty!
Author's Response: Haha, wellllll... In Georg's opinion anyway :) Thanks for reading! <3
Date: 03/08/11 02:31 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
Aww this was cute. Poor Gusti though! I was hoping Bill was going to wake up and tell him that he loved him too XD Good little story though! :D
Author's Response: I know, right? But at least his Billi is all right :) Thank you! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 03/08/11 02:18 pm Title: Gustav's Revenge
That's kinda sad though :( so so sad Bill doesn't love Gustav like Gustav would want to :(
Author's Response: Aww, sorry :( Not every story can have a happy ending, though :) And maybe they'll still get together... in your imagination *g*