Reviews For Alistair Marquise
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Reviewer: baka_moyashi18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/13 02:47 pm Title: Your Family Is Rich, My Family Is Gay

Georg either wants to strangle Benjamin or is stressed because the twins are have their silent conversation thing that they do. I am willing to bet Benjamin has something to do with Georg looking like that.

Second time reading this! Love it!

Reviewer: Balla212ful Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/13 10:37 am Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

Loved this stor there's not thay many where Tom is preggers ^_^...My wonderful vocabulary...you are funny as hell with your gifs too xD had me rolling i was laughing so hard

Reviewer: 1204skateboarding Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/13 09:57 am Title: Nurse!Tomi

You look like Bill

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Date: 10/28/13 09:50 am Title: Your Family Is Rich, My Family Is Gay

Andi and Benji make me laugh so hard

Reviewer: 1204skateboarding Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/13 09:37 am Title: “…I would give up anything for you…”

Beautiful!!!!

Reviewer: 1204skateboarding Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/13 09:32 am Title: Wednesday and Tanner/ Bill and Tom

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: baka_moyashi18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 01:17 pm Title: Your Family Is Rich, My Family Is Gay

Ben looks like he's stressing Georg out in the picture. Ben appears as if he plots against Georgnd and the others.

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/12 03:36 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

Amazing story, but i don't let Tom die :-(

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/12 04:15 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

So, is he gonna die?

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/12 01:34 pm Title: #4

Bills dad :-)

Reviewer: baffrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/12 09:21 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

I just re-read this story and i still love it!! It still makes me laugh my ass off and cry like a 7-year-old... it's one of my favorites!! I love this story so, so much!!

Reviewer: yutana45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 12:51 am Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

I really liked this story, though I admit you kinda made me hate Andrej a little bit..:)

Reviewer: baffrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 02:32 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

I love this fic so mu-hu-hu-hu-ch *cries* let me die of happiness *wipes tears* Good job on the fic :')

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 03:33 pm Title: The Scarlets

This is so cute :) I think Tom would be really nice as a nerd with glasses, braces and hair down. :)

Reviewer: DarkAngel89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/11 10:31 am Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

Love this! It's so creative! I also love the pairings!

Reviewer: screamtillyoufeelit Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 03:03 am Title: Santa Isn't The Only Surprise This Christmas

This is so cute of a story! I love it

Reviewer: Levanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 10:12 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

I loved this story! Nice plot and everything. :] I hope you keep doing the gif thingys in your future stories they make my day. :P

Reviewer: shaggydog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 09:25 pm Title: The Scarlets

it`s interesting, but, dude.. so many typos..

Reviewer: dkdemon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 05:26 am Title: The Scarlets

Hi! I've only read the beginning of your story and like the idea of it - the grammar and weird sentence constructions however are stopping me from reading more..... I'm sorry:( Do you have a beta?

Author's Response:

in later chapters i got a beta

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/11 07:49 pm Title: When It All Ends Just Know That Your Not Alone

I'm on the fence about whether or not I liked this. Some parts were good, some made me cringe and others just had me doing the what the fuck face. I know how much author's work on their writing as I've been writing since I can remember almost but the quality in this seemed... a little under par from what it could have been. I also recommend a beta because the grammar and missing words made me want to cry. I'm a grammar nazi. It's a habit I picked up from my grade 11 English teacher. I don't know what it was but the characters to me, seemed to be fake and two-dimensional.

Please don't take offense to this review. I don't want to sound mean. I'm simply trying to help you become a better writer in the long run. Just try and work a little more on character developement and going into detail on important things in your stories. And make sure you check grammar!

Author's Response: Kthnxbai btw I have a beta

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