Date: 11/08/11 11:22 pm Title: Prologue
Wow your story runs in a fast conclusion and hanging but i like it anyway. Are you planning to have a sequel to this? Btw about the twincest thing, I find them adorable since sibling affection like that are very rare but that was what twins are all about. My hubby had a twin and the connection is really true mostly they had the same track of minds even they are far apart their connections physically and mentally exist they feel each other when the other one is troubled the other feels the same but they are not like the K twins feeling affectionate to each other but I find it adorable.....LOL.....well goodluck and hear from you soon....:D
Date: 01/21/11 03:07 pm Title: So, it's not all
awwwwwwwww finished soon! hhihi it was totally cute
and u write it so beautiful ^-^
I loved u'r happy ending it was amazing :DDD
<3 <3 <3
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Date: 01/21/11 03:04 pm Title: No, they're /red/!
hahaah bushido!?! now this is wonderfull for Billi n_n
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Date: 01/21/11 03:01 pm Title: Search
n_n it was a sweet chapi love it :DD
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Date: 01/21/11 02:59 pm Title: Free
awww I hope Bill will find some place to stay u_u
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Date: 01/21/11 02:58 pm Title: Humans you need not, instead...
oh I thought some animal would hurt billi hihih I like this chapi :D
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Date: 01/21/11 02:54 pm Title: To be Left
;_; oh I hope lilgirl would help!
u'r story is soo interesting :))
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Date: 01/21/11 02:51 pm Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
o.O they are sooo bad -_- poor little bilii!
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Date: 01/21/11 02:49 pm Title: Bye?
Grrrr Tom is such an asshole >_<
story is totally cool! :D
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Date: 01/21/11 02:46 pm Title: Preparation
I realy love this story ^.^
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Date: 01/21/11 02:45 pm Title: Prologue
omg T_T poor Billi.........
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Date: 01/18/11 06:36 am Title: Preparation
what the hell T_T he is a human !!
sleeping on a cold floor ?at home?
so living in a forest alone wasn't so bad compared to this cursed house and those psyco kids
But I still love Tom xD
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hahah yah. xDD I lol'd.... forest could count as better too. xDD
rnTom makes me giggle. xD His character is so fucked but lulzy in my fic. xDDD
rnthanks for your review<3! Love you ;)
Date: 01/18/11 06:22 am Title: Prologue
Hey Anah ^_^ .. I like this chapter so much .. I like how you write the details and I'm so sad about bill and I feel that I will love him so much in this story xD
those kids in this house make me so angry !>_<
..that part
"He was pushing him on the swing and teaching him a little game he knew. His game was to twist the chains over and over again until they reached your neck causing you to no long coil it, then let go to spin in circles until your laughter turned into joyful tears. Bill had left to get a drink of water, leaving the little boy to explore with the chains. When he came back, the boy was dead. The reason was to be left unknown. "
OMg .. that's so cruel T_T
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Thanks so much for your review<333 and for your compliments. :D Yah the kids are idiots D; again love you :3
Date: 01/18/11 01:25 am Title: So, it's not all
It was my absolute honour to send a nice review, this story deserved it :D
I'm just about to update One Good Turn, and I've added a special little announcement at the bottom about your beautiful story :D xxx
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Date: 01/17/11 10:32 pm Title: So, it's not all
Wow. I am actually speechless at how incredibly amazing and beautiful this story is. I never noticed your story before, and I have no idea why. It is absolutely brilliant!
I was tranced into each chapter, I couldn't look away, I was absolutely desperate to continue reading. From the very beginning line in the first chapter, I knew it was going to be a beautifully written and amazing story and it didn't dissappoint in the slightest. Just... wow.
Even though there isn't going to be another chapter, I'm excited about re-reading it. This is definetly going to be put onto my favourites. It definetly deserves more attention than what it has recieved. I'll be sure to put an announcement at the end notes of my next update on One Good Turn, for my own readers to read this.
This is one of the best storys I've read in a while. Absolutely amazing job, Bill's characterization was just breath taking and beautiful.
xxx
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Yah... I don't want to sound envious or whatnot, but I didn't understand either why my story was getting very little recognition. Actually that really bothered me. :p But your comments are really beautiful, and I keep rereading this gorgeous review. :)
rnReally? An announcement? :D That just makes me want to cry. < 3 thanks sooo much! You are truly amazing.
rnThanks so much<3 Reviews like this inspire me to write more stories like this. Lately I've been trying to do something more like the TH writers here, but I'm never willing to go on with them. Again, Thank you. *__*!!!1 I think I've said that a few times now, but this really brightened my night. <333333333
Date: 01/17/11 10:17 pm Title: So, it's not all
I love you honey
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Date: 01/01/11 01:29 am Title: No, they're /red/!
Aww Bill. Maybe he finally found his place ;)
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Date: 12/30/10 04:07 pm Title: No, they're /red/!
i've been reading this fic since i joined but i never tracked it cuz it hadnt updated for awhile. ur story is really addictive and i always want to know whats gonna happen next :D. i'll review more!
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Date: 12/29/10 10:06 pm Title: Search
I love the plot of the story :D its sweet. I cant wait until you post the rest of the chapters! And i hope Bill gets revenge :D
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Date: 09/20/10 09:14 am Title: Search
Firstly...I'm so sorry it took me so long to get to reading! D: I finally found time to sit down and catch up on reading all my tracked stories (and damn it is going to be a looooooong night) so I'm here :D
Only 3,000 words?! But it's ending so soon! ): And yes, God is mentioned quite a few times o.o I'm curious, what was this before you Tokio-fied it? :3 Ahh, the thought of Bill with red eyes, I'll just never get over how amazing that would be~ I just love how Akai is there for him, like after so long he has a true friend. It kind of reflects the personality of the real Bill well, since he's such an animal lover. The bruises ): The description of Akai, is also beautiful to me ^^ I kinda laughed a little at his dilema over Akai's gender, so cute x3
I'm sad this is coming to an end, but it has been amazing so far, and I know the rest will be to, I'm phsycic like that ;D
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