Reviews For 7 Twinly Sins
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Reviewer: tomisgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/11 03:05 am Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

MORE!!!!! please?

Reviewer: Septum Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 07:39 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

I don't know why, but Tom Jr. made me laugh so hard :3 pretty name for Tom's..... thing. Rofl. Loved it!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 05:54 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

I wanna see those Lust photos! Lol.. What a great idea for a photoshoot...

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 07:31 am Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

BAHAHAHA. I love that. Ugh, I hate it when it's all, "I've been in love with you since ~*forever*~, Tomi." And then Tom admits he has too, and everything is peachy. It pisses me off. But...well, you made this one hilarious. XD Thanks for that. Anyway, the rest of the story was really great. I like the photoshoot idea a lot, and poor Tom having to listen to Bill recount all that stuff. D:

Good job, hon. :3

Reviewer: StillDollChan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/10 10:33 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

*licks lips* oh this is lovely~ well done dear. >3

Author's Response: Danke!

Reviewer: Lothirielwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/10 04:20 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

Damn and how.... ya know I would love to see those pics.... mmmmm

Author's Response: So would I, actually lol

Reviewer: the vampire bunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 07:47 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

and wat happens next??.........i wanna know >.

Author's Response: I think you know what happens lol

Reviewer: squishy07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 09:25 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! SYNNIE I LOVE YOU!! THIS IS....WOW!!! *gives you cookies and sparkly confetti* YOu should wwrite a sequel!
Love,
Ashley(formerly hummer07)

Author's Response: *Giggles and dances under confetti whilst nomming cookies* I'm glad you liked it so much. there prolly won't be a sequel though

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 09:09 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

I like it ! Really cute and sexy story!

Author's Response: ^^ yay!

Reviewer: dubistheilig Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 08:19 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

*___________*

Author's Response: ^.^

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 04:53 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

Hmmm.. ok, so I loooved the 7 Deadly Sins photoshoot idea, and your writing was pretty good. The build-up of tension was great. Poor Tom, hehe.
However, I don't think I understood the end... like, it was way too sudden and I don't think it fit with the story. Bill saw Tom orgasm and then wanted to stick around because of undisclosed sexual feelings?... I'm sorry, but I think the end needs a bit more explanation. Other than that, I liked where the story was going.

Author's Response: More stuff does get explained, we just don't see it. Life's like that - it's like a door gets closed, or a camera shut off.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 03:07 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

So cute...and hot!

Author's Response: XD

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 01:57 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

*shifty eyes* I didn't spend near five minutes drooling over that pic of Tom in the banner...

*dies* I love Bill's "Like hell you are!" comment. epic!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 01:25 pm Title: Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Pride, Wrath, Greed, Lust

Hee, I'm pretty sure Tom is gonna LOVE the new direction, not just like. Trés hot! I loved this soooo much!

Author's Response: I think your right ;) Thanks for reviewing

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