Date: 09/15/13 11:07 am Title: You need to ask permission...
Hallo,
I find it very interesting to learn about this kind of relation. I'm sure Bill and Andi love each other and I would really like to read a story about their everyday life .
That's why I loved this OS. I was surprised at the begenning, attempting to find what Bill did, why he woke up so early. And then I understood that he had to do things he was told.
Well I really like this story and I hope you will go on.
Please tell me if you do !
Bizzz - kty
Date: 12/17/10 02:33 am Title: You need to ask permission...
Andie is... I can't find words! it's amazing, I love how you describe everything in detail, I want more!
please!!! turn this to a series!! I fell in love for this story :) it's amazing, it's pure sex and love, I beg you!! *O* I will be you're slave if you make this a series.
Date: 07/15/10 04:43 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
You just have to write an other one. I simply love it. Please write me one more. Please??
Author's Response: Will do, you have my word. I am currently working on a few stories that will keep me busy, but I will eventually begin a series with these characters. If you are a member of my facebook then you will receive posts regarding when stories are updated or newly posted. Be sure to send me a message with your THF username so I know who you are. - Halcyon
Date: 07/06/10 03:41 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
Holy shit, Halcyon.
I am not claiming, in any way, to understand this. What I do know, however, was that it was HOT. If this should ever turn into a series I would love to know about it.
Keep it up, dovie. We love you.
Author's Response: Thank you my dear. I actually have been considering turning these characters into a series. Right now however I am quite busy with HUMANOID, Hour of Separation and Eye of Argonia. I doubt I will continue this one for now.
Date: 07/03/10 11:40 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
i think im not alone in this when i say it hurts some of us when bill is in an abusive relationship.
Author's Response: I am sure that many people would agree with you. However, Bill is not in an abusive relationship in this story. The interactions that he has with his dominant are very caring, and highly misunderstood. In a relationship like this it is always the submissive who holds the power. rnrn"You should not have agreed to be a god for me if you were not willing to assume the duties of a god. And we all know they are not as soft as all that."
Date: 06/15/10 05:59 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
this is the story I've always wanted to read! thank u for writing it
Author's Response: I am very glad that you enjoyed it, it was one of my favourites.
Date: 06/09/10 02:49 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
Oh sweet baby jesus.
O_O
Where do i even start.... I... You.... Hmm.... Kinky Halcyon.... Really kinky.... you're a little freak dude.
WHERE do you come UP with this stuff!? I mean i really want this to be a series but i have got to know WTF is going on between those two!
Does bill enjoy this or something? Is Andi just a person who likes to dominate.... Is bill somewhat a sex slave for him or something?
I feel SO confused it's not even funny......
Is this supposed to be Kinky and Hot, or Sad?? Or both??? i thought it was a bit of both personally....
Damn dear.... this is just. WOW.... just WOW.... lol... i think
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: 06/08/10 08:10 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
I don't usually read this pairing, but warning got me interested and wow, I liked! A lot! Exactly perfect BDSM for my taste tonight. Very, very nice and hot job.
Especially I liked to way their relationship was portrayed, because as you explained, it's often misunderstood. I can't say I fully share the opinion of the right nature of BDSM, but I think the world has room for different ways to practise it. However, the most I enjoy the total, volunteer submission Bill provited. I firmly believe that it's ALL about the balance of power, mental power. I prefer style where you can make other one do anything with a snap of your fingers withpout anything forcing, because that person WANTS to and knows his/her place, enjoys to be treated like that, because it's safe and right for him/her. I think you captured the spirit nicely here.
Oh, and I also liked how Andi put Bill gag on him to the extreme even if BJ's are usually not my favorite, because I think they are usually boring scenes.
Very nicely done. I liked a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you Amdee, I am glad you enjoyed the story. This is one of my absolute favourites within all of my writing and I am happy that you were able to receive something special from it.
Date: 06/06/10 10:10 pm Title: You need to ask permission...
Wow at the picture of the shoes. Idk why, but I cannot see Bill in those shoes, no matter how feminine he is.
Yes I highly enjoyed this. :)
Take BDSM seriously... I don't know how to take seriously or as a joke. I just read and enjoy it. It sometimes makes me very sad and I do tear up at when the beatings get really bad, but I ENJOY it and I *love* it when I cry at the hardcore bondage.
I didn't read your first of this series ( I will after this review ) but that was an amazing fic.
Puppy..... XP
In the fic if I were to try to take the BDSM seriously, say umm. how to word this. Andreas loves Bill so much he can't stand flaws in him.. err no, I cannot word this. Let me try again... Andreas basically wants Bill to know his place, and by punishing me he's showing he actually cares about Bill and doesn't want him doing anything incorrect or messing up. He wants him perfect, for him...
You know I can't describe it. o.o
But that was beautiful.
And I was totally looking for reading something like this. I was in the mood, and I logged into THF to read a fic of abuse and torture.. and I found this, the banner is -obviously- a woman but damn, I totally enjoyed this one.
The whips, and Bill's fear... and Andi's possessiveness, yet love. It's like bipolar and almost love hate relationship, but it's still love. I don't know if I'm right, I think I'm 100% wrong lol. Tell me what *YOU* think since you wrote this and apparently take it seriously.
Plus this fic was more serious than most BDSM fics. Most are like "omg I enjoyed it so much" in the POV of the one who is getting it performed on... Hmm...
Lovely fic and please respond (:
Author's Response: I am glad that you liked this story.rnrnThe relationship between Bill and Andi is very strong and very beautiful in this story, at least for me. The two of them have a connection that allows a very deep intimacy and trust. The relationship of a Master and a submissive is very different depending on the couple, but one aspect that always carries through is the desire of the submissive to have their life (or aspects of their life) controlled, monitored or restricted. When a submissive chooses a Master, they are giving the keys of their salvation into another's hands, something not easily done. They are asking another to be a god for them, and being a god is a very taxing duty and privilage.rnrnI don't believe that Andi hates Bill in any way shape or form. He loves him, and he is trying to be the force that Bill wants him to be. Luckily for my version of Andi, this comes naturally to him. rnrnI am sure that I will eventually write another with these characters, I am thinking of turning it into a series.rnrnThank you so much for your kind and constructive review :)