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Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/14 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I hope you will continue

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter 1

THIS IS THE KIND OF LOVE STORY I WANTED TO READ FROM START TO FINISH but why haven't you had any updates?. I feel like I was the one in the situation, the feelings, the emotions are very high. I hope you would continue your story and I really feel in love to this one and it does happened in the real life and the Melody character here is one hell of a genius how I wish I could have the mind
and intelligence like her when it comes in reality talk....BTW 5 stars for you and a great job...I hope to hear from this soon.....goodluck!

Reviewer: Lenica Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

When will the next chapter come out? :)

Reviewer: matve Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

en espaņol!! necesito el siguiente capitulo que por ti y solo por ti me he inscrito en este sitio!! please

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

omg!
i dont think i created so much tears!
god rom! stop being stubborn!

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

neko plz don't be late wih the next chapter

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter 2

i just can't wait for the last part!

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/10 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

heyyyyy ^_^ i'm waiting for the next chapter so don't be late plz
i liked the story so i want really to read the next ^^ 10x so much ^^

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/10 06:31 am Title: Chapter 2

this is so good but please tell me your noting going to torture the boys anymore , chapter 8or 10 is enough right , right.

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 2

*iz shocked* not cool for hurting them both some more

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh x diooos!!!! me enamore d esto! BIEN HECHO TOWI!!!! jajaja! creiist q se iba a solucionar todoo y t podria aceptar y casarte jajajaja!!! q belloo y dramaticoo! XD

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was sad and I felt for Bill BUT I believe Tom acted the way he did because he's was still hurt from Bills rejection. Please update soon! I just want them back together. Thank you! :)

Author's Response: You're right, he's still hurt and scared of Bill leaving again. And about Tom and Bill being together, don't worry! I can't tear them apart :3 I love them when they're together.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this is so sad. :( I really hope Bill finds Tom before he gets even sicker or something worse happens to him. I do understand why Tom is pushing Bill away, he doesn't want to be hurt again. I just hope they have a chance to make it right. Really liking this, despite the angst. :)



Author's Response: Yup! *gives cookie* rnWouldn't it be sort of stupid if Tom stop hating Bill just cuz he proposed? I say yes. I needed it to be more realistic. Most of the time people don't forgive that easy. But yes, Tom doesn't want to be hurt again. I'm glad your liking the story.

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1

and plz updated soon ^^

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 06:48 am Title: Chapter 2

yeah and another thing your banner is awsome ^^

Reviewer: Narcissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 06:20 am Title: Chapter 2

oh my god ><
i wish all the rhings would be ok between tom and bill

Author's Response: My stories always have happy endings, so don't worry about them, things will be ok in the end.

Reviewer: thogje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/29/10 04:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow when I read the proposal part I thought Tom was gonna say yes and everything would be fine, but in my head I was thinking "wonder how the story would been if Tom said no, and it would make Bill feel how Tom felt when he ran off", and right after I thought that thought I read the part were Tom threw the ring at him. It was so spooky because I thought it was only me thinking like that at the moment O.o
(Not sure if you understand what I mean, my english is really really bad) xD

Author's Response: I thought people might think Tom would give in when Bill propose, but... like hell he's gonna say yes. If I had done that I think it would be completely stupid and cheesy. I think it's more realistic if Tom just rejected Bill cuz he's still upset. If he had done the other way and be all happy with Bill I think it'll look like most of the romance movies endings. As you can see I understood!

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

*sniffs and wipes tears*
this was just sad and heartbreaking..and reallly well written..it made me cry (so well done)
*faves story*
please write more X

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And sorry if it makes me happy I made you cry. It means I succeded in making you guys feel Bill and Tom's pain.

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/10 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

i loved it!!!!!! i cried to at the end.
will, u make more, plz?
its really good.

Author's Response: Not that I like to make people cry, but yay! Next and final chapter is on the works. I just need time to find the right words to make it good :P

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was such a great cap!
I really hate Bill because he did such a cruel thing to Tom!

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much. *grins* I hate Bill too LOL

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