Date: 07/20/23 04:25 pm Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 05/27/18 08:55 am Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
this was a really good story!
i hope that there is a squeal to this
Date: 02/19/17 08:51 am Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”
I enjoyed reading this story very much. Thank you for the nice story.
Here one can see what love is capable of. It can totally change a person and here in this case to the positive. It was nice to read that Bill finally got his life under control and continues to be with Tom and even want to marry him.
Date: 10/11/16 01:17 pm Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
this was a really good story!!
Date: 10/05/14 12:20 am Title: Chapter 15- "What a perfect way to come out to your parents..."
I...oh my, god! How did you do this to me? I screamed-Like, really screamed for joy! This fic was/is amazing, and I read it in one day. Needless to say, I am currently dreaming the sequel, and trying to to jump up and down. This was amazing, I I know exactly how Tom feels about his parents/awkward I kinda did the same thing! Bill is a sweety, and it seemed so realistic. This makes my life sound awful (it's not) but I know how Bill was feeling about anorexia too. This was just...I really don't have english words to describe how much this meant to me. I believe there is a way to kind of get my meaning; Holy Shit!
Bushido...I can't believe this-His name is so ironic based on what I have heard about him. Jerk!
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this!
Date: 09/25/13 08:25 pm Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
I just realized that I NEVER reviewed this chapter before! :O Omg, how could I?!??!
Anyway, I did enjoy this story A LOT!! I've read it more than one time!
I love how it ended! I love how Bill 'found' himself and happiness, I truly did. He became such a positive and grateful person, and I just love that! I love that he got all the help he deserved and that he's now "free" ^___^
I also love how their relationship turned out. So Tom wasn't out, right? Well, I have to say I laughed so hard when his parents caught them in bed! So he was FORCED to come out, somehow... Haha. He didn't get the chance to sit them down and tell them himself and then maybe LATER introduce Bill. Haha, poor Tom! Well,at least they accepted him and liked Bill, so that's good! ^^
Btw, the sex scene WAS SO HOT! *___* You literally fried meh braaainz!!!! Fuck, good smut!!!
I loved the ending. They're getting married, and they've been together for years, and their dancing and just ugh! ^___^ I love stories like these, they have it all! Well-rounded characters, a certain amount of drama, sexiness, teasing, more drama, confessions, redemptions and THEN THE SEX AND THE HAPPY ENDINGS! ^__^
This story is amazing! Thank you for writing it! I'll probably never stop reading it! NEVAAAH
Date: 09/14/13 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1- "You ruined my life!"
I was eeally looking up to read this story whwn I read the summary, but I have to say that I have a feeling you have no idea what parenthood is like. Im not a mom, but I know that everything comes after your kid. Your kid comes first and not your love life, not to mention lying to your kid and face them with a new forced reality when you know it's a bad idea. Gordon is an asshole for prefering his love life over his kid, no matter what. If he wanted to have a girlfriend so much and he knew Bill would hate any girlfriend, he shouldve understood that Bill is probably feeling that this woman would try to replace his mother. He shouldve took Bill to a shrink to help him get over her death, not work behind his back and lie to him and fafe him to a new betrayed reality. Really, you made Gordon the worst father ever... and Im coming frim a family that my parents are divorced and my dad has a wife and two kids from her previous marriage, so I know what Im talking about.
Date: 09/14/13 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1- "You ruined my life!"
I was eeally looking up to read this story whwn I read the summary, but I have to say that I have a feeling you have no idea what parenthood is like. Im not a mom, but I know that everything comes after your kid. Your kid comes first and not your love life, not to mention lying to your kid and face them with a new forced reality when you know it's a bad idea. Gordon is an asshole for prefering his love life over his kid, no matter what. If he wanted to have a girlfriend so much and he knew Bill would hate any girlfriend, he shouldve understood that Bill is probably feeling that this woman would try to replace his mother. He shouldve took Bill to a shrink to help him get over her death, not work behind his back and lie to him and fafe him to a new betrayed reality. Really, you made Gordon the worst father ever... and Im coming frim a family that my parents are divorced and my dad has a wife and two kids from her previous marriage, so I know what Im talking about.
Date: 05/13/12 05:43 pm Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
Aw, i love this fic, good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 05/13/12 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 16- "This is how it should have always been."
“Ohh, my new Cosmo!”
omg, pissing myself. Billa gets distracted easily ^^
Date: 03/28/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 2- "Bite me blondie."
It seems interesting... but I can't get past the grammatical errors. There are a LOT of them. You keep using past tense verbs and present tense adjectives and adverbs. You can't do that. You have to pick whether you're writing in past or present tense, and stick to it. Anyway, I'm sorry that I wont be reading further, because this seems interesting, but I simply can't get past the errors. Sorry =/
Author's Response: That's nice
Date: 01/29/12 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 4- "It’s not my fault you dyed your hair purple."
Wow, I was actually terrified for Andi. I thought Bill was going to kill him, or beat him down. Jeez. I'm die hard in love with Bill in this story, though. Thanks for the read. On to the next chapter. (:
Date: 08/03/11 06:58 am Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
So adorable and fantastic pacing. Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 05/18/11 06:36 am Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
Aww, this was fabulous! Honestly, though, I thought it could have ended with ch15 being the last chapter, and ch16 being the epilogue, but it's alright.
Lol, I'm also extremely cringing at Bill and Tom getting married so young, with neither having played the field and gotten experience with different people, but that's a personal preference.
The story was excellent and not cliche.
Author's Response: Thank you! And now that I look back on it, I kind of agree about the chapter 16 could of been the end. But I was young and wanted the sappy proposal ending, haha.
Date: 04/06/11 05:45 pm Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”
I really liked it! :D I read the whole fic today! So I had a very meaningful day xD Drama/Evil-Bill was very much fun! Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it! :D
Date: 04/06/11 03:10 am Title: Chapter 8- "The way I shop, it should be considered a sport!"
*sniffs* I feel so bad for Bill. I hope he'll heal soon. :)
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“Thanks Tom...” Bill whispered, trying to hide that fact that he was now blushing. What the hell is Tom doing to me...one minute I’m crying like a baby, the next minute I’m blushing like a little girl...this is not normal....maybe Toms magic! Yes that’s it! He has put me under a spell...that’s why I’m acting like this...That’s the only reasonable explanation... That's right Bill, Tom is a magician!! Haha, no, he's not, he just the kindest person on earth and you should hold onto him. :D ^^
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“It’s Bill...”
Of course it is...
That part was very funny! I love bits like that.. where someone says something so obvious or annoying, and then the other person replies like that XD It's funny xD
I don't think they should break up just because of Bill. They have to be a little selfish here. I know she's sad because she thinks she's lost Bill. But Bill can't decide who she's going out with and such xD She has to prioritate her own happiness XD But losing a friend because of it, sucks, it always does!
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“Yes!” Bill all but squealed. Both boys hearts were racing in that moment, they were experiencing something neither of them has ever felt before. Bill leaned in recapturing Tom’s lips, this time a little more hungrily. Bill gasped slightly, letting out a low moan, giving Tom the opportunity to slip his tongue into Bill’s mouth. That was very sweet of Tom :D :D :D I went all AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW when i read this part :D :D :D :D :D :D Yes! ^^ Bill's got it so bad for Tom... :D :D :D :D
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“Hey faggots, this is a family place, take that shit somewhere else!” A rather large man called from where he was sitting with his kids, and his wife, who was giving the two boys a disgusted look. Oh shut it, you braindeath moron! We all know that you secretly enjoy watching gay porn XD XD Why else would it bother him? I mean, really? XD
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Entering, on the other side of the coffee shop, was Tom...with his arm wrapped around Bill. Oh, oh oh! I wonder what's gonna happend NOW that they are "busted" !
Gosh, and I won't find out just yet, I have to leave for work now!! :/ I'll read it as soon as I come back from work XD
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dude, this is super great!! greatest story ive ever read so far XD I get so into it.. Haha. :D
Date: 04/06/11 02:41 am Title: Chapter 7- “Have I told you how much of an asshole you are lately?”
He-yooo! I'm finally back, and now I can continue reading this story. :3 Haha.
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“She fell for it.” Matt smirked.
“Great job babe.” She pulled Matt towards her, crushing their lips together. “This is going to be too good.” Britney smirked, as she pulled away from Matt. “Not only am I going to humiliate that loser, but I’m also getting back at that whore of a step brother of hers. No one fucks with me and gets away with it....” OMG OMG OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, SHE'S SO FUCKING EVIL! How is it possible? 0__0 I actually fell for it too xD I was soo happy for Natalie. Omg, what an idiot! I hate this Matt and this Britney whore! I hope they burn in the darkest and most painful hole in hell!
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“You know what Bill, fine...If you insist on being miserable and pushing everyone in your life away, than that is fine with me. You always complain about the other people in your life, saying how they’re ruining it, but guess what Bill...it’s you...it’s always been you.” Hate to tell you Bill, but that was nothing but the truth! :/ I feel so sorry for Bill! :/ Life hasn't been kind to him! Still, he doesn't exactly make things better by being a bitch. I still adore him though. I know he'll change haha. And evn a bitchy Bill is adorable. *hugs Bill*
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Andreas and Tom, together they are hilarious! XD Haha! I wonder what Alexia wants to tell Andreas, and i wonder what Bill wants to tell Tom :D I'm very excited :D
This is sooo good! It really gives me all the entertainment I need :D :D :D that's very good!
Date: 03/25/11 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 6- "This isn't real...it can't be..."
“Thanks, you do too.” Both teens gave each other another smile. They sat in a comfortable silence for a few minutes, before Bill decided to slip his hand into Tom’s open one. Tom gave it a small squeeze, causing Bill blush. Oh god, this made my belly jolt! It was so sweet! ^^
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Playing Tom like this might be harder than he thought... Playing Tom? :( NAww. Well, yeah that might be because Tom is such a sweetie, Bill, so sweet that you can't help but like him.. he's LOVABLE. ^^
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Awwwh, I feel sorry for Bill though.. He is missing his mom! *hugs him* I completely melted when I read this. Tom's so sweet. He actually listened to Bill, he hugged him, let him speak and made him feel safe! ^^ He's a wonderful guy and Bill shouldn't play him, he should just go for it all.. :D ^^ I know I would have done that! :D
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THEY KISSED. :D It made me breathless. They are both sexy, so of course the kiss must have been sexy? XD (gosh, can I get any lamer? XD)
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"This is all just revenge on Alexia and Andreas.... I just got caught up in the moment...this isn’t real...it can’t be... You might tell yourself that Bill, you might try convincing yourself that it's true, but I know that it isn't.. :D You LIKE Tom! ^^ You wanted it to be nothing but revenge, but you choose the wrong guy to play.. You're about to fall for him, duuh. *ruffles Bill's hair*. :D :D :D Awwwh. wonderful!
Author's Response: The kiss was absolutly sexy! lol. As is any imaginary kiss between those two *slips off into a daydream about them kissing* Thanks again for the lovely review!! I'm so happy you liked it, and hope you like where it goes from here :)
Date: 03/25/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 5- "I can’t believe I’m stuck here with you two all day.”
“And Bill...I don’t even know what to say. Ever since we lost your mother, your whole attitude changed. And I love you more than anything, but I can’t help but miss my sweet, kind, happy son, that you were when you were younger. I thought I was finally getting a part of that back this week, but it was all an act...I’m really disappointed in you Bill.” Bill was choking on sobs, at his father’s words. He never realized all these years how his attitude affected his father. Of course you haven't realized, Bill. Youve been too busy just.. being you, I guess. Not to mention you've been pretty selfish lately XD But I'm glad he's realizing this.. I know he probably won't change over night, but at least now he KNOWS... :)
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Oh, Andreas defended Bill. That was really nice of him. :) --
“...Oh by the way, when you referred to me as your ‘brother’ back there, yeah never do that again.” Bill said before turning and walking off. So much for the civil conversation. Oh Bill.. well, it was good while it lasted. :D At least Andreas got a "thank you" :D
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“No I mean it, you look really good... I mean your hair looks really good...I’m not saying you don’t look good though...cause you do...I, umm...” Now Tom was the one blushing. Could you have made yourself look like anymore of an idiot? Awwwww, Tom is one of those people who can't seem to find the right words when they are talking to someone they are 'crushing' on. :D that's soooo cute. :D
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Awh, I feel so sorry for Natalie. Those stupid bitches. -_-- gaaah. worst thing is that they are probably just doing that to natalie to make themselves feel better. that's typical. But Bill did defend her.. in one way... :)
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Andreas and Lexie, huh? Nice. Though, her lying to Bill wasn't exactly nice, but i understand her reason I really do. :P
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Oh.. he calls Tom. :D Yaaaaaay! :D
Did I tell you that this is freakin' AWESOME? because it is.
Author's Response: Holy review batman! lol. I appreciate all your words! And I think you may have mentioned this was awesome before, but I certainly don't mind hearing it again :P lol. Thanks for reviewing!! :D
Date: 03/25/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4- "It’s not my fault you dyed your hair purple."
Omg, HAHHHAHAH, I can't believe Bill did that to Andreas... he put hair dye in his shampoo.. and it was fucking purple.. omg thats hysterical!! hahahha! and omg andreas's revenge was epic too!! he put glue on Bill's comb.. omg hahaa! this is epic!! epic i tell you! And awh, there's something between Tom and Bill already, and they just met!
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The only one who couldn’t get back into the party mood was Tom. He couldn’t get Bill’s words out of his head. Bill said he had never wanted to see him again...and that hurt more than he wanted to admit. Naaaaw, poor Tom! He can be so sweet! Awh! *melts*
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What? He's reporting a party? *takes a deep breath* I guess.. I bet the best is yet to come though. :D Haha. this story is brilliant. YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR. :D
Author's Response: *overwhelmed by compliments* You have me blushing now, my goodness. Thank you so much for your lovely words! I am so happy you are liking this so much :)