Date: 08/19/10 02:14 pm Title: "Please stay, Tomi"
Good oneshot... But it seems you had the lyrics wrong in a few places. :/
Author's Response: Yeah, I forgot three lines I think.. I saw it first when I had posted the story, so I decided not to do anything about it. And there might be more faults but I don't know about them.rnBut I hope you liked the story anyway :)
Date: 05/26/10 01:17 am Title: "Please stay, Tomi"
ohhmyybill...i cantt stopp cryingg
amazingg storyy but really sadd
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)rnI'm sorry you're crying, but I sort of intended to make it sad, at least I tried to..:P I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/25/10 10:07 pm Title: "Please stay, Tomi"
I think this is the first story that has ever made me cry. GREAT JOB (:
Author's Response: Thank you :) I love the stories that make me cry, so I wanted to try to make one too, but I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/25/10 06:35 pm Title: "Please stay, Tomi"
This was simply so sad. I like how the end came together, it was well written. Also thank you for the very last two lines of the song. I never knew them. Very nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you, That's what I intended to do, so it's good it was sad.. :P rnYes, I think the two last lines are the ones that make the song so good, I love them. rn