Date: 07/10/14 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hey there, i just wanted you to know that I think this is a great story and I hope you will finish it someday. ..
Date: 05/18/13 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really hope you will update this story one day...
Date: 12/19/11 07:36 am Title: Chapter 6
this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait tell u post some more!!
Date: 07/09/11 06:51 am Title: Chapter 6
WOW...it was good! great! would like to know what will happen...please, you did a great job with it. Resume Tera would love to know what will happen...Why was Tom in prison in the first place? what happened to Tom while he was in prison? Please resume out please...
Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw. dont worry I will be resuming this story, I'm just working on other things atm ^_^
Date: 03/26/11 02:33 am Title: Chapter 6
thanks for the update! =)
Date: 03/24/11 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay, update!!
Bill is so cute, so easy to be embarassed!
Author's Response: Yes! :DrnI am so very sorry it took so long lol
Date: 01/30/11 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
you have to keep writing this story, I am in love with it and i fell in love with the first cahpter!!! you have to keep writing this!
Author's Response: Once I come up with ideas for the next chapter I will for sure continue it ^_^
Date: 11/05/10 11:39 am Title: Chapter 5
oh...come oooonnn...please...mooooore...
georg n gustav are funny though!
Date: 09/26/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
any update, please?
this story is too interesting to be just abandoned....
Author's Response: It hasnt been abandoned, ive just been busy with one of my other fics
Date: 09/12/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 5
Lol. Georg knows all :D
This is great to read
Date: 08/26/10 05:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Interesting, looking forward to more.
Date: 08/25/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
with fics that are twincest and G's love it makes it very complicate and usually a bit unrealistic... Idk, I don't like reading two different parings involving totally different characters. Say, Bob + Rob were the main pairing, Bob + Dan would be fine b/c it's still.. I need to shut the G's love was so short. xD I doubt it'll take a big part in the fic. :p
ON TO THE FIC.
I think Tom will continue to use drugs. Most defiantly.
Georg knew about the twins b/c they make it so fucking obvious the fans know? ;)
I think Tom's real problems were just that it's jail. He just appeared back and Bill is so worried about him - that's all. Though I think there may be a side effect and things going around in his mind. Idk what it is, but could have bad and terrifying memories from jail and threats still after him?
*is sending love*
Now, I loved the twin action. xD The kissing, it was so beautiful. ;)
I seriously don't get why the G's were laughing. O_O I didn't find it funny at all but actually really bitchy. xD
Poor Bill though, acting like a wife is hard. :p
xD
Update soon I love this and ignore the first part of this review. :p
:)
Author's Response: Yea lol there wont be anything romantic happening between the G's. Georg was just kidding to help lighten the mood XD
Date: 08/25/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
lol peeping G's. How did Georg find out o.O
Date: 08/25/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh I reallyyy want to know what happened to Tom in prison that's making him like this!!
Date: 08/25/10 04:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill and stupid Tom :(
Date: 08/24/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
*hisses* You DIE. I will hunt you down and then make you write good Tomi...
Good chapter.... except for her.... *hisses again* -_-u
Date: 08/24/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response: LOL this review made my laugh so hard XD i loved it. and tom wasnt given money after the sex, it was drugs XDrnand i will update as soon as possible ^_^
Why laugh? XDDD LOL. Oh it was drugs.. dude I fail. O_O ...
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How did I skip over it? I was totally picturing money. Pfft. My mind. So she gave him drugs... *scratches chin* Inter-est-iiiiiiiing.
Yay updates! :D
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Author's Response: hahaha i guess i could get started on it now XD but chances are in about 30mins ill get distracted from it XD... hey if you want you can fid me on facebook, the forum, or deviant art.......this convo is building up my reviews XD
Date: 08/24/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response: and i think its funny that no one has pointed out, asking how toms shirt magicaly dissapeared XD
You know, when I read it I was like wtf'ing the whole time. I first assumed maybe Bill just raised it, or stretched the collar to view the tattoo, or just took it off. XD And then I was like O_O S-So the G's walked in with a half naked Bill and Tom on the floor shirtless?
Awkward....
xD
Author's Response: yea i had written half of the chapter a couple weeks ago then wrote the other half the other day, and forgot that he had shirt on.......oh well XD.rni can use that to test peoples brains, see if they notice hahaha
Date: 08/24/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omg so this chapter is like amazing. Really makes me wonder A LOT. I think this chapter really broke down the story! The G's coming was like 'uh oh' lol and how they covered their.. secksieteim was lulzy. :p
Then Tom left. I was like, wtf dude. And I loved how Bill ran back after him all confused like but Tom pushed him away. Great to make him firm and 'donttouchme' kind of shyt [sort of] b/c I mean he just got out of jail! (Reminds me.. why did he leave jails so early? You said good behavior.. is that the real reason? DUNDUN.)So obviously he will be a little more aggressive and not his fully kind self.
Then Bill discussed his feelings to the G's, and he looks so broken up. I wonder how Bill will find out the truth.
This Tony guy scared me when he was introduced, O_o but really nice add to the plot. When Tom took the girl and fucked her on the spot I was like.. hmm... why? Wait, let me reread ;D ah okay he just wanted a fuck. :p Pfft, take Bill! And how he didn't accept the money...? New man or something else up? So interesting.
I wonder what will happen when he gets home and Bill's reaction. I'd love to see a more aggressive Tom acting harsh toward Bill b/c that would seem like.. the result from prison and from having a roommate that most likely raped and violated him. [at the "princess" thing in chapter one...] So I'd be looking forward to that.
The G's? Hm, maybe they'll be like o_O WTFMAN and maybe attack Tom..
Drugs? Take 'em and fuck up a million times. :p
SERIOUSLY PLEASE UPDATE SOON BEFORE I DIE.
^ jk, but do continue this fic has potential and I'm really enjoying it! :D
I love it. :)
Author's Response: LOL this review made my laugh so hard XD i loved it. and tom wasnt given money after the sex, it was drugs XDrnand i will update as soon as possible ^_^