Date: 10/12/15 04:37 pm Title: Dinnertime
This really is dayum creepy!!! Tom's deadly bonkers. Such a tragedy for Bill. I like creepy stories and yours rank a good number on the creepy list. :)
Date: 07/31/10 02:36 am Title: Dinnertime
At the end of the story , I felt a tear go down my face. It was so beautiful . I want to write now... this inspired me.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks a lot! I'm so glad you could see some beauty in it. And I am REALLY happy that you got inspired. :')
Date: 07/30/10 08:58 pm Title: Dinnertime
wow. this made me sick to my stomach and it made me cry. Sweet dear lord... that was amazingly written. I almost sympathize with Tom. Well done.
Author's Response: OMG, thank you so much! :D
Date: 07/05/10 11:13 pm Title: Dinnertime
IDKY I clicked this story, I think I'm insane. I was worried about what Tom was going to do as far as eating Bill. I was worried about hunks of dismembered Bill scattered through the kitchen. I'm happy it was just his heart and that Bill was pretty whole and "unharmed" for lack of a better word. I've never read another story on this site that involves cannibalism but it was well written even if it wasn't my cup of tea. I guess I don't like to think of Tom as crazy and eating his brother's heart. But like I said it was written well.
Author's Response: To be honest, I don't know if I would click this story, because cannibalism has never been my cup of tea either, but I love challenges, so I had to try it out. I'm very thankful that you read and reviewed. And thank you for the kind words.
Date: 07/04/10 06:46 pm Title: Dinnertime
Oh my gosh so creepy and well done and augh I'm shiveringg .________.
all in all.
amazinggggggggg
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Author's Response: Thank you very much! :')
Date: 06/28/10 12:07 am Title: Dinnertime
Poor Bill...
It was really gross, and I don't like reading about people being eaten, but it was intresting.
Author's Response: That makes two of us. I've never read anything like it, and I cringe by the thought. But I couldn't help but write it. It's was challenging in a way I liked.
Date: 06/13/10 08:36 pm Title: Dinnertime
It's freaky amazing !!! Did Tom die too?? :/
Author's Response: Thank you! Nah, I don't think so. Not physically anyway. He probably got locked in somewhere. But he's united with Bill forever now, so he doesn't care.
Date: 04/29/10 03:49 pm Title: Dinnertime
YOU'RE CRAZY!
But I like it. I love how this story is so completely different from the stories you wrote a few years ago. You're so much more original now! I mean, how did you come up with this?
No, wait, I don't want to know. You just keep your mind to yourself and write some more awesome stories. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I know, everything I write is much darker now. But I'm working on something that I started a few years back. Re-writing it and stuff. Good with some variation. :D
Date: 04/28/10 11:41 pm Title: Dinnertime
That was interesting. I strangely loved it. ;D
Now Tom has two hearts..
lovely :)
The torture was complete love! :D
You can't write a great story without merciless abuse. :D
that was great.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. (:
Date: 04/20/10 09:03 am Title: Dinnertime
i dont think i have ever been so compleatly and utterly horrified in my life O_O
this story plain scared the shit outa me. but i do admite if i was into the whole 'eating people' thing i would of very much liked the story.
its not that it was a bad story but it scared me a lot LOL. but yes it was written well and it shows you put lots of thought into it.
you must have a very good imagination to think about and be able to write such things.
i must say good job. i had a friend who also wanted to write a story like this about the twins but it was bill eating tom LOL. but she was to scared to write it and read peoples responses.
even tho this isnt my type of story i very much injoyed reading and and i hope you keep up with the good work :)
Author's Response: I was actually a bit scared myself, because this is not my genre at all. I've always written fluffy stories, often with happy endings. I wanted to try something new, and this was what I ended up with.
Thanks for all the nice words. I've been thinking about this for a while now, but I've never really felt like actually writing it. It's kinda creepy. xD
Date: 04/20/10 07:50 am Title: Dinnertime
OH MY FUCKING GOD! THAT WAS PURE BRILLIANCE. I NEVER THOUGHT THAT SOMEONE WILL WRITE ABOUT THIS. EVEN THOUGH IT'S KIND OF GROSS... IT'S STILL BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! SO FUCKING BEAUTIFUL!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm really thankful you can see the beauty in it, even though it's absolutely gross and sick.
Date: 04/20/10 02:03 am Title: Dinnertime
ohhmybill!! pliss don't write thingss like thiss...i cant stop cryingg..i just cant imagine bill dead :'[
Author's Response: I'm sorry? I just couldn't help myself!
Date: 04/19/10 11:42 pm Title: Dinnertime
Welp..... That was..... Intresting. Different, but intresting. In a strange way I did like it..
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad. (:
Date: 04/19/10 11:03 pm Title: Dinnertime
Cannibalism is a warning now? D:
Anyway. Because I'm a sick fuck, I clicked this even though I've been pretty much traumatized by Jeffrey Dahmer and hallucinating stuff and the like. And I really liked it. There was one instance where you said 'inhuman' and I think it would be better changed to 'unhuman' because inhuman seems to carry a bad sound, but that's all your choice.
It's so gruesome and bloody and disgusting. I love it. I kind of wish he'd eaten more of Bill but that's just me because I'm disgusting xD
Author's Response: I think it became one right about now. I didn't put it there, so I guess it had to be added. But I think people should be warned before reading such.
I was searching for quite a while after a better word, actually. But English is not my native language, and I struggle a bit with writing in it. I didn't want to use either of those, but I felt like I had to, so I just took one.
I guess, in the original, the one I never wrote down, but thought about for a long while, Tom put Bill in the freezer and had him for dinner for a week, but I figured it would be too much, and Tom wanted Bill to look good, or something. He didn't want to ruin him by cutting off his legs and arms. xD
Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 04/19/10 10:23 pm Title: Dinnertime
Whoa that was so gruesome. Not my thing but a good story still *shudders and gags*
Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for reading, even though it's not your thing.