Date: 05/25/12 05:39 pm Title: There's a real simple procedure.
Hahaha, great ending. Fantastic story. The twins are so cute together.
There were a few grammar problems in this, so I would suggest either reading over it, or getting a beta reader. But it's still a very entertaining fic.
Date: 05/15/12 11:51 pm Title: There's a real simple procedure.
Firstly, if Georg wore eyeliner he would look exactly like Axle Rose. He already looks remarkably similar.
Secondly, this was AMAZING. I loved it. It was adorable and hilarious and a buch of other adjectives I can't think of right now.
Date: 03/17/11 10:25 pm Title: There's a real simple procedure.
That was cute haha. Loved the endingxD
Date: 03/07/11 06:24 pm Title: There's a real simple procedure.
I...didn't really like it... I mean, you picture Bill as some slutty whore and Tom as an asshole who only want Bill for one reason and still consider himself straight even if his brother's giving him blowjobs...
Author's Response: You're not gay if you're GETTING the blowjob. *eyeroll* And Buddy, it's FICTION. Anything goes here. Study up.