Date: 04/26/10 02:58 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
OMg .... my heart was beating so fast while reading this chapter... that's why I don't read major death character fic... it's way to sad, a twin should never been left alone :( It was so well written tho, really really sad...
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Date: 04/25/10 12:54 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
ok... that is about the wierdest interview ever... What was up with him??
Author's Response: I know, I had to make it weird so the twins would be uncomfortable. This might be used for later chapters! Thank you for your review!
Date: 04/25/10 12:33 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 22nd 2010
Aww... This is cute... Sorry it took so long for me to return to your story, Ive been busy..
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't worry, I just appreciate you coming back!
Date: 04/24/10 05:16 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
I don't have much to say, but.. wow.
So depressing but lovely. Poor Tom. :
Mmf, I loved it. Very emotional. I can't move my fingers now...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughts, really.
Date: 04/24/10 02:06 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
Oh god, this story is so beautiful. I love it, can't wait for more! please update soon: 3
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/24/10 12:46 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
wow, this is really emotional for me to read. I lost my sister 2 years ago now. And what tom is going through, everything remind me so much of that. I sat for hours in the waitingroom just waiting for the doctors to come and tell us either if she was dead or not. You write it so well, so realistic. I was right in toms place. And my sister didnt survive, god i hope bill does. This story isnt real (luckily) but you could have fooled me, it seems so real cause your writing. Its hard to explain, but i did my best
Author's Response: Oh my, you made me cry with this review. I am so sorry for you and I am so grateful for your review. I'm overwhelmed with this review and your personal sight. I appreciate it so much.
Date: 04/24/10 12:00 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
Wow, that was intense, you really succeed in making me feel all of Tom’s pain when he was waiting, not knowing if his twin was still alive. It was so sad...
So weird to read some French when I’m used to read in English, loved it ! And no mistake at all, that’s rare in English fics... lol
Of course Bill can do it ! Oh god, can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Well, I have to thank my beta and her awesome French skills with that too. ;)
Date: 04/24/10 09:44 am Title: Marseille, France, March 24th 2010
this is good. damn good.
BUT, there's still this major character death warning.
Bill has to survive, hey. You can't go and kill one of them like that, i won't allow you toooooo ._.
Is the story going to get even darker than this in the following chapters?
I want to be psychologically READY D:
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know, and you've probably already read the next chapter so you know what I did. I'm sorry for not telling you earlier! or warning you more.
Date: 04/15/10 07:59 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
God, this is painful to read. This is killing me... But in a good way amd by that I mean that if a fic manages to touch my heart, it is working as it is supposed to work.
Very beautiful sex scene. Thank you for writing their (assumingly) last sex so sweet and warm. It's like you wrote; almost perfect morning. It aches my heart to know, that...
But we'll keep going, right? I prepare myself for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for those words, as I said, I love your reviews. Thank you for that, I felt the sex scene was a bit off, but I always feel it like that with planned scenes. It was hard at some points, since I can feel myself getting lost in what I write, and then knowing that they go from loving to being seperated. Yes, we'll have to keep going.
Date: 04/14/10 02:23 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
*_* You know, I think that's what my face looks like the whole time I'm reading. My eyes magically turn into asterisks and my lips become a straight line.
Bill and Tom's relationship here is so misunderstood. And you're right, we are back at the beginning which is terribly sad. Time for the future or better said, the aftermath.
Author's Response: Aww, that can't be comfortable! Haha. Yes, I've tried to make it as confusing and misunderstood for both twins, I'm hoping that it didn't become too much in some places. It left me a bit confused at some points too, even. There is such a long road left through their aftermath..
Date: 04/14/10 02:03 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 22nd 2010
This is just depressing. I'm sure all of the readers understand the big heart-sinker of their next day. If only they knew and cherished... This is so beautiful. *_*
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!
Date: 04/12/10 07:17 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
It's remarkable all this has happened and Bill dies just like that...
If I were to right now, reread chapter one I'm sure I'd cry. :P :/
I'm looking forward until this gets back to the present...
Author's Response: Yes, I wanted you all to read everything that goes on and then Bill is taken away like that. It makes Tom's life a bit more troublesome. And I've always liked drama! Haha. Thank you for your review!
Date: 04/12/10 05:20 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
This was a gorgeous chapter. I love the dynamic between the twins and I love how they defend themselves during the interview. Nobody questions why the Olsen twins still live together, so why should they question Bill and Tom?
Author's Response: Thank you, and that is so true, why should they be questioned because they are so close? Thank you for your review!