Date: 11/21/10 02:31 am Title: Eyes on Eyes
This was eerie, in a way, and a bit dark. It was like Bill borders on being obsessive with his brother. He wants to be his brother but can only be with his brother. On one hand, it freaked me out but, on the other, I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad it came across that way; the original certainly had a very dark egde to it that I was gld I could get across
Author's Response: I'm glad it came across that way; the original certainly had a very dark egde to it that I was gld I could get across
Date: 11/17/10 01:41 am Title: Eyes on Eyes
This was beautiful. It was so powerful and intense, and I always love fic like that. The scene with Bill taking his makeup off and pushing Tom to say that he was his was amazing. I just don't have enough words to describe how much I loved that part.
Best of luck to you!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Much of that was taken verbatim from the original, So I must credit that amazing dialouge to her.
Date: 11/16/10 03:44 pm Title: Eyes on Eyes
I really like this. I love Bill's perspective, his masks, his love for Tom. Best of luck in the contest
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thank you for reviewing.
Date: 11/14/10 07:30 am Title: Eyes on Eyes
Aw, this was sweet! Tom is perfection and I'm glad Bill can see that. I liked this remix a lot, it was nice to read and I could feel the twin love :)
Author's Response: Twin love makes life better in many lots of ways. :3 Thanks!
Date: 11/13/10 05:08 pm Title: Eyes on Eyes
That was very sweet. I love stories like this where their twins bond is so strong I can feel it. Very cute remix, I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm glad you think so!