Date: 03/17/13 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can you update this petty pweeeassee? C:
Date: 02/10/13 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should totally update this :3
Date: 04/03/11 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great story, but doesn't really feel like Bill and Tom except for the names... I think this would work a lot better as an original, it's extremely well written and I'm really interested in what comes next.
Author's Response: ThisThmusis fic is an experiment for me to test my writing abilities. I did not want Bill and Tom in this to resemble the duo's real life personalities and that is why it was labeled as OOC. In my personal opinion I actually don't really think it's good for an author to continually base the personas of Bill and Tom off of their real selves as that does not add anything to the story, one can just go watch an interview if one wants to see that.
The point of this fic is supposed to a complete switch of personalities. For Tom who is normally the dominate force in most fiction pieces to now be feminine and girly, and for Bill who is normally characterized as weak and defenseless to become the dominate for e in the relationship that Tom must now rely on...So basically had this been slash it would be botTom
Date: 01/21/11 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm curious to see the other side of Tomi's personality. She's clearly attracted to strong, almost rude characters and I'm interested to see why she seems to want acceptance from them so badly and what it is about her that makes her get it.
Date: 01/20/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think Tom is a perfect opposite for Bill. In most femmeslash Tom is the dominant one. Bill usually gets stereotyped as the more feminate character. maybe thats because its more believable to th real Bill. This fic changes all that and thats why i appreciate it. you make the pairing seem so real. i love it and im sure others do too! srry i wrote so much
Author's Response: So very very every glad that you like Tomi in this! About Fem!Bill... you see... maybe this is just me being weird but I only like Bill when he is feminine as a guy. I do not like in Femmeslash fics when Bill is made the 'girl' and Tom plays the assertive role. I think it's mostly because when people write Bill in Femmeslash they make him almost too feminine to the point where he is no longer really Bill but a OFC. That bothers me
So in this fic Bill will be playing the more assertive role but in no manner is she thugish or an overbearing dyke because then that gets annoying as well. Belinda is a strong confident female that will play the protective guiding role in Tomi's life whole also being really pretty and attractive. Oh ja!
Author's Response: So very very every glad that you like Tomi in this! About Fem!Bill... you see... maybe this is just me being weird but I only like Bill when he is feminine as a guy. I do not like in Femmeslash fics when Bill is made the 'girl' and Tom plays the assertive role. I think it's mostly because when people write Bill in Femmeslash they make him almost too feminine to the point where he is no longer really Bill but a OFC. That bothers me
So in this fic Bill will be playing the more assertive role but in no manner is she thugish or an overbearing dyke because then that gets annoying as well. Belinda is a strong confident female that will play the protective guiding role in Tomi's life whole also being really pretty and attractive. Oh ja!
Date: 01/20/11 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww I love Tom's character in this! There aren't any fics in it with him so carefree in them :(
And I just noticed something, the side pairing is Bill/Georg, isn't it Tom/Georg?
Author's Response: Oh my gosh you're right!!! It's so weird for me since I'm used to having Bill as the normally more feminine character but now things are all turned upside down! Yes the pairing was supposed to be Tom/Georg and has now been fixed. Thanks for pointing that out or that could have caused some confusion!
Date: 01/20/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 2
As saidd before I love Tom's character. It's a nice twist, him being the ditzy girly one for a change XD
I've only ever watched the first 2 episodes of NANA, I didn't read the manga (that's why the fic was vaguely familiar to me). So I look forward to this fic, so I'll be motivated to watch the rest XD
Author's Response: No don't watch the rest! This story will only be following the NANA plotline up to episode 14 and then after that it's all me, although I have been adapting certain things so it's different than the series. But no don't watch NANA! There's a major bummer at the end of the series (well actually two depending on what kind of shipper you are) so I'm avoiding that in this fic and taking it another direction. So if you must, only watch up until episode 14
Aw you like Tom? Yeah this is new for me considering that the Tom persona I normally write is the masculine figure in my fics. But writing girly/ditzy/femy Tom is a lot of fun too! Gives Bill a chance to be the man for once and lets Tom explore his inner girl side hahaha. See in my mind if Tom were to be a girl... I feel like he'd go all out and wouldn't be a tomboy. Nah he'd be the kind you'd run into at the nail salon or in the mall shopping for his hats (I mean her shoes) haha
Date: 01/19/11 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
*re-reads part where Tomi sorta-kinda checks out Bill* XD
Nana is beast, and this is amazing. You stop, I will nom your face like a rabid hamster! >.<
...:3
Author's Response: iie!!! Kowaii reviewer! KOWAII!!!!
Don't know how much Japanese you know but haha it's always fun to hear the girl character yell 'scary'.
So very very glad that you're liking this so far to the point where you are threatening to Hamtaro my face off D: I'd been wanting to adapt a number of animes to the TH fandom for quite some time but felt I shouldn't post them until they are perfect because as a writer you want to do the anime justice. NANA seemed perfect for this though, especially with the new Femmeslash/Yuri section, and Bill fit to Nana O's character so well
Date: 01/18/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! im so reading this!
its a fic based on the anime nana
i can believe it, i loved the anime to death and now u combined it with TH, im sooo dying!
Author's Response: Awww thank you... yeah I'm actually a relatively new NANA fan. In fact I'm only up to episode 32 in the series right when Hachi finds out she's pregnant D:
However I do have friends that have already finished watching the NANA series and decided to go ahead and ruin for me who Hachi decides to go with (gurrr I hate Takumi).
Therefore the plotline of this story will really only go up to episode 15 and then I'll add my own spin on it as NANA gets far too complicated from then on.
Anyways thanks for your review it means a lot to me! :)
Date: 01/17/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, I don't like Georg very much >.<
But I love the storyline though! Can't wait to see Tom and Bill's relationship progress! ;)
Author's Response: Georg's character in this will be a real jerk. So it's okay not to like him...afterall Bill/Tom is the main pairing :)
Date: 01/17/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 01/17/11 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I like Tomi's character. This is so familiar but I don't know where I know the setting from :/ But I love it :D
Author's Response: Yeah in most Femmeslash that I've read so far Tom is always the more assertive tomboy and Bill is the girly girl. This fic is loosely based off of a manga called NANA (those are the characters in the banner) and Bill just fits the rocker girl more (the on the left in the banner) and Tom the girly type (on the right)
Date: 01/17/11 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1
:D is this inspired by that manga or whatever thingy called Nana? where there are two nana's meeting? and weeee, this first chapter was amazing :D :D and i was like "what? no no!" when this first chapter ended xD Yeah, so, uhm... I'll definitely follow this!
Author's Response: Thanks for you review...yeah it is based off of NANA but I'm changing the plotline a lot since there are some characters this fic could do without
Date: 01/16/11 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
...*dies*
Is this based on "Nana"?
Cause I love that series! XD
*places gold star on your nose*
Author's Response: Bingo! Wow I had no idea there were so many Nana fans in this fandom 0_0
Date: 01/16/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I only skimmed through the chapter so I can't be positive but your banner and summary reminded me of an anime/manga called NaNa, would it by any chance happen to be based on that?
Author's Response: Haha another fan!! Yes this fic is in fact based off of NANA... I absolutely love than anime and once THF added Femmeslash I knew that I had to write a TH adaption of it.