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Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 11:22 pm Title: Prologue

Wow your story runs in a fast conclusion and hanging but i like it anyway. Are you planning to have a sequel to this? Btw about the twincest thing, I find them adorable since sibling affection like that are very rare but that was what twins are all about. My hubby had a twin and the connection is really true mostly they had the same track of minds even they are far apart their connections physically and mentally exist they feel each other when the other one is troubled the other feels the same but they are not like the K twins feeling affectionate to each other but I find it adorable.....LOL.....well goodluck and hear from you soon....:D

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 03:07 pm Title: So, it's not all

awwwwwwwww finished soon! hhihi it was totally cute

and u write it so beautiful ^-^

I loved u'r happy ending it was amazing :DDD

<3 <3 <3



Author's Response:
It did... ~ thanks so much :D happy endings are sweet, especially when so much shit had happened earlier. ^_^ Your reviews really lightened by day thanks so much. <3

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 03:04 pm Title: No, they're /red/!

hahaah bushido!?! now this is wonderfull for Billi n_n



Author's Response:
yah.. xDD I used Bushido b/c I'm not a fan of Own Characters at all. But yes it's wonderful :DDD

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 03:01 pm Title: Search

n_n it was a sweet chapi love it :DD



Author's Response:
thanksss :)

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:59 pm Title: Free

awww I hope Bill will find some place to stay u_u



Author's Response:
<3333 he did~ and again, thank you for your review(s) ^________^

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:58 pm Title: Humans you need not, instead...

oh I thought some animal would hurt billi hihih I like this chapi :D



Author's Response:
haha xDD That's funny. Thank you :D

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:54 pm Title: To be Left

;_; oh I hope lilgirl would help!

u'r story is soo interesting :))



Author's Response:
I hoped she had too... thanks :D

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:51 pm Title: Begin to burn like the frozen

o.O they are sooo bad -_- poor little bilii!



Author's Response:
Yeah.. o_o poor Bui :l thanks for your review sweetie :3

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:49 pm Title: Bye?

Grrrr Tom is such an asshole >_<

story is totally cool! :D



Author's Response:
Yah he is.. xDD thanks so much for your compliments!

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:46 pm Title: Preparation

I realy love this story ^.^



Author's Response:
and I really love your reviews ;)

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 02:45 pm Title: Prologue

omg T_T poor Billi.........



Author's Response:
Omg really thanks soooo much for reviewing each chapter. :D It really REALLY made my day... *-* <333333

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 06:36 am Title: Preparation

what the hell T_T he is a human !!
sleeping on a cold floor ?at home?
so living in a forest alone wasn't so bad compared to this cursed house and those psyco kids


But I still love Tom xD

Author's Response:

hahah yah. xDD I lol'd.... forest could count as better too. xDD

rn

Tom makes me giggle. xD His character is so fucked but lulzy in my fic. xDDD

rn

thanks for your review<3! Love you ;)

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 06:22 am Title: Prologue

Hey Anah ^_^ .. I like this chapter so much .. I like how you write the details and I'm so sad about bill and I feel that I will love him so much in this story xD
those kids in this house make me so angry !>_<

..that part

"He was pushing him on the swing and teaching him a little game he knew. His game was to twist the chains over and over again until they reached your neck causing you to no long coil it, then let go to spin in circles until your laughter turned into joyful tears. Bill had left to get a drink of water, leaving the little boy to explore with the chains. When he came back, the boy was dead. The reason was to be left unknown. "

OMg .. that's so cruel T_T

Author's Response:

Omg Narcissa<3!

rn

Thanks so much for your review<333 and for your compliments. :D Yah the kids are idiots D; again love you :3

Reviewer: xRawrrxRawrrxRawrrx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 01:25 am Title: So, it's not all

It was my absolute honour to send a nice review, this story deserved it :D

I'm just about to update One Good Turn, and I've added a special little announcement at the bottom about your beautiful story :D xxx

Author's Response:

Thank you! <3rnHehe I saw it ^-^ Care to link it though? Again thanks so much!!1 <3333333

Reviewer: xRawrrxRawrrxRawrrx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/11 10:32 pm Title: So, it's not all

Wow. I am actually speechless at how incredibly amazing and beautiful this story is. I never noticed your story before, and I have no idea why. It is absolutely brilliant!

I was tranced into each chapter, I couldn't look away, I was absolutely desperate to continue reading. From the very beginning line in the first chapter, I knew it was going to be a beautifully written and amazing story and it didn't dissappoint in the slightest. Just... wow.

Even though there isn't going to be another chapter, I'm excited about re-reading it. This is definetly going to be put onto my favourites. It definetly deserves more attention than what it has recieved. I'll be sure to put an announcement at the end notes of my next update on One Good Turn, for my own readers to read this.

This is one of the best storys I've read in a while. Absolutely amazing job, Bill's characterization was just breath taking and beautiful.

xxx

Author's Response:

You have no idea how happy this made me. :)rn

Yah... I don't want to sound envious or whatnot, but I didn't understand either why my story was getting very little recognition. Actually that really bothered me. :p But your comments are really beautiful, and I keep rereading this gorgeous review. :)

rn

Really? An announcement? :D That just makes me want to cry. < 3 thanks sooo much! You are truly amazing.

rn

Thanks so much<3 Reviews like this inspire me to write more stories like this. Lately I've been trying to do something more like the TH writers here, but I'm never willing to go on with them. Again, Thank you. *__*!!!1 I think I've said that a few times now, but this really brightened my night. <333333333

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/11 10:17 pm Title: So, it's not all

I love you honey

Author's Response:

<333 love you too :)

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/11 01:29 am Title: No, they're /red/!

Aww Bill. Maybe he finally found his place ;)

Author's Response:

Yah maybe he did :3 Thanks for reading/reviewing<3333

Reviewer: k_rant Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 04:07 pm Title: No, they're /red/!

i've been reading this fic since i joined but i never tracked it cuz it hadnt updated for awhile. ur story is really addictive and i always want to know whats gonna happen next :D. i'll review more!

Author's Response:

Thank you. <3333 I'll post the next chapter tomorrow.. thanks really. :)

Reviewer: 1zippy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 10:06 pm Title: Search

I love the plot of the story :D its sweet. I cant wait until you post the rest of the chapters! And i hope Bill gets revenge :D

Author's Response:

<333 yes! :) I updated it now. xD After so many months... you made me remember this existed haha. Revenge.. we'll see. :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW ^^

Reviewer: MicroNinjaMonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 09:14 am Title: Search

Firstly...I'm so sorry it took me so long to get to reading! D: I finally found time to sit down and catch up on reading all my tracked stories (and damn it is going to be a looooooong night) so I'm here :D

Only 3,000 words?! But it's ending so soon! ): And yes, God is mentioned quite a few times o.o I'm curious, what was this before you Tokio-fied it? :3 Ahh, the thought of Bill with red eyes, I'll just never get over how amazing that would be~ I just love how Akai is there for him, like after so long he has a true friend. It kind of reflects the personality of the real Bill well, since he's such an animal lover. The bruises ): The description of Akai, is also beautiful to me ^^ I kinda laughed a little at his dilema over Akai's gender, so cute x3

I'm sad this is coming to an end, but it has been amazing so far, and I know the rest will be to, I'm phsycic like that ;D

Author's Response:

Omg a review.. wow... *________* Thank you.rnIt's okay, at least you caught up. (:rnUh huh. Dx I don't remember all the God-references, but lol... Hmm, well Bill was Bill, I based his character on err... Bill Kaulitz. Everyone else in the fic had a different name.. If you click the story notes, you'll see I did it for a contest. It was still Tokio Hotel, but like hardly. --- Bill with red eyes. xDDD Omg. :3 -- It's supposed to reflect his personality. :p Yeah yah, I wanted to use an animal versus like.. a human. We already have too much "Tom is theeee geewd ked" and shyt. I adore a cute Tom, but I felt like he would work for the part as the bad guy.. In the original idea, Tom was Bill's twin, but dies after Bill is born. To show more of a curse, idk. Then when I used the G's I was like; there must be Tooooooooom! --- xDDD Yeah.. I have like no idea how to identify an owls gender. Assuming Bill won't either. :p ~~ Yes. :) Thanks for this review seriously! :) Love you<333333

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