Date: 10/26/13 05:35 pm Title: Day 2
update sooooooon :)))
loooved it :)
Date: 10/26/13 05:35 pm Title: Day 2
update sooooooon :)))
loooved it :)
Date: 07/30/11 02:19 pm Title: Day 2
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 03/20/11 12:25 am Title: Day 1
Loved it! Keep updating! :)
Date: 10/20/10 01:51 pm Title: Day 1
sorry I just worked it out! >< oh dear. this is really amazing, keep writing! (:
Date: 10/20/10 01:46 pm Title: Day 1
this is gonna sound sooooo dumb....but I've just joined this, and I can't work out how you actually read stories on here? >< I want to read this, it looks amazing!
Date: 07/06/10 01:04 pm Title: Day 1
For your first story, I thought it was very good. Many other first stories I have read were completely and utterly horrible. So much so that I stopped reading after the first chapter; if they were lucky that I got that far.
You have a good deal of raw talent that will improve, I believe, with the continuation of writing. You seem almost like an intermediate writer, not merely a beginner. Keep at it, and I await your next chapters.
:)
Date: 06/28/10 01:38 am Title: Day 2
a nice dinner and an evening stroll...sounds very nice...except the part with the camera and girls...it's gotta be tough being famous...
Date: 06/28/10 01:32 am Title: Day 1
i liked it...and you should continue writing for your sake, not anyone else's...do what makes you happy, not everyone else...
Author's Response: Yeah your right (: I enjoy writing alot! Thanks btw.
Date: 06/21/10 11:09 am Title: Day 1
Ooooo likee it a lot :L
Update soonn!
Date: 06/19/10 01:46 am Title: Day 1
awesome you should right more chapters:)