Date: 06/11/10 05:42 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
aw sweetest ending ever, what a charm this fic is ^^
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I`m so flattered :) I`m so happy you liked it, and also took the time to review :)
Date: 06/09/10 09:39 am Title: If He Really Wanted To
OMG Awwwww sooo cute!!! It's like, twincest and not twincest, if you look at it through you're eyelashes xD I love this kind of Bill, reminds me of myself, I would totally act like that if somebody broke up with me like that. (I actually already did, minus the screaming because I was in the hospital at the time and I was the one who dumped. But I was still extremely pissed xD)
Anyway, it's a really cute and fluent story, and quite original as well! Japanese artists... bah :p
I wish you the best of luck with the challenge! x
Author's Response: Ooh, Im`sorry about the breakup ): Oh no! Why were you in the hospital? I hope you`re better now <3 rnrn*giggles* I agree :) Not really twincest, just mostly lol :3 Thank you very much for your compliments, they mean a lot :) rn
Date: 06/05/10 08:54 am Title: If He Really Wanted To
This was very sweet! Nice range of emotions. I liked the big build-up, and how it ended with sweetness. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I`m very glad it pleased you :) Thank you tons for your super-sweet review <3
Date: 06/02/10 06:56 am Title: If He Really Wanted To
Ah, twin fluff, how it never, ever gets old. I wanted to feel good about myself, having a hunch right off the bat at what Japanese artist was referred to in this story, and once the details starting coming I snapped my fingers and humphed in triumph, as if it was some fantastic feat. XD If it is who I've deduced it to be, then I sympathise with you Billa - I was not all too happy about him getting hitched either. Especially since I questioned his sexuality for almost a decade. (Speaking of him, I'm going to see him live in 22 days, yum. Now if only Tokio Hotel could come join him, it would be a hot summer in T-dot!)
Anyhow, I'm not entirely sure I saw the relation to your chosen card at first, though after a quick analysis, I supposed the near comical animosity was your inspiration, yes? Rather than utilising it in a more literal fashion, obviously. I had the distinct feeling Tom's character toward the end had switched gears for the worse; I think his words and actions were too youthful, perhaps too, what's the word... baby-ish for Tom's persona.
In any case it was a fun read, writing was fluid, and was fuzzy and light - hitting the spot just right like any good fluff does. Well done.
Author's Response: Haha, you *are* amazing! ;) Pyshic abilites, I`m very jealous :)rn rnI know, right? Miyavi, what were you thinking? Oh, well, we stil have TH, right? :)Didn`t we all question Miyavi`s sexuality, and well, I think he made out with one too many jrockers on stage to be fully straight. I`m going with bi for now lol :) rnrn(You`re very lucky! I was going to go to that show, but I couldn`t get to Toronto for it T_T)rnrnYes, definitely, I think this is more just what Bill was thinking through it :) Tom is a bit juvenile, you`re right ^^` sorry! rnrnThank you so much for your very kind and helpful review! I`m so glad you liked it and thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! :)rn
Date: 06/01/10 04:18 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
When I seen your card I was like "This is going to be interesting. Not quite sure how it will fit but I'm sure it will somehow" and then I read and yes, I do indeed see how it fits. OH! the "saggy old ho" line made me laugh.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! *giggles* Billie can be creative when he`s in the middle of a diva-bitch-fit lol XD rnrnThanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 06/01/10 10:52 am Title: If He Really Wanted To
ur style of writing reminds me of my friend's. very detailed sentences. and yeah, your vocab is good indeed. varied choices of words, in my personal opinion. even I can't do that, lol. envy u. not bad at all considering that this is ur first attempt.
great job! all the best!
Author's Response: Really!? How cool :) I just hope I`m even half as good as them :) rnThank you so much for all the good feedback! It makes me really happy to know I didn`t bomb this lol :) rnrnOh, I`m sure you can! :) <3 rnrnThank you very much! :3
Date: 05/31/10 06:37 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Who does he think he is, breaking up with Bill? For shame.
The ending was perfect.
Author's Response: *shakes head at Miyavi stuffed in closet* I have no idea, I mean, really! :) lol rnrnThank you so much for reading and reviewing <3 I`m so happy you liked it! :)
Date: 05/31/10 05:23 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
aww i really loved this! The last line was adorable :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I`m mega happy you enjoyed it, and I think so too ;) rnThanks again! :3
Date: 05/31/10 12:04 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Oh, I like this alot. And I knew who that Japanese artist was as soon as you said 28...Miyavi, maybe?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I`m super-glad you liked it, and took the time to review <3rnDefinitely Miyavi, lol :)
Date: 05/30/10 08:13 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Aw, the last line is precious. =) I really liked all the description, too!
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you! :) It means so much to me that you liked my story! :D Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! :)rnrn
Date: 05/30/10 06:56 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
awww that was cute, I loved this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I`m so happy to hear you loved it! What a compliement! :D
Date: 05/30/10 06:13 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Tom's a brave man not to shrink away in the face of Bill's rage. Though he might have if it was directed at him! lol Of course, Tom makes perfect sense and Bill's lucky to have him. :)
Author's Response: *giggles* Isn`t he? The bravest of the brave :D rnHaha, maybe :) Indeed he does, and I`m very happy you liked it <3 Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 05/30/10 05:01 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Haha I wouldn't dare nor want to break up with Bill fucking Kaulitz! Very sweet ending, they always have each other and that's what matter the most !
Author's Response: Haha, very true! (on both counts) They do have each other though, and I`m pretty sure it`ll always be that way <3 rnrnThank you very much for your review, it makes me happy to know you liked it!
Date: 05/30/10 04:46 pm Title: If He Really Wanted To
Awww. Poor Bill, but Tom is a lovely big brother in this. The end melted me :D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You`ve no idea how happy your review made me, so thank you ver much for taking the time to send me a review :)