Date: 04/30/23 11:22 pm Title: their game.
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 05/13/15 06:29 am Title: their game.
OMG, I think I've read this before, I think... but oh man, I'm so glad I read this again. It's so sexy. I love stories where it starts out like a game and then becomes real. Even through all the smut, u can really feel this one. You can feel Bill's heart breaking, and how even though they can't stay away from each other, Tom tried, I think that's what he did, I think he was testing Bill and testing himself. But that ending is golden.... "I have a boyfriend"... that is a seriously amazing way to throw caution to the wind, to really make it public, especially cuz it's Tom saying it, and I think it shows how lovestruck he is too, that he's just giving up control completely so he can be with Bill. This is super super great. Thank you so much for writing this. :) :) Loved it!
Date: 01/12/15 01:47 am Title: their game.
Awwwww this was so good! It was somehow incredibly realistic that that's how they'd start a relationship and that bit in the strip club was brilliant! Love a surprise botTom! Great work :)
Date: 02/04/14 04:07 pm Title: their game.
You write beautifully :) loved it!
Date: 10/11/13 05:33 pm Title: their game.
The ending is perfect!!
Date: 06/21/13 11:37 am Title: their game.
Boys will be boys lol.
Great story
Date: 03/10/13 04:39 am Title: their game.
Plz add another chapter!!! I love this story!!!!!
Date: 09/28/12 03:09 am Title: their game.
oh I still REALLY like this story.
Date: 09/13/12 08:40 pm Title: their game.
WOW i loved the ending it made me laugh XD and i dont mind the grammar mistakes!! :)
Date: 09/13/12 02:21 pm Title: their game.
I dare any software studio to come up with a game that's more fun!
Date: 08/07/12 11:05 pm Title: their game.
Epic fckin perfect OMG I love it with all my heart I love how is write it, just brilliant!!! thank you so much for share it!!!!
Date: 07/12/12 09:37 am Title: their game.
A sequel would be enjoyed :)
Date: 06/18/12 10:52 pm Title: their game.
oh boy that was one epic ending xD but very good!
Date: 05/25/12 06:08 pm Title: their game.
This is a fantastic idea. It was all brilliant, but there needed to be more.
The different sections of this story should have been separate chapters, and it needed to have more descriptions. It's like you have taken all the important bits of a story, and squashed them together. (I'm sorry, it's hard to explain.)
The ending was a bit too vague as well. I'm not sure what exactly happened.
With a little work (perhaps get a beta reader for the grammar) this could be a really amazing story.
Please dont give up on this story, I hope my comment helps :)
Date: 04/08/12 09:04 am Title: their game.
I absolutely adore this story! The first part if my favorite - the litany of places they have sex that very first night....Eeee!!! Fun!