Date: 04/15/23 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! I'm such a sucker for the boys starting out as "enemies" before they become lovers.
Date: 09/30/19 06:21 am Title: Chapter 28
!!!!! You may not see this, but i love this story and all of your other ones! I've read them so many times they're just so good and i still get excited each time i read one
Date: 12/02/18 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 28
this was a good story!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 10/05/16 03:55 am Title: Chapter 16
Wasn't Tom allergic to Strawberries?
Date: 08/23/14 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 28
I'm not sure if I have left any reviews for this but whatever, I am. I haven't been on this site for a few years and I just decided a few days ago to come back here and read some stories. This story, I really like. It's so well done and the grammar and spelling is perfect. So, amazing story.
Author's Response: *dusts off story* wow, lots of reviews i never got to with this story. thanks so much for reading, and glad to have you back. *prepares to pimp self* feel free to check out my other stories. i've gotten tons better as a writer since i wrote this one.
Date: 06/09/14 02:29 am Title: Chapter 28
Best story I've read in ages!
Author's Response: thanks so much! and so sorry it took me 2 1/2 months to respond!
Date: 04/05/14 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg this chapter was so funny :'D Hahahaha
Date: 04/05/14 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story, I'll keep reading! *thumbs up* (:
Date: 04/06/13 06:09 am Title: Chapter 10
I don't believe i've ever reviewed this story but when I read the line of Bill saying he's upside down, it reminded me of transformers 2 when sam's mom eats the weed and then his dad picks her up and she laughs and says she's upside down. I busted out laughing. so thank you for making me laugh :)
Author's Response: i love transformers!
Date: 01/02/13 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 28
Sweet ending and bittersweet. It seems that of the group, Gustav has the most trouble accepting Bill and Tom's relationship, which makes me wonder why. But maybe that's just me getting stuck on a detail. :P
Thank you for writing and sharing your work. You have become one of my favourite authors.
Date: 01/02/13 10:03 am Title: Chapter 25
"Give me that railroad and I'll suck your cock."
Bill stared, not quite sure he'd really heard his brother correctly.
"You'll what?"
"I'll suck your cock if you give me that railroad."
"Really, Tom? For a railroad?"
This is on my mental list of all time favourite scene dialogue. Such a Tom thing to say.
Author's Response: i adored that scene too! something as innocent as a monopoly game leads to sexy times! yum!
Date: 01/02/13 07:12 am Title: Chapter 15
I've been re-reading a lot of your stories lately. Re-reading and discovering I should say; and realised somewhat guiltily that this might be my second read and I need to leave a review. So a few more should be popping up here and there..
This story, is awesome. Oddly, it's not my favourite of yours, but to read the progression of Bill and Tom's relationship flowing from the awkwardness, to acceptance and bonding in such a natural way is a pleasure.
The other characters, Gustav, Georg, Andi, Mike and Amanda work well too, without feeling as they've just been added and are merely superfluous.
Looking forward to refreshing what happens next!
Author's Response: i love re-readers! thanks for giving this another go. glad you felt the progression of their feelings was natural and not too rushed. i always worry about that.
Date: 12/03/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 28
I loved this story and how you wrote your characters. They're adults and can take care of themselves, but have flaws. The twins' getting to know each other phase and bantering felt real, not too cheesy or easy. I appreciated that their relationship to each other did cause friction with their other friends, and that while they got their other friendships back it wasn't all back to the exact same normal.
They were so cute with their kissing before it started getting hot and heavy. ;)
Author's Response: i loved all the pre-hot and heavy kissing! glad you did too. and when i first started this story i had things happening way too fast, so i'm glad my changes were good ones.
Date: 11/03/12 08:33 am Title: Chapter 16
There are no words to describe the cute
Author's Response: cute works
Date: 11/03/12 07:38 am Title: Chapter 13
SO CUTE I'M DYING
Date: 10/29/12 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 20
I just wanted to let you know how amusing I find your chapter end notes. They make me chuckle. Love the story too :)
Author's Response: they are fun, aren't they?
Date: 10/26/12 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 28
I've read this before, when you were posting it, but now I've read the whole thing again. Truly, truly amazing. Feel-good story :3
Author's Response: thanks so much! flattered to be a "repeat" story for you!
Date: 05/18/12 01:14 am Title: Chapter 16
"Good thing they left," he said. "Thought we'd have to have a rumble." I love that line.
Author's Response: tee hee hee
Date: 04/08/12 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 28
OMG! This was beautiful and very well written :D
I'm sad it's over even when I just found it and read it all at once n.n
I really enjoyed it, you are a very talented autor, you got me on the edge of my seat seeing their relationship develop and then melting with all the fluff :3 thanks for sharing it with us! *hugs* (Excuse my bad english... but my point is that I loved it! :))
Author's Response: no way! your english is just fine! thanks so much for reading and i'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 02/27/12 12:22 am Title: Chapter 28
That was a lovely story. Thanks for writing and sharing! It was a great way to pass some down time at work. :)
Author's Response: you're very welcome!