Date: 04/12/10 03:55 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I like their relationship here ! So sad but sweet to hear them talk about how they can't live if they are not together ... can't wait to read the next chapter !
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/12/10 03:10 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
it's amazing so far. I can't wait to see what happens. Well, I know what happens but, eh, whatever. I can't wait to see where you go with this. LOL.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for your review!
Date: 04/06/10 06:50 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 22nd 2010
Gah, I hate the way I feel right now! This was so beautiful, so sweet and tender. The way they behaved, that moment sitting on the bed tangled together. That sweet little moment with so, so much love in it. You managed to write the purest, sweetest love of all - twins love for each other. I loved the comforting, yet a bit sad way to do it.
And I know, I know what is going to happen the next day and it breaks my heart! I hate it! I feel emotional, sad and submissed to destiny. It's the way we know what is going to happen and it's just closer a minute by minute and I hope they can spend time together and this feels so perfect.
Very emotional, touching chapter. It crashed my heart in pieces with it's beauty and inevitable destiny. Take it as a compliment, because it is. You wrote them perfectly. I think the scene in a hotel room was one of the most beautiful ones in a long time.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I always look forward to your reviews. When I wrote this I had their moment in mind, trying to get it as good as possible. Thank you so, so much.
Date: 04/06/10 12:16 am Title: Marseille, France, March 22nd 2010
The fact that we know what happen the next day is killing me... so sad to see their last moments together, even if I still hope that Bill's not dead..
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Date: 04/01/10 03:32 pm Title: Nantes, France, March 21st 2010
WOW. For a second I thought Bill was a ghost and messing with Tom but then I noticed that date; two days before the shooting. This is wholey, fully, completely interesting. I've read a lot about the twins' relationship but never in a way like this. It's pretty indescribable, in a way. I can't wait to see the drama leading up. Well, actually, it already has. POST MORE! (Tomorrow I hope, when the site isn't all Bieber-fied. xD)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've posted more now, so I hope you'll enjoy it! ;)
Date: 03/30/10 12:48 am Title: Nantes, France, March 21st 2010
Another wonderful chapter. I love how you go into the complexities of the relationship between Bill and Tom. Also, your anecdote of the twins was quite informative. It showed their personal life beautifully without going into too much detail so the reader has a better understanding of their relationship. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoy reading what you love about this chapter, it helps me a lot!
Date: 03/30/10 12:03 am Title: Nantes, France, March 21st 2010
I love Bill's reasoning for naming Jasper! Jasper is my favorite Twilight character... Plus Jackson Rathbone is totally cute!!!
I really do like this story so far..
Author's Response: Hahah, I found it fun and it will come back, I am sure. Thank you!
Date: 03/29/10 08:45 pm Title: Nantes, France, March 21st 2010
First... I didn't have time to read the first chapter, when you wrote it, because I wanted to concentrate on it, so I read it now and review both. I was very curious (and scared) to read it, because I played with the idea of one or both of the twins getting shot on stage some time ago myself. I wanted to write a fic about it, but eventually it never happened, so I was curious to read how you did it.
I think you've done a great job and your describtion of things happening seem to be very realistic. It's like living those moments with them. Waiting for the shooting was torturing... you wrote everything so clearly, slowly and I just had to read and wait it to happen. Very, very sad thing.
Aside that you are building an interesting and bittersweet connection between the twins. All those arguments and mood swings, love and avoiding. And most of all; separation. If not physical, then mental. Oh God, the part when Tom was holding Bill and whispered him to talk to him, because he couldn't reach it by himself tore my heart out of my chest!
In overall very touching, realistic and beautiful fic. I love the way this is going on on a present day. And as sad and terrible as it is, I wanted to read Bill getting shot on stage, because I wanted to feel the pain it would cause in me.
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I love how you take time to tell me what you like and find interesting, I do really appriciate it. I've always wanted to read a story where one twin is killed, especially on a concert. But, when no one seemed to write it, I thought I should write one myself, since I wanted to try out how I would manage to go through with it, if that makes any sense. But, again, thank you so, so much for your review!
Date: 03/29/10 07:40 pm Title: Nantes, France, March 21st 2010
That was intense ! Bill shouldn't hide something from Tom ever... :(
I like how you came back in time to explain what happened before the tragic event... can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It will be more intense, I'm sure. Thank you!
Date: 03/28/10 10:54 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
ohhh please please please tell me he is alive. i odnt think i can handle ot of hes dead! *cries* such an amazingly written story btw! ohhh he better be alie missy.!
Author's Response: Well, you have to see then! Thank you so much.
Date: 03/28/10 06:36 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
this is freakin' painful
why did you do it?
update ASAP please, love
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I wanted to do a story like this, so here it is. Update will be posted soon!
Date: 03/24/10 12:05 am Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I like this, even though Bill got shot...
guess what? I turned 21 today, so it's my birthday too....
Author's Response: Thank you. Oh, happy birthday to you too! Hope you had a great day.