Date: 12/01/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this so much, and i agree with melaina, i would kill my self if justin beiber was my brother... but i'd kill beiber first. and i love justin's sister reaction when melaina said that. its was hysterical!
Date: 11/13/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pahaha that was great. It took me a while to figure out who the "I" character was, but after that, everything became clear. I loved the bit with the surgical masks! And I'm not gunna lie...I want to be Mel. So bad. >.
Date: 06/08/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, very well done! I think this story is incredibly funny, it really made me giggle a few times near the end and that's saying a lot.
Now, if I have to be critical, I have to say that the story is really hard to follow in the beginning. The fact that it's never mentioned from whose point of view you start your story, makes it confusing. I often thought "who is this person?" while reading and that disturbed me a bit.
But it got better after a while. With the bits and pieces you tell us, we at last can form a picture of this 'Mel'-person.
Really... I enjoyed it more and more. I'm also a kind of anti-Bieber-person, and I could really recognize the characters Bill and Mel... very realistic.
All in all, very nice entry! Good luck x
Date: 06/03/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
sorry, i swear i really REALLY wanted to read this...but the "bieber" warning was just too much for me to bear.
kidding. best of luck with the competition! :)
chiara
Date: 06/03/10 02:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This was funny! Love the masks so they don't catch "The Fever". LOL!
Date: 06/02/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
That was to funny!!!!! rofl!
Date: 06/01/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
God, I am VERY glad that none of my family members like Justin. I cannot imagine having to put up with that. Anyway, nice card pick and the story fits pretty good along with it.
Date: 06/01/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
jaja! *wipe tears*
gott! so amusing... i like it so much!
and oh my, how i wish i could be bill's sweetie *smitten*
it's so...romantic (the part when u described how they met 4 d 1st time..u didn't tell much, which is good. let my imagination handles that..huhu)
n seriously, ur sis is like that??
wow..ur very patient indeed!
i like this story cos it's somehow true. i mean, the whole bieber vs tokio hotel thingie.. i like both! but tokio hotel is Number 1, definitely !!
all d best!!
Date: 05/31/10 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg the surgical masks so they wouldn't catch the fever was brilliant! Great job!
Date: 05/31/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I HAD to read something with a Bieber Fever warning. :D The surgical masks just made it. Very cute!
Date: 05/30/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol, having to know anything about Justin Beiber would be torture, it was quite funny how you put 'torture' in the warnings :o Warning; Justing Bieber alert *runs and hides*
:O I want to see Bill wearing Tom's clothing!
This was downright hilarious, I love how stalkerish Mary is, she has his hairbrush? Lmao.
I love how Bill was wearing protection over his whole face, he didn't want to catch the beiber fever, lol. Neither would I, but it's conquered the world sadly :)
This was aweosome, I'm going to read it again :D x
Date: 05/30/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL! I loved the 'torture' warning on this. Perfectly apt; having to go to a Bieber concert would be torture. ;p
Date: 05/30/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know anything about Bieber either, but this was entertaining. I'm just imagining Bill in Tom's clothing and a surgical mask lol.
Date: 05/30/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG it was hilarious. I love it XD .
I actually react in the same way as Bill and Mel everytime someone mentions Mr. What-his-name , too .