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Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/13 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

This was good, but I never got people talking during sex. Maybe it's just me, but that isn't the time for a conversation lmao.

Reviewer: rosanegra Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/13 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

por favor las traducciones que sean de mejores

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/12 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

definitely crack pwp though thankfully not as violent as I was afraid it would be.

Reviewer: DXM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/12 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

Hot. Oh so hot... But, I think Tom should have been secretly taping it!

Reviewer: THAngelSonja Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

That's great i really like it.WELL DONE.

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/12 07:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

loved it!

Reviewer: happypills Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/12 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

OMFG most dirty porn story i ever read

Reviewer: ingrid42billionstars Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

NICE. I wonder what the bank's gonna think when they get two cum soaked checks. XD

Reviewer: rosanegra Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/11 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

la historia es bien hot,pero tiene errores de escritura

Reviewer: dkdemon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

Had to stop reading because of all the mistakes - might be a good idea to get a beta. I'm sure you've done your best but sometimes you need other people to look it over before you post.

Reviewer: tokiohotelprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

It was pretty hot, but I love that Bill's checks were shoved IN his face, and not in his face. lol.

Reviewer: kittikati Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

like i said before... WOW

Reviewer: kittikati Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

WOW...JUST WOW...THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY. WOW

Reviewer: tokiop Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

damn that was hot!!

Reviewer: azncutie9238 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

;D oooh weee that was some good fluff!

Reviewer: HadesBitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

LOL poor lil bill :D

Reviewer: LoveTeady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

This is so fucking violent,it's like watching a porn movie. I felt sorry for bill though

Reviewer: OutRAGme_982 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

I really enjoyed this. Straight (well maybe not so straight) and to the point. Just what I needed today, very good job.

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 Who doesn't do cum-shots

ouch haha and nice nice i liked it -favs-

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