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Reviewer: QTPieS Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

OOOOOH! I LOVE THIS STORY!! xD UPDATE SOON!!! pwetty pwease :)
i like the ofc, she's pretty cool, haha, and your summary caught my eye.... perfection is SOO over-rated :) lol
i like your writing too.... its reall hard to make the first chapter intriguing, but you managed fine
favouring this!! n_______n
II <3 it so far xD

Reviewer: AmiiAmaze Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1

You write so good! I can't believe it! How long does it take for you to write something like this?

JUST LOVE IT :D Keep writing!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! I smiled so big when I saw this!!rnUhm..it usually only takes me about an hour to write a chapter for a story and actually really like it after making few touches, but I rally kinda wanted to finish the story before I started posting, but once I'm done with the second chapter, I plan on posting it next Sunday.rnThank's again, so much!

Reviewer: darkuniverse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story is pretty interesting. You described everything properly, and I really like your style in writing...the only things I'm not too fond of are the german sentances...I know that you sort of explain what it meant after the sentance, but I recomend you use some other way to idicate that something is said in German...other than that, I like this story and I would appreciate it if you continued writing it...XD

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! For now, I'm pretty sure this is the only German that will be in the story, but I will keep that in mind for the future! Thanks again!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! For now, I'm pretty sure this is the only German that will be in the story, but I will keep that in mind for the future! Thanks again!

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