Date: 03/24/10 09:08 pm Title: 1. One
that was good
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/23/10 12:25 am Title: 1. One
This was alright, not great, I felt like there were some holes, and I felt that the ending when they got back together was kinda anticlimactic and missing something, but it was a good start, and there's something appealing about your writing (good grammar for one). Sorry if you think I'm being a little harsh, I'm trying to be constructive, I swear.
Author's Response: No worries, hun! I totally felt weird at writing this! To be honest I just started writing with a totally different idea and then turned into this...strange thingy! I know it's missing lots of things but I just couldn't came up with something because I don't know! xD But thanks for your words! :D
Date: 03/22/10 12:16 am Title: 1. One
awwww sooo beautiful!!! XD
Author's Response: Yes!! Who?? xD :P Thanks!!
Date: 03/18/10 02:31 pm Title: 1. One
this was your first time writing something like this? wow m impressed :D
Author's Response: Thank you! *glomps you*
Date: 03/18/10 01:04 pm Title: 1. One
oooh i loved it. great story.. i love your stories, seriously :D
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! *hugs* This was weird for me to write so I appreciate a LOT the positive feedback! You've made my day! n.n