Date: 10/02/13 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
TT.TT please update soon.I was so excited to go to the next chapter
Date: 02/04/13 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home
Oh my god I just spent my whole evening reading this! I couldn't stop! It's absolutely amazing and so hot! Please please pleaseeeee tell me you are going to finish it!
Date: 12/04/12 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home
hey:D i was wondering if you could let Sara be a nerd such that she spends most of the time catching up with her studies that Bill and Tom both crave her? good story btw!
Date: 04/06/12 03:01 am Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
please continue this story soon! lol
Date: 02/01/12 03:36 am Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
the guys? i must know who they are what they're going to do to her >:D
Date: 01/01/12 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
I love this!!
Please update soon!! =]
Date: 12/31/11 03:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
U have to cont. Please!!! I love ur story!
Date: 12/21/11 12:50 am Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
Oooooooh. I love where this is going.
Date: 11/28/11 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home
You Welcome xD
Bill and Tom always put the girlies in the right places :D
Date: 11/27/11 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
i luv this! so happy i found it:]
Date: 11/26/11 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
I just finished reading theis story for the first time from chapter 1-18.Non-stop.
This story reminds me of a movies feturing evil twins with the lone girl character. I love it! But I hope it doesn't turn out likethe movie where the girl turns all evil and decides to try and kill them of...or turns one twin against the other. In the last chapter I loved the fact that even though Sara is in love with Tom, the twins bond is still as strong. And for the record, bitch Bill is epically awesome.:) Another cool thing was the song at the start of each chapter, don't stop, you have an awesome taste in music. :P
Author's Response: Your review made my night! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and write your review. I love hearing everything you love about the story. I have watched almost every movie dealing with twins, creepy twins are the best! I have never seen that movie, do you know what its called? I am still not sure how it will end, I am very open to suggestions. I am open to suggestions for the entire story! I am glad you like the songs at each chapter, I wanted this to have its own soundtrack. Thanks again so much!rn-liveeverysecond
Date: 11/26/11 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 18 - No Air
Yeah an update! I love & miss this! Destroying their things may not have done much for her but I'm betting it made her feel good.
Date: 11/26/11 03:00 am Title: Chapter 17: Property
This story has everything a reader like me can ask for! Drama, Erotica, Pets, Juvenile, Celebrity & Pop Culture, Thrillers and Suspense, Romance, Horror, Humour xD Keep it up! I wanna read more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, I am glad it is the perfect recipe for you! We will try to be quicker with the updates. I guess we need someone like Bill or Tom around to put us in our place :) rn-liveeverysecond
Date: 07/25/11 02:34 am Title: Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home
I am OBSESSED with this!
Unbelievable! I love how the twins are so sadistic to her (call me a freak). In the beginning, they freaked me out but I liked it :)
Most defenitly looking forward to chapter 18 :D
Date: 06/28/11 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Beginning
Wow.... :O
Date: 06/28/11 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: Good Enough To Eat
The twins are CREEPY!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/23/11 09:11 am Title: Chapter 17: Property
hm with bill be a bitch I think its time for her to leave one way or another and bill and tomi I would love to for them to get In a bit of a fight. O I had a dream about this story last night and she up and left. She left a note saying she fell in love with bill and tom they got in a fight and she became a big shot model but then they found her and try to get everything back to the way it was. That would be kinda cool, still love it can't wait for the next part. :D
Date: 05/04/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 17: Property
i think shes sadistically in love with bill lol fun fun fun and bill hates her hmmm tough x
Date: 04/08/11 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 17: Property
Woooo an update. :D XX
Date: 04/06/11 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 17: Property
i love it!! b29; i cant wait to read more.