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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 07:36 am Title: Chapter 4

this was really good story!!
an so sad what happened to bill
u should make a sequel to this!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've never thought of doing a sequel to this but I'll see if I can find the time. :)

Reviewer: Ayumi_Vasquez Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

*sad* :'( but happy too

Author's Response: Danke. :)

Reviewer: Ayumi_Vasquez Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Jezzzus....in the name of all that's sweet and holy. You put yourself in Tom's shoes really well, I could almost smell Bill shampoo. LOL

I've haven't read much twincest, but I'm cool with it. This is the youngest that I've read about them having a sexual realationship. And Bill definatly got the sexy treatment he deserved.

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. This was my first stab at twincest and it holds a place in my heart. I appreciate you reading all this stuff. You don't have to you know. I know you have lots of stuff to write, hint, hint!!! :D

Reviewer: Wampira4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 07:11 am Title: Chapter 4

x.x wow never expected this ending!

Author's Response: That's what I was hoping! Thanks for reading and reviewing sweetie. Love you.

Reviewer: efilsiydolem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/25/10 06:31 am Title: Chapter 4

Well that was quick but it was oh so beautiful!! Another one of your masterpieces!!! Love you!!!

Author's Response: Thank you my love. Your reviews are always much appreciated! Love you.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow that was a powerful ending! I had to read over to get what happened o__O It's sort of bittersweet, having to hide away for the rest of their lives, but at the same time, being with the one you love forever with no disruptions. Kinda paradise. But not entirely. Ms Maril, you're so taleneted! I loved reading your work, I can fully understand why you're such a creatibe hit on THO :D

Author's Response: Aww Emily. Thank you so much. Hopefully my next twc will be an improvement over this one. I'm collabing with someone and I think this one is going to be a keeper. I appreciate your comments so much sweetie. <3

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:51 am Title: Chapter 3

Aw, that was a beautiful love-making scene! It made such a prettttty picture in my mind. I love those twins. And you writing them, it was such a delight to read :D Definitely enjoyed that chapter :) Only one to go!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 2

I really enjoyedc chapter two, as well! I don't often read first POV, I don't know why, it just doesn't do it for me. But having said that, this was a joy to read :D I'm already half way through, wow! But glad I've got a couple more chapters to go :)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1

So, I'm finally reading some of your work, Ms Maril ^__^ And this is really good! I like the detail you've included. And it's definitely an interesting start :D You're a talented author, I'm going to have fun checking out your work.

Author's Response: Thanks Emily. I'm glad you're enjoying my first stab at twc. I'm now working on a second one with a collaborator and can hardly wait to start posting. I appreciate your feedback believe me. <3

Reviewer: Panthere Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

O.O
i just read them all!!
holy shit
BILLS LEGS!! I TEARED UP THERE!!!
this was awesooome!

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. My first twc so I have lots of room for improvement. The one I'm working on now will hopefully be an improvement. <3

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 4

you have a good plot going.. though it seemed a bit rushed and all that stuff. It's really good. It kept my attention though the ending seemed like it was forced to not make it easy for them. but anyway I think you're new right? haven't seen you before. so there's a lot of room for improvement! -hugs-

 

I hope you didn't mind that. XD



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. I am new to twincest and THF. I do have another story on here though. It's not slash though. I've only been writing for a couple of months and this is my first twincest so any help you can give me is greatly appreciated. Danke. <3

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 4

so sad, yet so sweet. i wish you would write more twincest tho, you have great ideas. if you dont want to do it yourself, you can get a co-author or a beta to help you out and give you ideas. i truely hope you do reconsider writing more about our favorite twins, sugar~

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I may try more in the future. It's not that I don't have ideas I just don't know if I have it in me to write twincest. I really appreciate your input. Danke. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 3

Dang...only one chapter left! Really anxious to see if they find out thier connection & if so will it matter to them, or remain blissfully unaware.
Thank you for the fast update's!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I hope you aren't disappointed in the last chapter. It is up now if you want to read it. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh i'm enjoying this very much! Only two more chapter's?! That's a sin...ok i'm being greedy-i'll take what I can get! ^_^
Off to the next chapter to catch up...

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying this. It's only the second story I've posted on THF so I really appreciate the comments. Danke. <3

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Very sweet & very hot. Nice!

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

everything was great. i loved it, and i can't wait for the next chapter. the only thing i can think of that this story needs is a few comma's, but it's really great.

Author's Response: Thank you. I've only been writing for about three months so that means a lot. I love to find out how I can improve. I just posted the last chapter and I hope you enjoy that one as well. <3

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

im enjoying this very much, thank you! i can't wait for the next installment~

Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

MOREEE! :d

Reviewer: nox Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

at some point you changed the narrators view point. you turned it into a first person narration....!!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm really liking this-the interaction with Bill and Tom is great. Love that Bill is not portrayed as a scared, shy, abused boy-thank you!
Really anxious for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I tried to make Tom and Bill equal partners with Tom being only slightly more experienced. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the remainder of the story. <3

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