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Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/12 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Please finish this!!! I want to know how it ends!!! Please please!

Author's Response: I had no idea anyone was still interested in Starlight, my poor neglected Who-fic. *pets it* Thanks for being interested though! Although I am sometimes very slow (I get distracted) I do not abandon anything, so it will eventually get the attention it needs!

Reviewer: Elianna Eldari Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

This is AWESOME!!!!!!!! Please, please, PLEASE continue this!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Starlight will be getting some attention soon, sorry I've been VERY behind schedule. Thanks for reading though!

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 7

Bad feeling intensifies. Bill's just been roofied, Tom's missing, Jack's obviously been overpowered, and the Doc and Rose are god-knows-where and there's a flesh eating monster. Imiku is planning to sacrifice Tom and Bill, isn't she? Bill's state of mind is too similar to that of the previous (late) two. Don't know how the Doctor is going to react. It was complicated when it was just felinoids vs. Crystal monster, but crystal monster turned out to have a taste for flesh, but felinoids sacrifice others to the monster. That's a proper moral dilenma for the Doctor. Not to mention his companions are in danger. I think he's going to get really angry. Can't express how much I'm enjoying this. Want to see what else you got cooking.

Author's Response: LOL! Bill's been roofied... that gave me such a chuckle, thanks! Dr. Who does have the most wonderful moral dilemmas. I am not even close to the imaginative machine that generates the actual show - but I do hope I can do it a bit of justice.

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

Urg, had a hunch about this. Wonder how the Doctor will respond, to this and Jack's situation. As I was writting that it occured to me that Jack can't die. Ooh, sumone's gon get it good. They dun pissed off both the doctor and jack. And that's the kind of commentary i sprout during an episode. This is so exciting. Another hunch, cat lady has sinister plans for the twins, seemed too fixated on them. I'm off to the next chap.

Author's Response: I appreciate your commentary on each chapter as you go through, I started writing this a bit ago so you've given me a needed push to get on to the next chapter. I've got a lot of stories going at once, but it's definitely this ones turn for some attention.

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

You made that hot. Surprised? yes, very. Loved it

Author's Response: Hey, it's Jack - Jack is hot! LOL

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm awed. This has a completely authentic dr who feel. I can see your poimt about the characters, but all i can say is that they are all realistically presented - even Imuke(sp?) seems concrete, lifelike.

Author's Response: Getting a well developed original character is important to me, so I'm glad you like the cat-lady. Heh.

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think it's remarkable how even though we have five major characters, they are all balanced - we can feel the individual presence of each and none grossly overshadows another. Love it when they are all participating in a conversation together and you can get a feel of their personalities. Aside from that, I'm trying to figure out the back story to the felinoids and their part in the story. They remind me a bit of the homo-reptilia that the new Doctor - Amy's - encounter. But I like the felinoids as well as the cavern, I could just picture them. And i have a very bad feeling about the trio that was herded off, the words blood sacrifice come to mind. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is such a big ensemble piece that getting everyone separate from one another and giving them all a chance to talk wasn't easy. It's a bit schizophrenic at times...

Reviewer: manic_seer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving this. I am a huge Doctor Who and Torchwood fan. I started following after Rose left and so I was a little hesitant to read. However your characterization is just spot on for the Doctor - esp his speech mannerisms. Grinned like a fool when he was introducing the boys to the Tardis. I was sure I'd love the Doctor, but you've also made me love Rose and Jack too, as well as the two of them with the Doctor. I don't know how, but you've somehow nicely integrated(can't think of a better word) the boys into the mix. I'm off to read the next chapter, but before that I'll just say that you are doing a fantastic job with this.

Author's Response: Obviously I am a huge fan too - the 10th Doctor and Rose are my favorite pair, so I had to give them an adventure. Considering the sexuality I threw into this, it's a very Torchwood type of story. Where Jack goes, sexyness just follows. Heh. Thank you!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

You know, I'd completely forgotten this was also a het story.. *shudders*

Anyway..what the hell was going on? What happened to Tom? And why did the Rielan want to bless him? And the godess...? I'm so confused! Seriously, though, I have a feeling this happened for a reason, and it's probably not a good thing..

You know what I think? Don't trust the cats..

Author's Response: As the old adage goes: Never trust a smiling feline. Heh.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 04:35 am Title: Chapter 7

Holy crap! Now that was some intense yet amazing writing. Fantastic chapter! Looking forward to more =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little worried about this chapter so it's good to know it went over okay with someone. LOL

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/11 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6

Duhn, duhn, duuuuuuhn... This suddenly went from steamy and cozy to shocking and horrible! Oh, isn't it all just SO 'Doctor Who'? Now I'm really curious as to what's gonna happen next! ;)

Why were the rielan at the twins' door and what exactly is hidden in the rift? Will Rose and the Doctor be caught red-handed? And will Jack once more escape the cold claws of death? Up next on BBC...oh, no, wait... Haha! :p

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hey, there - I was wondering where the brilliant banner artist had got to! Now that we're getting deeper into the meat of the story my mental mud is thickening - however Starlight's entire plot is already mapped out, so my only excuse for slowness is my quest for a grad degree. Up next on the BBC... LOL! Too funny, and thank you!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/11 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

OH MY GOD!!!! I can't believe this is what I've been missing!! o_O I've been so busy I'v ebeen putting off reading this story until I had the time to properly enjoy it...and no that I'm here, I realise I've been putting off steamy Jack/Bill/Tom action! *smacks oneself* And, and... I'mn SO moving on to the next chapter now! *crosses fingers for Tom/Jack hotness* Oh, I can only say - brilliant! Truly brilliant *drools*

Author's Response: You know I was a little surprised when throwing Jack, Tom and Bill into bed together didn't garner a bigger reaction from the general population of THF. LOL I guess I didn't push them, er - far enough... but I'm glad you did enjoy it!

Reviewer: linkinsync182 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

awwwe I was gonna do this too! Except with the 11th doctor instead ;) I didn't end up getting through even chapter 1. I get so bored writing now..anyway, good on ya for writing thiss~

Author's Response: Thank you! This actually wasn't my idea, but rather a fic prompt I picked up in that section of the website and ran with. I'm a huge New-Who fan, so I couldn't resist!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

Another fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 08:35 am Title: Chapter 5

WHOA! I would have never imagined a threesome would happen. But DAMN! I'm so glad it did! That was hot xD Fantastic writing. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yeah, Tom and Jack argued quite a bit in my head about it (well, TOM did anyway) - but I just couldn't help myself. Heh. Thanks!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 4

Hmm I wonder what the felinoid's interest in the twins is. Hopefully it's nothing bad. Another fantastic chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to be updating again now that I've got the time to do so.

Reviewer: Horseluvr14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oooh! Please update! I've never read a Tokio Hotel and Doctor Who crossover before!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm pretty sure this is the first crossover of it's particular type, I can't take credit for the idea since it was a fic prompt, but I'm enjoying writing it. I should be updating more regularly now that I've got more time.

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

This isn't fair! >:O My reviews keep getting cut off. T^T I feel cheated.

Author's Response: Gack, I'm sorry!

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

*scolds Jack* *hugs Jack* *does secret couple things with Jack*
Oh right, I'm supposed to be reviewing.O__O Kay. The chapter was sooooo cool! I can't write this descriptive, I envy you >:O :D

Author's Response: Thank you! *pets Jack* He's so fun to write for honestly, not as fun as the twins - but close!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, this world sounds really interesting. I like how you describes the cavern, and I could totally picture the crystal walls. Interesting that it's growing though. I wonder what kind of significance it has ;)

So....cat-humans? Haha, I like it! :) The kind they had in New-New York kind of freaked me out, but if they'd been slightly more human-like, and slightly more alien-looking (like your appear to be) I think I'd be okay with it..

So, now the question of course is: What happens next? I'm really excited about this story - I know I've said it before, but I'll still say it again. The whole Doctor Who/Tokio Hotel crossover is simply fantastic! Honestly, I have no idea why there's not a whole lot more. I mean, the endless possibilities! ;)

And do I see a little Jack/Bill thing happening? I don't think Jack would mind - though, fact remains that he never minds ;) And Tom..hmm, I'm not quite sure what to make of it yet, but I'm thinking maybe the male celebrity might be the Doctor. Now, that's definitely interesting!

Oh, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Actually, I'm totally psyched about this entire story! :) Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I think you're referring to the Who species they just refer to as 'cat people'. I like them, I thought about using them too, but in the end decided to come up with an alien race of my own so I wouldn't be locked too far into existing cannon. It's a bit easier.rnThank you again for reading and enjoying! I'm enjoying writing this one quite a bit!

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