Date: 05/10/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
This is going to be very interesting.have fun,diva but cute Bill
Date: 05/10/10 12:52 am Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
honestly i dont really like them all together. i want bill with tom. and i want more about how the book is going. thanks for not ending it yet. =)
Date: 05/09/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
omfg MORE PLZ. I RLY WISH IT WOULD JUST BE BILL AND TOM IN THE END :)
Date: 05/09/10 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
You know? I like your story, is pretty twisted the way they act around each other but I couldn't see it more natural
Date: 05/08/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
oh my god!!!!! epicnessssssss!!!! okay I'm gonna go back to asking for Jon... gimme???
but it's really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -flail-
Date: 05/08/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
They are so good at keeping Bill off track, lol. VERY SLICK, YOU GUYS. VERY SLICK. XD
And no, we STILL don't know, but at this point, does it really matter? LOL
It was good though, even if you were iffy about the humor. I think it worked here though, because like you said before, everything else before had been so serious. But it shows us how comfortable they are with each other, even if Tom in the new kid in the equation.
I LAUGHED at Bill's inner monologue, because he's just so witty and sarcastic and so cute when he's ranting about things to himself.
Sadly, none of them believe him. XD
But they are still a great dynamic that's just so plain fascinating to see.
I love it! XD
And really, do I need to keep repeating how much I love these excerpts? Nah, you know I do. XD
Date: 05/08/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
It was perfect! I love this Bill, he's made of win. And I also love how Bu and Jon (and now Tom, as well) keep him grounded and happy. I'm glad there's going to be more, I'll be looking forward to it!
Date: 05/08/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 13: Explanations, Deviating and Just Plain Defiance
oh this chapter made me laugh so hard...poor Bill....suffering through all that teasing. LOL. looking forward to more!
Date: 05/05/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
YES. YES. HELL TO THE FUCK YES.
And sorry it took so long, was RPing xD ANd coming home from Spain lol
Date: 05/05/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
wah!!!!! I'm reading this via my cp ang I almost fell off my bed.. -I'm lazy- wtf????? You lucky bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -flail- oh my god! can Bill be any luckier? -even if he IS the scarlet woman or man for that mater- -screams- holy fucking kaulitz shelly!!!!!!!!!!!! screw asking for jon I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -nosebleed-
Date: 05/05/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
Love it! lmao at the way Bill acts around this three guys XD
Date: 05/05/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
i sort of feel bad for bill though. i think his trying to have boundaries is a good thing, and its not cool they are doing this to him. even though i want bill and tom back together, tom has a wife at home, and he should deal with that situation first.
Date: 05/04/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
okay... a four-some
Author's Response: LOL. it happens. quite often, actually. xD But I haven't decided if a foursome is the actual relationship that will stand, when the fic ends.
Date: 05/04/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
Aw...progress...finally...and i know how little kids are, so good luck on escaping.
Date: 05/04/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
These three would be the death of him. Or something akin to death.
Heehee, quite probably, but what a way to go! I so love the tidbits with Bill's memoir, but I also love how thrown out of the loop Bill was with what Bu and Tom did. And they kissed! I loved that Bill couldn't say no once Tom kissed him, which was Bu's evil plan all along, I suspect.
Thanks for the update! I so needed something like this to take my mind off RL for a bit.
Date: 05/04/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
* pouts
sitting in a corner with my arms crossed sulking cuz there isn't another chap to read yet.
Seriously though. I am enjoying your story. The writing style is different to a lot of what i read and i like it.
Author's Response: *pouts back* hahaha. xD there's more up now! I'm glad you're enjoying it. everyone keeps mentioning my writing style, and I'm like HOW IS IT DIFFERENT? xD
Date: 05/04/10 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
*________________________________________*
Just name how many babies you want, and I will make sure I'm in top shape.
*JAW DROPS*
*READS AGAIN*
*WHIMPERS*
*KEEPS READING*
*BITES LIP*
*SQUEALS*
*RE-READS AGAIN*
I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT!!!!!
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
THAT'S HOT! NNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*WANTS TO HUMP SCREEN BUT JUST READS IT ONE MORE TIME*
*IS GRINNING LIKE A LOON*
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BABY I LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: hahahaha *kiss you* calm down. more sexy is gonna happen. I promise. don't die on me now xD
Date: 05/04/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 10: Wanting Something Not Offered.
He let his words stew in Bill's (if it's Bill talking then this name should be tom. why would bill let bill's word's stew in bill's head?) brain, and evilly nudged Jon with his foot, indicating that he still wanted his foot massage.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just caught that now xP. I don't have a beta for this since my 3 betas are all grappling with my fics that are 50,000 words (or more) and are complete (plus, I like posting this as soon as I'm finished writing it and I don't catch all of my own errors), so thank you a lot. ^_^ I probably would've have noticed until I sent the entire thing to beta once one of my betas aren't smothered by my other fics xD
Date: 05/04/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
You had to throw some Bushido/Tom in there, didn't you? Now I'm rooting for them! Bill can go be happy with Jon, and Tom can stay with Bu. Perfect solution, right there.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHHAA. YES I DID. xD It just popped up out of nowhere. and it was nice and hot xD at least in my mind. xD
Date: 05/04/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprises, Surprises, (Goddamn) Surprises.
Ummmm wow i'm totally speechless, I like it though kinda kinky. Only one thing bothers me, I was wondering why couldn't Patty be beautiful, why did she have to look like a dog? lol
Oh and as a response to your response, I think its sadder that there are millions of people out there who don't love themselves. How can you give someone something that you can't even give yourself. Sorry i'm a social work and psychology major and I believe that in the road to loving someone else you have to love yourself or you'll lose who you are. I'm sorry I always write some much, I just love talking with someone who believes differently then me, I find it very intriguing.
Author's Response: Haha, speechless is good from time to time. So is kinky. xD And Patty is beautiful. I don't think I've ever mentioned her being ugly. Her having a pancake ass? yea. her giving out nasty farts? yea. xD
And no, I understand your thinking, because my shrink says the same thing about many of the girls in my age-range, but I think that maybe I feel differently because I've met people that don't completely love themselves, and still manage to love others. My best friend Felesha is like that. Her home-life stifles her self-love, but being around other people taught her that she still should love and respect others. Lol. And no, it's alright. I talk just as much as you do. xD If you ever want to talk more than on here, my contacts are on my author page ^_^